steph Posted May 15, 2008 Posted May 15, 2008 Comsie, what a wonderful chapter! I haven't read all of Billy Chase. I kinda started a couple months ago just reading the new chapters. It's very easy to figure out what's going on! But this latest chapter #144, I totally enjoyed myself with this one! He was just so funny, the way he'd write "then he was all..." and "I was like..." Nice job! I could really tell that he was frustrated and retelling a story to his diary. So, is Billy going to find his rabbit cooking on the stove at home?
Comsie Posted May 16, 2008 Posted May 16, 2008 Hehehe, thank you! And that actually comes from a lot of the teenagers that come into the store where I work all the time. Once we start talking, thats exactly how it sounds, hehehe. I thought it would be cool to make that Billy's specific way of talking while writing in his journal. I love it. I'm not sure where you started reading from, but I hope you enjoy the rest from here.
Trackie Posted June 13, 2008 Posted June 13, 2008 (edited) Great job on 146, I'm glad Billy got to see Branden again...and some nice foreshadowing with him home alone for 2 days.... ;D Thanks! Edited June 13, 2008 by Trackie
steph Posted June 13, 2008 Author Posted June 13, 2008 (edited) and some nice foreshadowing with him home alone for 2 days.... ;D no kidding! talk about a cliffhanger! Edited June 13, 2008 by steph291
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