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  1. sandeman

    Chapter 22

    A guerilla attack so early on the baggage train would also on the narrow road with dense? forest on either side provide a road block of carts dead oxen horses and people. If the main body of soldiers were to turn back they would be slowed down to clear miles of road and have to enter the forest to fight against people who know the forest . Varus is in a predicament. Will he retreat or fight where he is or continue onwards to find a better battlefield. All the maps and discussion of strategy proving as pointless as all the information given him by Arminius.
  2. sandeman

    Chapter 22

    By midday the rear of the column would barely be out of sight of the fort. The attack so soon was well planned as the column became thinner and slower as the road narrowed, seemingly with the main thrust at the weakest point, the baggage train. Was the van of the army being attacked also ? or realise what was happening until too late? and how could they regroup or retaliate ? An attack like this on such a column of thousands of disciplined soldiers required long term planning, organisation and a great deal of information. And complacency on the part of the Roman command. All fostered over the years by Arminius.
  3. The mother/son meeting was less traumatic than expected. More understanding, more bonding, with Andrea accepting Cal and that with him Nos may have more control over blood lust. A welcome visit to Blake and Emon. And a tender first mating for Nos and Cal. Great storytelling.
  4. Of so many wonderful chapters in this story, I found this one of the most heartwarming. Yes Sir. I like the way you are handling the burgeoning Frank and Rhett relationship. Shyly. Please don't rush it. Jo has always been the character I love most. And your love - and respect - for him shines through in this beautifully told episode. His 'cup runneth over'.
  5. sandeman

    Perfect Moment

    Two fantastic chapters of joyful sex. But I've got to say it. This episode certainly had more bite to it! Our intrepid trio has passsed through the VEIL, fought against VILE foes and defeated their EVIL designs and now can LIVE and love as is their destiny. With the emphasis now definitely on love!
  6. sandeman

    Chapter 21

    Segestes second warning to Varus this time he felt compelled to deliver in person. Varus again shrugs it off, preferring to believe Arminius. The march east is on. To quote Iulius Caesar "Iacta alea est".
  7. sandeman

    Chapter 18

    A convincing continuation of your story, with the clued up sheriff involved in preventing violence. Interestingly the sheriff seemed to be unfazed by the reappearance of Silas and Ares. Waiting for a promised "reward" from them? Wonder what form that will take!
  8. sandeman

    Chapter 20

    A loving description of the gentle interaction between the two young men.
  9. The boys had a great day together. Nos and Cal were making headway but the unexpected appearance of Nos' mother and her open dislike of Cal has certainly put a damper on developments. Interesting introduction to Orion's match. Jarlan seems to be the authority figure Orion needs.
  10. Despite the fact that there were condoms the rush that raw sex gave overruled the fear and guilt . That would come later and often too late. Both these men were old enough and informed enough to have made a different choice. But how many of us who lived through that period could honestly say we made right choices EVERYtime? A cautionary tale told with your usual skill. Thank you.
  11. The three musketeers. All for one and one for all! Loving how this is turning into a competition.
  12. sandeman

    Chapter 19

    Interesting how the relationship between Marcus and Ingomar will develop. Even on the frontier it would be necessary for Marcus to take the dominant role and for Ingomar to be the passive partner in any sexual relationship. Otherwise Marcus would face social disgrace and accusations of effeminacy which are already being spoken. Varus is encouraging the relationship for his own ends. Ingomar fortunately has chosen to protect Marcus and his loyalties will I am sure soon be tested. A captivating story .
  13. I did not expect after all that has happened that it would be Shayna at the door with muffins. But Bass saved the day. Prison is too good for Shayna but sadly she will find plenty there who won't be put off "noshing on her muffin".
  14. Bravo Theo! Bravo Vince! But for brave little Jack he deserves, or his butt does, a well deserved Bravissimo!
  15. sandeman

    Chapter 18

    The friendship Vitalis extended to Marcus months past has now developed into a companionship that includes Ingomar. Vitalis sees and accepts the growing closeness of Marcus and Ingomar. The trio may well need this support for each other in a not too distant future. Roman engineering and construction was quite amazing. Roads, bridges
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