Alright, So I just posted the first chapter of my ongoing rewrite. What was once Failure of the Heart has morphed into Living in Surreality. Im very interested in what everybody will think of it. What I have gotten back from my circle (darker, more sinister name pending ) has been very encuraging including the following bit I got from my editor concerning My worries about chapter five.

Seriously an amazing story you have here! I can't wait to read more... you have this amazing ability to make everything seem surreal in the moment but then the emotion is very real.

I can't help but smile when ever I read that, plus she helped with the whole nameing problem with that one little compliment.

So Hugs to Viv

Thanks for editing and putting up with me

Now I hope the rest of you enjoy and send me a note letting me know, or if you dont shoot me a note and let me know whats wrong!

Steve

Well that was stupid! wrote this yesterday, forgot to publish... what can I say always a writer never a publisher...