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Title: Chapter 3: Kicked in the Libido

Reviewer: taina1959

 

 

And why in the world haven't you continued with such a great story? So it's

just Nephy and I commenting, so what? Don't let it die babe!!! I read your

comment on the Doctor/Lawyer thread and came searching for your story. I've been

breaking my head trying to figure out where I'd read it and couldn't even think

of who the writer was. I'm so glad you posted the name of the story!!! Please!

Please! Please! Continue it! I wanna know what happens with Jett and

Arrow!

Date: 10/19/2010 10:06 AM

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 3: Kicked in the Libido

Reviewer: Nephylim

 

 

This is definately now my favourite of your stories. you write so

vividly. I can see that appartment and, more distractingly, I can see

Jett's butt You are a mighty fine writer sir.Author's

Response:

Thank you.

Date: 10/09/2009 02:52 PM

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 2: The Preliminary Round

Reviewer: Nephylim

 

 

Living up to it's promise hun. Synchronicity it's called. Be

careful of what you wish for eh? I've been burned by that one too.

I'm thinking that maybe Jett should take a cold shower. I like the way

it's going... not to fast, not to slow... perfect rhythm. Nice one

Sam.Author's Response:

Thank you.

Date: 10/07/2009 01:47 PM

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 1: Mister Wonderful

Reviewer: taina1959

 

Good start to the story!! I love the way he carries himself. What does he

look like other than having a great bubble butt? I can see him walking on the

sidewalk carrying the box full of sandwiches swinging his hips in his tight

jeans and a silk shirt with long wide pointy sleeves, tall, thin, perfect

longish hair and a beautiful face. I hope Mr. Wonderful will notice him

now.Author's Response:

Thank you.

Date: 10/07/2009 07:50 AM

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 1: Mister Wonderful

Reviewer: Nephylim

 

I always leap and look, it's a habit I have no intention of breaking... well

at least not until it breaks me

This is very different for you, but very good nevertheless. i love your

descriptions, the way you describe what's inside as well as what't

outside. I love your wild crazy side, coming out in your writing but this

is less wild and more... grounded. Everyone needs to be grounded

sometimes. Loving it so far. Keep going but don't forget the rest of

them... you HAVE to tell me more about Avery and Pug and, of course Sam.

:)Author's Response:

Thank you.

Date: 10/06/2009 02:15 AM