[Skylights] Efiction reviews for Sparkling combustion

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Edited December 14, 2010 by Skylights

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As of 14 December 2010 at 12:22 A.M. Central Standard Time, the following reviews were in effect for Sparkling Combustion

 

Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: jhol7689

 

I loved this story it was awesome read it twice just for fun I hate when great stories end

Date: 09/30/2010 03:02 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: adamo

 

Such a beautiful and intriquing story. This and Loving Sam Lynch are two of my absolute favorite stories on gayauthors.

Lots of twists and turns that made for an very original, intense but charismatic and funny, sexy, sweet story.

The characters were wonderful and the writing superb.

Date: 07/24/2010 07:04 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 28 Reviewer: acht-acht

 

I loved the story. A little angsty and a little kinky, but not

overmuch. All of them were crazy but loveable kids. IMO the only flaw

was that you left Jeremy hanging in the breeze a little after he´s done

his purpose, and he was an intriguing character.

Cheers, Clara

 

Author's Response: Jeremy was left hanging because i'm writing his story seperately. That's coming soon.

Date: 03/26/2010 10:05 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 28 Reviewer: theQzone30

 

ok, not bad, not bad :-) now you just can't leave it like that. you HAVE to go on. it's such a great story. i can tell you're just itching to continue. i know i would be. there HAS to be more. PLEASE CONTINUE!!??!!!

p.s. i gave this a 9 for ALL the way through the story because i want it to go on :-) from here. to be continued???

 

Author's Response: I

don't HAVE to go on. There isn't anything left for me to say with

regards to Kyle and Ryan. I'm actually thoroughly glad to be done. There

is MORE but it's Jeremy's story. That's why i left that hanging. Thank

you for rating and it is TBC but jeremy's story is the next part.

Date: 03/24/2010 10:34 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 28 Reviewer: Caedus

 

Good ending, I really like the way you finished the whole Kyle/Ryan

arc of SC. A little disappointed at the lack of Jeremy in the

conclusion, maybe that means your considering a spin off?? I hope you

consider it because he seems to a more complex character with a TON of

issues (Which I think his friendship with Kyle only made worse). Love

your writing, it's been so fun reading SC and I can't wait to read your

newest project!

Date: 03/24/2010 06:37 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 28 Reviewer: Nephylim

 

Nice ending. But it's so sad that it's over. I have got to

know these two and am quite fond of them. Maybe a sequel one day? Or

something new? I like your writing very much and hope to see more posts

soon.

Date: 03/24/2010 03:08 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 28 Reviewer: mcnc1966

 

Well done! I'm so happy they ended up together after all the

strife. You've done incredibly well with this one and I'm excited to

read more of your work in the future!

Date: 03/24/2010 12:37 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 27 Reviewer: theQzone30

 

oops! something went wrong with the upload of chapters 27 and the epilog. i have no story on my screen to read the ending :-(

Date: 03/23/2010 11:40 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 26 Reviewer: acht-acht

 

Ah! The dialogue between Ryan and Kyle in the end is so

adorable. Love! Finally! And of course Kyle HAD to panic after he heard

what he´d wanted to hear for so long.

 

Author's Response: Of course:P

Date: 03/03/2010 03:57 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 26 Reviewer: mcnc1966

 

The story is wonderful as usual! As someone who's edited your work

before, I have to congratulate you on consistently catching errors.

Don't sweat the small stuff and keep up the great work! Can't wait to

see how it ends.

 

Author's Response: Thanks a lot Mc, means a lot

Date: 03/02/2010 08:30 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 26 Reviewer: Fastreader

 

Aw...they finally told each other they're in love with the other!!!Author's Response: yep

Date: 03/02/2010 08:01 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 26 Reviewer: taina1959

 

GRRRR!!!! Where thee hell is thee kiss!!! LOL! Well, at least

dumb ass Ryan finally admitted his feelings to Kyle! It's about damn

time! LOL I just wanna open a can of woop ass on the boy! LOL! This was

an intense chapter indeed!

 

Author's Response: XD. Haha, you make me laugh.

Date: 03/02/2010 06:04 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 26 Reviewer: Nephylim

 

Oh god. You had my heart in my mouth for most of that. Gods

they were awful but they were beautiful too. That ending was perfect.

I so don't not have feelings for this story ;

 

)Author's Response: Nephhhhh

i WASSSS Going to end it there but unfortunately that WASN'T the ending.

i wrote another chapter after because i felt it hadn't concluded everything. An epilogue and everything to boot!

read that and THEN tell me if it's perfect. I wasn't sure about whether to end at this point.

Date: 03/02/2010 03:47 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: lashrac

 

absolutely loving this, good going :Dread this through twice now, but UUUGGGH, such an evil cliffhanger to end on!can't wait for more!

 

Author's Response: Glad you like it and more is coming soon!

Date: 02/27/2010 11:36 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 25 Reviewer: taina1959

 

AHHHH!!! You left me here pulling my hair off!!!! You EVIL

ONE!!! LOL That was sooooo good girl!!! You better hurry up and feed me

the next chapter... PRONTO!!! Pretty Please?

 

Author's Response: Haha, awww! Well it was a good place to begin another longish chapter!:PP I'll put it up very soon don't worrrry

Date: 02/27/2010 07:01 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 25 Reviewer: Nephylim

 

Occasionally different tastes.. I like that phrase for some reason. So Kyle doesn't remember then... awww.

 

Author's Response: D: nopeee.

Date: 02/27/2010 04:53 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 24 Reviewer: Nephylim

 

Oh and me too, I llike it too. What an awesome ending. I like

Kyle drunk and I like Ryan honest and I'm glad Rob and Jeremy got

together because I really really liked Jeremy and if he couldn't have

Kyle I'm glad he found someone. What an awesome story. Thanks.

 

Author's Response: I like Kyle drunk too. Jeremy is a whore. believe me when i say that he's a long ways away from being alright.

Date: 02/21/2010 06:12 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 23 Reviewer: Nephylim

 

Well... as I am reviewing the whole thing again I have to say

that this is really an awesome story. It has more twists and turns than

a valley road and the characters charm even when they are doing things

you really don't care for.

Ryan is an absolute beast but I can't help but like him a lttle. And

as for Kyle although half the time I want to slap him I still empathise.

 

Author's Response: Haha, great description! It's almost over though.

Date: 02/21/2010 06:05 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: shatterheart

 

hi, I just wanted to say i loved your story from the beginning and it just gets better every chapter.Author's Response: thanks!!

Date: 02/20/2010 11:30 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: taina1959

 

Glad to see you posting the story once again... You already know how much I love it!!!Author's Response: :DD yep. thanks!!

Date: 02/20/2010 06:35 PM

Edited December 14, 2010 by Linxe Termoil

[Skylights]

yay.

 

gosh, linxe, since when did you become so helpful. <3

 

mind doing it for the other stories? as...my computer keeps failing in this regard. thanks if you can.

Edited December 17, 2010 by Skylights