Camy Posted February 23, 2007 Author Posted February 23, 2007 Despite lots of harassing, Conner declined the offer. Did you offer to show him the pics of CJ cantering around the field in Spain, last summer? - you know, the one with his shiny new 'Goats Abroad' T-shirt, and the brass bell. All these heroes need new developments soon. After all, there's a guy lying in a gutter possibly hanging on to his life. Possibly? POSSIBLY? Hmm.
Camy Posted February 28, 2007 Author Posted February 28, 2007 Sorry, I couldn't resist writing another chapter. Chapter 10 - The Soup Thickens.
Bondwriter Posted February 28, 2007 Posted February 28, 2007 Camy, you're the guy to write thrillers. Nice chapter, it moves the plot forward quite a bit. Who's next? There's a guy called Brett who needs to be saved or buried. And chocolate to be found. And a thesaurus for Dubya? Nah!
Bondwriter Posted March 6, 2007 Posted March 6, 2007 Quite an eerie scene. It must be very distressing for poor Kevin to end up in the middle of this big mess. Jerry Springer doesn't sound like the best marriage counselor, to make an understatement. Fine scene, though.
Camy Posted March 6, 2007 Author Posted March 6, 2007 Love it! :jerry: I especially like the image of a charging Arnie, with white lace and roses
Camy Posted April 17, 2007 Author Posted April 17, 2007 Following on from Trevor and Nick's excellent chapters I'm afraid I couldn't help myself. Oops, Camy
Camy Posted April 17, 2007 Author Posted April 17, 2007 Brilliant, Kitty! My Sombrero is thoroughly doffed.
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