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Some of you may have noticed a lot of editing activity in "Paternity," and that must seem odd to you since the story posted in 2012-13.  I went back and made some minor edits and also put in the standard leader lines for each segment, noting who was narrating, the date, and the place where the action begins.  With those in place, I made the font and color uniform. 

If you are reading this story and find any errors, be sure to let me know with a comment.

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Can you check chapters 83 and 84? It looks like there’s a chapter missing between them.

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On 10/21/2020 at 12:55 AM, Jim570 said:

And chapters 86 and 87 are the same text

 

On 10/21/2020 at 12:13 AM, Jim570 said:

Can you check chapters 83 and 84? It looks like there’s a chapter missing between them.

Thank you so much for pointing that out.  Got them fixed (I hope).

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