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    Chapter 16

    sandeman commented on Mark Paren's story chapter in Chapter 16

    Two thirds of the way through this tale of " the little ancient one " and a modern young man. Wonderful linking of Irish prehistory and folklore to the present day via the cairns. I hope you can resolve the feuds, ancient and modern, real or imaginary. Beautiful story engagingly written. Do I want it to end?
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    "Landfall"

    sandeman commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Landfall"

    Another poem tugging on the heartstrings. Ending in seven simple beautiful words meaning so much more than just "I love you", requesting so much of and from Elias.
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    "Undertow"

    sandeman commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Undertow"

    A rollercoaster rlde for the reader to ... ... a kiss ! A kiss that for the first time is breaking down barriers two strangers have built in different ways and for different reasons to shield them from hurt. But what a breathtaking painful glorious first kiss.
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    "The Splinter"

    sandeman commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "The Splinter"

    Really lost for words. Other reviewers have expressed all I am feeling. But from me two more words. Poetry. Devastating.
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    "Salt & Bone"

    sandeman commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Salt & Bone"

    What a melodramatic start to a story that already has several strands developing - Elias and Camille, Elias and Diane, Elias and Rowan ....and others? This has multiple possibilities for desire, lust, love, jealousy .... and hurt. But also healing and friendship and new beginnings . I eagerly anticipate following the author's development of these characters.
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    "Heartbeats"

    sandeman commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Heartbeats"

    Sublime, poetic , beautiful story of developing love. So why do I feel that there is heartache and possible heartbreak to come ?
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    Chapter 5

    sandeman commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Enjoyable. Loved the guys. Will we get further stories developing their relationship away from the gym ? I would love to see the love between them grow.
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    Great story development. A lot of heat in a winter wonderland.
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    New Horizons

    sandeman commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in New Horizons

    Great storyline. And with a come on ending leaving us begging for more. Chris is obviously open to involvement. So how many more of the Leipzig team might explore more than handball .......
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    Summer sunshine thawing Winter frost. An absolute delight to read.
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    Sol

    sandeman reviewed Boy Mercury X's story in Fiction

    Over the last few weeks I have enjoyed reading all your amazing tales and have been left with a desire to read more. Many perhaps worked into longer developed stories. Please continue to provide us readers with your magic storytelling.
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