[Corvus] Eleven Perfect Numbers (reviews)

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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: juliandarling

 

I really like this one... The ending felt ambiguous to me,

perhaps because I'm a shoddy close reader, but I liked it very much.

Well. I would have liked a more decisive statement of what he was going

to do, like is he going to New York with Scott or not? That sort of

thing. Perhaps you can tell me what happened... Lol. Because you know

I'll just reread the ending over and over again, confused.Author's Response: Hey,

thanks for the review! The story has definitely got an ambiguous

ending. I like to think things will turn up for Mikolos and Scott, but

it's not something I've written. You can imagine it.

Date: 11/06/2008 01:22 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Duncan Ryder

 

A genuinely interesting story, uncomfortable, brave. Like a

flashlight into the kind of emptiness we deal with because we don't want

to admit it's there.

Date: 09/25/2008 08:26 PM