[dkstories] DO Redux Ch26

[Masked Monkey]

Thanks Dan ... I really liked the wrestling scene. I remebered it was coming and was anxiously waiting for it .

 

I like that Brian is still a virgin because, despite no little Brian's to take care of , he still gets to be all Davey's. To bad he is hangin' out with the 'wrong' crowd, but what did we expect.

 

Oh, and Trebs, the baseball uniform stuff was supposed to motivate Dan for Service, not this.

 

:king: Snow Dog the Domaholic Danderthal

 

P.S. I have a lot more to say, but I can wait until lurker says something that I can argue with so I am more animated.

[SamadIdris]

Chapter 25

 

Argh, it's moving so slowly. day by day chronological progress is really killing me.

 

having said that, it seems that sean should not be allowed to get drunk.

 

he'll just go spouting drunken truths again. once was okay, but everytime?

 

 

 

Chapter 26

 

Good to see that things with brian is developing nicely. no doubt that brian and jones will be together again. yay.

Now, just a matter of jones helping brian through the difficult times of accepting himself, and fall in love during the process.

just like in the second timeline, where they fell in love during times of adversity with brian's uncle.

 

As for Sean, I really hope that things can work out between him and Brandon. So far, quite difficult to tell how things will turn out.

 

Kudos to Dan for taking the time to finish another chapter for us, even though he is having more important things in his life now- namely Robert.

 

But there is one disturbing development in this story-

The possibility of the recreation of the time machine.

 

If it was up to me, this MUST NOT BE DONE.

It's going to bring more harm than good if it is allowed to happen again.

 

The whole REDUX happened because the chinese managed to capture the time machine. Otherwise, Jones wouldn't have to go through all this crap again.

 

Sean should know better, than to recreate another machine.

 

Because so long as a time machine exist, there is a possibility (no matter how remote), that evil elements can get their hands on this technology, and wreck havoc again.

 

Such an incident must be prevented at all costs.