Bill W - The Sword of Kings

[Bill W]

I am beginning to post a revised version of The Sword of Kings, to correct some of the things people commented to me about. I would really like your input on this, as other changes could still be made. I will try to post it a chapter a week, so there isn't a long gap in between.

 

Please help me with this, especially those who read the first version, and let me know what you think.

 

Thanks,

Bill

[Myr]

I've posted chapters 1-5