Box of Chocolates

[Ieshwar]

Hello!

 

Box of Chocolates can be found here.

 

Summary: Jase receives a box of chocolates and as always, the last chocolate proves to be the sweetest.

 

 

I'm looking forward to your opinion and comments! Please feel free to let me know what you liked and what you didn't like in the story.

 

Take care,

Ieshwar

[colinian]

I thoroughly enjoyed reading Chocolate, Ieshwar. The descriptions of Jase selecting which chocolate to pick next made me laugh out loud; that sounds exactly like me! I loved the ending; it's very sweet.

 

Colin

[Marco Polo]

Aw man, this made me tear up. In a good way.

 

I'm trying to find the right words here, so.... I loved it, from the chocolate-y goodness and superb descriptions to the sweetest ending.

 

I'll cut the accolades short and just say, this was a beautiful story.

 

_Marco

[Ieshwar]

I thoroughly enjoyed reading Chocolate, Ieshwar. The descriptions of Jase selecting which chocolate to pick next made me laugh out loud; that sounds exactly like me! I loved the ending; it's very sweet.

 

Colin

 

Thank you, Colin. I'm like that too! Glad that you enjoyed the story.

 

Aw man, this made me tear up. In a good way.

 

I'm trying to find the right words here, so.... I loved it, from the chocolate-y goodness and superb descriptions to the sweetest ending.

 

I'll cut the accolades short and just say, this was a beautiful story.

 

_Marco

 

Thank you! I didn't expect people to tear up with this story, but since, you say that it's in a good way, I think it's ok. I'm relieved that the descriptions worked. I was afraid that it might put the readers off.

 

Take care,

Ieshwar

[Conner]

...and the newest member of the Hopelessly Romantic Club is Ieshwar.

 

Sweet story, amazing ending.

[Ieshwar]

Oh, I get to be in a club. I always wanted to be in a club! too cool!

 

Thanks Conner! Glad that you liked the story.

 

Take care,

Ieshwar