The Druid

[DarkShadow]

I have begun another story, and hope to read your opinions soon. You can PM me here or email me at gaywriter72@yahoo.com

 

Here is the link.

 

https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewstory.php?sid=177

 

Hope you like it!

[Graeme]

A very original concept, and one that's delivered well. Keep up the good work!

[mEis]

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Edited October 1, 2006 by mEis

[AFriendlyFace]

Awesome chapter!

 

I can't wait to find out what happens next with Ty!

 

I'm not sure why his uncles are leaving him alone. My guess is he has to go through some sort of "exposure to the outside world" period.

 

It definitely looks like Brian is going to be the love interest!

 

That storm scene was super-cool too!

 

I can't wait to read more!

Kevin

[DarkShadow]

Thank you all very much for your kind words! I have Chapter 2 submitted to my editor. It may be another day or two until I get it back. He was in the Hospital! He's recovering, so I hope for his better health in the near future.

 

It was a funny chapter for me. It took me 4 days to write 2 pages, and then in one night I wrote another 10. I had a lot of fun with it and I hope you enjoy it when it comes out. With any luck and the better health of my editor, I will have it out soon.

 

It's been mentioned that the prologue is a short regurgitation of chapter 1. Though, I think they said it much much kinder and eloquently. I seriously considered merging the two from the start, but I just thought too much was going on to put it into the same chapter.

 

For me, the first few pages and the first chapter of a book are what makes or breaks a following to a story. If I can't make it through the first chapter of someone's writing, then chances are, I won't bother to remember to go back to it. Then again, I'm senile, and I may refind the story and read it again. I wanted this one to grip people, give them a little intrigue, but without giving them reader's whiplash with too much information too fast.

 

Yesterday, I read ALL of comicalities story 'Savage Moon'. If you haven't read it yet, please do. I haven't commented on it yet, and I will probably start a thread about it when I finally motivate myself enough to go to work.

 

I've been doing a lot of reading lately, and it seems you all have mastered the 'sucking in of a body' for your stories. So, finally, thank you all for your kind words, and your wonderful stories. You give me something to aspire to.

 

Take care!