[Corvus] No Second Troy (reviews)

[corvus]

Title: Unexpected Guest Reviewer: jessiflash

 

So intriguing!

Loved the Albert Hammond reference.

Date: 08/17/2009 12:28 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Old and New Reviewer: David McLeod

 

John is, I think, about to find out how elastic is reality.

Corvus has included just enough science to provide the framework in

which we may be able to understand what has/is/will happen(ed)(ing).

(Humph; looks like we need a new grammar for this discussion.) Author's Response: w00t, I'm destroying syntax! Thanks for the review.

Date: 08/16/2009 09:41 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Old and New Reviewer: Procyon White

 

Yaay, Berryman is back, and with a face, too!!

You're really getting into it now -- your writing in this chapter

seemed effortless and, well, it was as close to perfect as it gets. I'm

wondering what's up with Harold and his mother and why his life is so

different from Harry's, and I so want to know what'll happen with

Ruthberg and all that... But most of all I want to read about Harry and

Berryman -- write, man, write!!Author's Response: The phantom -- demasked! dun dun dun...

Date: 08/14/2009 03:04 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Old and New Reviewer: Nephylim

 

Wow. it's getting deliciously complex. I am enjoying the story very much and the writing is detailed and flowing. A treasure.Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Date: 08/14/2009 11:47 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Doppelganger Reviewer: Nephylim

 

Wow. I know I do a lot of talking to myself but... talking to

yourself? Hehe. Very nice twist....I love paradox. This is extremely

interesting.

Date: 08/14/2009 11:41 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Old and New Reviewer: Rilbur

 

Another great chapter, though at this rate Berryman's (rather

silly) plan is going to go belly-up, and Harry is goign to be

'revealed'.Author's Response: The more we torture poor Harry, the funner the story will be, right?

Date: 08/14/2009 10:30 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Old and New Reviewer: ThePhallocrat

 

Fantastic!Author's Response: thanks!

Date: 08/14/2009 09:57 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Passing Time Reviewer: ThePhallocrat

 

The story continues to be surprising and utterly devoid of

cliche. I made several guesses as to where you were going with this idea

(how could I not?), and I'm happy to say that what you're doing is much

better than them all. I'm completely fascinated, and completely hooked.Author's Response: aww, thanks. We'll see if I can keep it up...

Date: 08/06/2009 05:00 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Passing Time Reviewer: shadowgod

 

"It was a beautiful day outside. The sun, leaning to the west, was dappling the campus."I

HATE YOU =P Seriously though, another great chapter. I like the subtle

differences, which to me explain that Harry is indeed in an alternate

universe rather than simply thrown back in time. Keep it up corvus, i

need more distractions from writing myself.Author's Response: I'm sorry, but that "I HATE YOU" made me feel very good. Glad I'm keeping you distracted.

Date: 08/05/2009 03:24 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Passing Time Reviewer: David McLeod

 

The (re) introduction of Gerald, and the introduction of John-of-the-Jupiter Hefenweizers add interesting depth to the story.Author's Response: John's

entrance was more atmosphere than plot. I wanted to give an idea of how

Harry had moved on but was still stuck. Oops, spoiler. But not a really

big one, glaube ich.

Date: 08/05/2009 06:35 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Doppelganger Reviewer: David McLeod

 

The story was fascinating before Chapter 3, but that chapter really "set the hook."Author's Response: thanks for that comment!

Date: 08/02/2009 11:51 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Doppelganger Reviewer: Rilbur

 

Another fun chapter wtih incipient plot twists galore.Author's Response: heh, you can bet your life on those plot twists. muahaha.

Date: 08/02/2009 10:22 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Travel Reviewer: Emulated

 

This story has me hooked! It's so original, and fresh, yet it

has a certain quality to it. Magical, mythical; I'm not sure. But I want

to find out what happens next. I want to read more!Good stuff! ;-)Author's Response: Aww, thanks.

Date: 07/28/2009 06:50 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Travel Reviewer: ThePhallocrat

 

Continues to intrigue and impress. Keep it coming!Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Do continue to drop reviews. :D

Date: 07/27/2009 06:10 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Travel Reviewer: Rilbur

 

I have no clue what Barryman is up to... but this is going somewhere, and I want to know where!Author's Response: You'll find out soon enough.

Date: 07/27/2009 02:41 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Unexpected Guest Reviewer: jessiflash

 

You've got me hooked as well! I'm excited and curious to know what has happened in the past, and see where this will lead to.Author's Response:

Date: 07/21/2009 01:19 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Unexpected Guest Reviewer: ThePhallocrat

 

I could stand to learn a lot from you about brevity and

simplicity. You rarely say more than you need, and yet eveything is full

of implications and meaning and you pack your work with honest,

touching details. You captured the minutiae of the awkward date

perfectly. The fantastic elements of the plot are so casually and

masterfully woven in, its a true pleasure to read. I cannot wait for

more of this story! Author's Response: Thanks for the

review! All that hand-sleighting is what makes writing interesting, so

I'm glad it's been more or less successful.

Date: 07/20/2009 01:52 PM

 

 

 

 

Title: Unexpected Guest Reviewer: DragonFire

 

Fascinating. This story has certainly captured my interest, and am itching to know more detail. Nicely done.Author's Response: Thanks. Glad I've gotten you all itched up.

Date: 07/20/2009 04:32 AM

 

 

 

 

Title: Unexpected Guest Reviewer: Rilbur

 

I'm hooked! I wanna see where this story goes!Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully the next update will come up soon.

Date: 07/19/2009 10:40 PM