GFD: Children Of Sunset 13

[Comicality]

https://gayauthors.org/story/comicality/gfd-children-of-sunset/

What’s up, you guys? A brand new chapter of the gay teen vampire series, “GFD: Children Of Sunset” is up and ready to go! So check it out, and let me know what your thoughts are whenever you get a chance! Thanks so much for the feedback and support for this story! It means the world to me to know whether you all are enjoying it or not! So stick around for more! And I’ll seezya soon!

[WritersBlock404]

Usually, not a big western fan...but this has got me hooked! And I love how you try to work in a real western sound as well in the dialogue, the inner-thoughts and your writing style. It really sets the atmosphere, and I figure it must be quite a challenge to find a good balance in how strong to put that atmosphere in. Right now, I think you've got a perfect blend!

[Comicality]

On 6/2/2022 at 11:12 AM, WritersBlock404 said:

Usually, not a big western fan...but this has got me hooked! And I love how you try to work in a real western sound as well in the dialogue, the inner-thoughts and your writing style. It really sets the atmosphere, and I figure it must be quite a challenge to find a good balance in how strong to put that atmosphere in. Right now, I think you've got a perfect blend!

Thanks, dude!  

I do try to get into 'character' for a lot of these stories, and I try to have those voices in my head while writing both inner and outer dialogue, but it ca be a challenge sometimes. I'm so happy to hear that you liked it though! ((Hugz)) 

For other stuff like this, you might like "GFD: Piece Of The Action" and "GFD: Blade Of Shadows" as well! Along with additions to a bunch of others to start up again next week! Have fun!  

(SO much fun to be able to weave the stories together, now that I'm far enough along!)

https://gayauthors.org/story/comicality/gfd-blade-of-shadows/

https://gayauthors.org/story/comicality/gfd-piece-of-the-action/ 

 

 

 

 

Edited June 7, 2022 by Comicality