This is quite beautiful, utterly enchanting. It has a dreamlike quality that will echo in my mind for a long time.The first stanza's images are arresting - cold and warm juxtaposed so effortlessly - while the second stanza's allusions to the cosmos and the divine make me hear music. The third stanza showers a radiant smile over your beloved.

Your special someone is a particularly fortunate person to have you write like this.

That's lovely my friend ...

Beautiful imagery. I love the first verse describing the snowflakes drifting in the wind, melting in a warm hand. Comparing human emotions to elements found in nature is a favorite of mine.

I agree with Parker: the person you wrote it for is very lucky.

Lucky the guy that found you and made you write this. Such a love filled poem. Captivating the mood of someone reading this. Thanks to your Prince charming.

I'm struck by the images of flawed perfection - does this relate directly to the warm hand melting the snowflake. If so, then the hand is human, and thereby flawed, destroying the perfectly constructed structure given to us by nature.

Lots to think about here. Thanks for posting   

I'm struck by the images of flawed perfection - does this relate directly to the warm hand melting the snowflake. If so, then the hand is human, and thereby flawed, destroying the perfectly constructed structure given to us by nature.

 

Lots to think about here. Thanks for posting   

Senpai noticed. O>O yay