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What does mom know about AM's past trauma that we don't know? What was her role in AM's memory suppression?
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Busy Night in the Service Department
Laz_9 commented on garfwiz's story chapter in Busy Night in the Service Department
Some resolution on some small points, any points, would be appreciated. The story keeps expanding in scope and it's difficult to keep up with the twists and turns because of the story's serial nature. Help! It's a great story but not easy to follow. -
Ok, I'm ready for more. Please don't make this the end and don't make the wait too long.
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This is really getting good. I'm now looking for each new posting before they reach the site.
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Great until the very end. And such a high note of an ending. Can't wait for the next in the saga. Hope it's soon.
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Hunter, the Hunted and the Haunted
Laz_9 commented on BarricadeBoy's story chapter in Hunter, the Hunted and the Haunted
Glad you're again posting. This story deserves to continue and your writing propels it forward. I'm enjoying the development of characters and plot. Keep up the good work. -
The time between postings is difficult. We've been spoiled with continuous chapters for so long that I've almost forgotten you must have other things, interesting things, important things besides posting. However, it will be great to have some more....soon?
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This is getting really interesting. The alien life connection is intriguing. I'm so not in favor of keeping things captive. Hopefully that will change soon.
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I'm checking constantly through the day for the next installment. This serial writing at its best.
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Chapter 45: Final Chapter
Laz_9 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 45: Final Chapter
This was a good ending. Was due for some happy times for the bunch. Can't wait to where the next part of the story will lead. Your stories are always the ones I read first. -
At the end of each chapter I'm disappointed it's not just a little bit longer. Matt is becoming so much more. That's a good thing as he was so outside admirable for too long. Thanks.
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I didn't see this ending as possible. And if I'd known that was where the story was heading, I wouldn't have read it. But it was a good read. It just left me feeling betrayed. Like life, sometimes. Good job.
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I've read every chapter as it was posted. What a ride. Good job.
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This story is my first go to when it's posted. The weekend is really long without a chapter update. But then it's a good Monday when it's on my desk right after. I'm completely captivated with the characters and the plot. Keep entertaining me.
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Thank you for this story. I waited patiently for every chapter and will miss the characters.
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Thanks. I needed another chapter before heading out for the chaos of Thanksgiving.
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Good to have another chapter and it was a good closure to some unfinished business and a new door to new possibilities. I really miss the twice weekly postings.
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I can't believe that every update makes me want the next update immediately. These characters become more and more believable, so much so that I forget that Will is only 14. I could never imagine his life except in this setting.
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Ok, enough with Will and Tony. Will needs to act like the emancipated adult he's become. If he needs a Tony, then he'll the kind of person that Tony became. Relationships are not all about fireworks and Will's search for the 'perfect' relationship is getting old. Wow, can't believe those last few paragraphs stirred all of that up. I'll trust the process and ride the storyline until the bitter end. But Kai doesn't deserve to be dumped, unless you know something you haven't shared.
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Well, I for one didn't see this coming. JP has such an ordered existence. This could be big or little. I'm anxious to see how a divorce will play out. As for Stef, Brad and Will... this is completely expected...and needed. Great read.
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Great follow up/conclusion to a great read. Can't wait until you hook us all in on a new story.
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This keeps me going. Every post is a little more 'stuff' to think about. And the characters...I liked to live next door to all of them.
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I think this would be a great opening chapter. Nothing is currently being posted at GA along this line. I would read every word if it became a serial.
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Get back on your healthy side soon. We'll miss the frequent updates but take care of yourself first and foremost.
