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What a great joy, to have this new chapter!! I have been re reading this saga and hoping for this new chapter. Thanks for the early Thanksgiving present!!
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What should happen, Alex flies out to JJ and begs for forgiveness. A call is not going to do it. The two sleeping pills bother me. What if JJ continues to take more and more? As for Mary Ellen, Alex JJ the truth will always come out. Could it be mother has learned her lesson? Right!
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Well I guess an old dog can learn new tricks. Brad can learn. The meeting between JJ and him was perfect. to know that JJ and his brother are all on the same page and that Will and JJ have each others backs is really good. Now let's see what happens to the single parent in NYC and beyond with Cam.
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Sometime a few works say a lot. My ankle is just fine. It is interesting to see both Zach and JJ come out of the shadows and show us what they are thinking. I think this chapter shows us how strong Zack and Will's relationship is. For JJ let's hope he has better luck with Alex than Matt and Wade did. Thanks for a wonderful chapter.
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Well Mark another awesome chapter. It was interesting to see the guys work on Brad. After Chicago he need that. It worked!! I thought JJ getting Rosa to cook for them said a lot. In times past JJ would just be pissed off at them for not hiring a cook. However JJ had the gutz to call Rosa and get her to move to Boston. It shows that he has become a partner in this household not just a person living there. The JJ of years ago wouldn't have done that, he would have just bitched and threated to move. What could have been a terrible day 9 11 became a day of moving on. Just as Robbie would have wanted.
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As the ship plods across the sea, i hope that George will see that Caroline is so much better than Lady Elgan. Hopefully he will forgive her and return to how thing were before. Deep down inside they do love each other. Thanks for another wonderful chapter.
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After rereading both this chapter and all of this book, I have come to a conclusion that there is a new feeling, tone and favor. The last half of 9 11 and Flux were almost like the family had been forced in a tunnel. This long dark passageway was created by the loss,grief, sadness and sorrow. It seemed like it had no end. Now however, the family seems to have returned to the light of day. Yes they still have problems ahead but now things seem possible, not impossible. I think is seeing new POVs like Zach and JJ we can see the full situation, like Will's and Zach's relationship and into the mind of JJ. Not as scary as I thought it would be. Mark, I have said this before, but it is true again, this is your best work. For even without the drama of the past, the interaction of the family members is awesome, truly awesome. Thanks again Mark for xharing this unbelievable story with us.
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Only one word can express my feelings about this chapter, PERFECT!!! JUST PERFECT!!
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Since Mark has told us only four chapters are left in Flex, I was wonder about the next book and it's narrator . Is JJ ready for that honor? We have seen his pov a few rimes and I have grown to like him for than I ever did before/.
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First of all thanks for this chapter. It is always a joy to see,the two sides of our hero. Granger the warrior brillanent, totally in control and after the battle the kind noble host. It shows us who George is and why we love him so much. He is a good person. unlike some of his relatives both then and in the present. I think he may be mollowing to Caroline after dealing with Lady Elgin. Thanks Mark again.
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Thanks so much for the new chapter. Two doubts come to mind. Why is Wade sick? Why is Alex acting so aggressive? Some thing seems wrong. Only Mark knows. As for the new baby I am hoping it is a boy and the father is Matt.
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Having had a number of close friends died from HIV I can understand this chapter. Again please don't kill off to many people.
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After reading and rereading this story and this chapter many times, I believe this is one of the two sadness chapters. The other one was the chapter in which John Travers died. even the death of JP"s mother and the death of Robby, Jeannie and Hank do not come close to this. I like many of your faithful readers was upset with the death of Jeff Hayes, but Mark this is much worse. These two people Matt and Wade have gone through so much. Their love endeared even through illness lose and molestation. I can not read these words and not cry. Knowing the future and the hope which is to come is my only comfort. Bob
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When Matt left England, he was worried about ruining his adopted family's vacation. He should have know better. All the them from Will and Brad to JP, Stef and Zach gathered around him. It is so interesting to see how they really care about each other. Supporting each other like brothers are meant to do. It seems to me both Matt and Will have grown up a lot these passed months. Good work Mark as always!!
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After reading Daddydave's review I wonder if it is true. I believe sometimes some people are meant to be together. Soulmates no matter what. I used to think Matt and Wade were one of those. It still wonder if they weren't and will be again. Long ago Brad picked Robbie over Max because he knew Robbie would push him. Max would be the safe choice. Alex is a new toy to Wade, that will past over time. As for Will and ach. They know things will be hard, very hard. If they are meant to be together in the long run they will be. Again another great chapter. It seems like Flux is becoming a true description of the relationships in this book.
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Tomorrow will be JP's 78th Birthday. For the first time in many books we heard directly from JP in 9 11 Whether it was dealing with Will or 9 11 he proved himself. His calm smooth actions saved his family from danger, his hometown from ruin, and always guiding those he loves. He is the CAP saga!! Happy Birthday may you have many more!!
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What a wonderful surprise to see this new chapter. It seems odd that Jackie and the others don't like Kevin after all this time. I thought Cody had learned something over the years. I guess not. I always thought of Kevin as a sweetheart , I am not sure if he is partner material for Brad, but he would make a good friend. So far Sean leans the list. It was interesting to see JP and the clan meet the Duke and his grandson. What are these letters about? Some information about our hero, George? I hope Alex takes Wade's invitation to live with them. Mark, you have shown us how close a relationship Matt and Wade still have, you have set up each of them Matt and Wade with a good friend, Cam and Alex. What will happen? After three four years will Matt and Wade still have a relationship? The more we see their interaction, the more I believe it will survive the years. Thanks again for an outstanding chapter. Thanks again Mark and your team.
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It has been a long time still I've written a review. The two interesting points come out loud and clear, JP's research one and the Granger family uniting the two gagas. Wh know what secrets will be revealed. Second is Brad slowly he was rebuilding his life without Robbie, doing things he could not have done only a month before. What will the party reveal what new secrets are out there? Again Mark you have given us just enough so we want more. The real talent of a true storyteller.
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Thanks for the update. I must say I miss George a lot. To see how his mission will play out and of course the king's visit. Thankfully, we have and CAP crew.
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Back in 1962 Tonto Brad's grandmother built tat high school, now Brad replaces it with a new football field to remember Robbie. It seems very fitting. This chapter is a chapter of goodbyes. Selling Robbie's company and the field in Robbie's hometown seem to turn a page. Hopefully the family is over the worst. I am happy to see Matt and Will bonding.
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They say it's a small world. Well Mark you proved it. It will be interesting to see what has happened to him in the past 4 years. Mark you never cease to amaze me with the ins and outs of this story.
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I must agree with Tim. Having a place above a gay bar does not sound like a good idea. To great a temptation. Much to great for someone like Matt. Who will watch over Matt?
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After reading the latest chapter, I can not get out of my mind Brad holding the box with Robbie's rings. They were the last things he has of Robbie, a symbol of Brad and Robbie's love for each other. all this in a little box. It is so strange how we all sit on the edge of loss, sometimes only saved by a few minutes. About 6 years ago I was going home the traffic was lighter than normal If it would have been heavier I would have been on the bridge when it gave way. Brad lives Robbie died and here are his rings. Not much of a life cut short. Now they are selling his company. How odd the two things happen within a few days. Is this the time to move on? Can they do it? They kept the condo in NYC , a good place to stay, or maybe the last piece of Jeanine and Hank. If I was Brad would I be moved by logic, and business or by emotion. I am not sure which would rule the day. This shows me how strong Brad can be when he needs to be.
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Robbie's rings!! Wow!! a messed up Brad would not have been able to do that. It is like the final goodbye. I now understand Why Brad didn't tell everyone about his trip. It is good to see how the family is healing. Matt is learning to be a brother. Brad is setting things aright with Zach. I feel good about the family now. Many problems are ahead but the family is united Thanks for this wonderful chapter. I doubt, if I could hold those rings and not break down crying.
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Sometimes, and they are very few, something happens and even bad things work for good. That is what happened here before our eyes. Matt and Tony, Brad and Wade both acts of betrail, were turned around to drive the relationships in the family together, They could have done the opposite but they did not. For the first time Matt and Will are acting as brothers and Brad is seeing Matt as his other son. Robbie's death cause this transformation.It is only through the skill of Mr Arbour that we see this miracle. Thanks for your amazing story.
