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Busted chapter 21


TheZot

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[i'll warn that things get a bit unpleasant in this one. I can't judge how bad, relative to the norm for the genre since I don't usually read this sort of stuff]

 

Chris was speechless as Joe went into the room. Joe and Billy O'Malley being related wasn't anything that'd even occurred to him. The last names were different. Joe was slender while Billy was built like a fat biker. Joe was sophisticated and clever and attractive

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Lucy Kemnitzer

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Well, I'm so sensitive to this kind of thing that I normally won't go see action movies unless they're really political or something and then I usually send my children to see them first so they can tell me whether I can stand them. But this was not horrible to read, even though it described a horrible action. That's because 1) the telling was second-hand and more importantly 2) the emphasis is on the aftermath and the people who are left behind, not on the mechanics of the deed. Even though there are a lot of details.

 

In other words, you did it right.

canundra

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Ditto ^^ ^_^

 

Fuzzy? I'm liking the supernatural part of this story. That is, if I'm not mistaking something normal for something supernatural.

 

Keep 'em coming :D

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