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    Chapter 13

    Laz_9 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 13

    This is a great continuation of story and development of characters. I look forward for each additional post. While not everyone is being who I'd like them to be, they are definitely acting their parts. Keep it coming.
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    Chapter 16 - Maxie

    Laz_9 commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 16 - Maxie

    I liked this story so much that I checked for a new posting every afternoon.
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    Chapter 29

    Laz_9 commented on rec's story chapter in Chapter 29

    I really like this story - really like it. The music story line isn't so heavy that it takes away from the flow of Micah's life. But it's more entertaining to read something about someone that is truly genius and flawed at the same time. I won't miss a posting. I look forward to them everyday.
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    Thanks for another great story. I waited patiently, sometimes not so patiently, for each update. I can't wait for the next in what has become the best saga of fiction I've ever read. I hope it's posted soon.
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    Chapter 87

    Laz_9 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 87

    This story just keeps getting better and better. The layers upon layers make it the posting I look for.
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    Chapter 72

    Laz_9 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 72

    This is my favorite story on this site. I wait, impatiently, for each update. Thank you for continuing your postings.
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    Chapter 2

    Laz_9 commented on Andrew Todd's story chapter in Chapter 2

    This is a great start. I'm captivated by its beginning. While it's similar to other stories with animal connections, there are so many places to take this story. Looking forward to the next chapters.
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    Chapter 27 -- Losing

    Laz_9 commented on Remijay's story chapter in Chapter 27 -- Losing

    This is becoming very disjointed. And it needs a quick follow-up.
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    Chapter 32

    Laz_9 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 32

    This was a great start of the day. But it too leaves the need for more - soon.
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    Epilogue

    Laz_9 commented on Yanks13's story chapter in Epilogue

    I would have preferred a more "tied up nicely" ending. But I read every word and enjoyed it.
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    EPILOGUE

    Laz_9 commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in EPILOGUE

    Hmmm - on-line fiction is a mercurial format and as with any serial publication, the driving force is that at some point there will be a resolution of some sort. This epilogue was unsatisfactory in setting up a future story line or completing the current story line. While some might consider this type of close edgy or artful, this is so unfinished that I am disinclined to read anything else you write. Sorry but that's just how this leaves me.
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