Inferno by Arpeggio

[Linxe Termoil]

So, Arpeggio apparently at one point in time began writing a story and posted the first chapter up in EFiction. It was apparently re-discovered this weekend. After speaking with Arpeggio, I am pleased to find that he as agreed to at least attempt to continue with the story.

 

You can find the first chapter here. https://www.gayauthors.org/author/arpeggio under Inferno.

 

I must admit, when I first read the chapter tonight (at Red Lobster on my phone, no less), I was pleasantly surprised. The story made me curious as to where it was going. It also makes me want more.

 

There are very few authors or stories out there that evoke that sense of hunger in me, and when it did, it made me realize something I should have already known.

 

Lacey has talent. I knew that part. Talent as an artist. His drawings are crazy, and wonderful, and can make a person laugh.

 

But now, reading this first chapter, it makes me realize Lacey also has talent as a writer.

 

I can't wait for the next chapter. So, that being said, hurry up boy...

 

I am especially keen on seeing what happens when Sam meets his half-brother and step(?) sister for the first time.

 

Great job on a first chapter.

 

Linxe

[Johnathan Colourfield]

I remember reading this a while ago A incredibly well written chapter

 

I look forward to more

[Nephylim]

Read it read it read it. Did I mention you have to read it. Read it and review so that our Lacey knows that we love his story as much as we love him and will write write write

 

 

Although he might be a bit busy at the moment

 

 

[Arpeggio]

Lol aw, I'm really flattered, but yeah, it might be a week or so before I finish anything, having started school and moving, etc.

 

Thank you though.

Edited January 23, 2011 by Arpeggio

[Arpeggio]

Thanks to Linxe, I got the second chapter up. Really sorry for any formatting mistakes. I totally don't know how to edit and fix it. XD

[Linxe Termoil]

Another well written chapter. Things will be interesting to see what happens with mom later on down the road. i wonder if she's always been an alcoholic, or if she's 'grieving'. It's interesting to find that Jeff acts the role of a parent more then Sammy's own mother does.

 

Can't wait to see what happens with Cody either. I like the name Cody.

[MikeL]

Just read both chapters, Lacey. You have a very good start to the story and your writing style is different and refreshing. Keep at it.