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Interesting start. Eerie similarities to my own life and times! 79 I was almost as niaeve, just in "college" ( uni, in Australia) and instead of the Capitol steps, it was a beach an older bloke asked if he could " kiss what was in my speedos". While the answer was no, the reaction was similar to what you did after returning home! Looking forward to the developing saga!
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Somehow when one is that pretty, talent is optional!
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I suppose when one has no talents, being skilled at dancing, frisbee or skating do seem out of reach.
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Alternatively he is part Jeremy and part Tallyrand....🤩😘
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Mr Arbour, how can I continue to truly despise a character when they go through a resurrection, the like of which hasn't been seen for a tad less than 2000 years? You are a puppeteer who manages to make your characters AND audience dance exactly the way you want them to..... I am still holding out for "real" Jeremy to explode forth. Probably unfashionable (with some anyway) but I do like Will's character. His thought processes, his way of managing his life and relationship. He seems "real"... almost human. Great read on this day where distraction is welcome! Thank you.
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There are times where George's life rivals my own! 😍
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So we are down to the tale of the two Jeremys. And I for one cannot wait for the real Jeremy (the can'o'beans in an open fire Jeremy) to explode all over those conned by the laid back drug addled space junky that is "nice" Jeremy. When that happens I will definitely need to find my Snoopy happy dance emoji. Meanwhile we have the Jack Hobart variation on straight middle age crisis. At the rate he is going he'll become Matt Gaetz's mentor. I sincerely hope Mr Arbour that you get inspiration for your characters from your vast imagination. If they are based on friends/family/acquaintances, my concern for your well being would increase substantially..... (but not enough to get you to stop writing about them....😉) Thanks.
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1. Doubtfully 2. By whom? (My moneys on J.....)
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Your campaign to turn my visceral * hatred is not subtle. I am not yet willing to even suggest that it may work, although Kris is a bloody good advocate*. I just hope you don't start writing for politicians; you'll have us all questioning our most staunchest beliefs... *yes, Australian/Canadians also have an education!
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Is that a challenge? I am sure I could get him into a special ops unit somewhere on this planet.....
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Happy New Year! It is good when the world finally catches up to Australia (here as I type, it's morning tea time on Jan 2!) What a great way to start day 2 of 2025! While Graingers sea battles are always great to read, the political/diplomatic/intellectual battles are almost as strong as the descriptions of his physical exertions.... I look forward to "seeing" more of the blond swede... of course George's verbal sparring with First Consul will also be interesting albeit in a slightly different way (I assume.....). You have written a character that I find stimulating in so so many ways...😘 Thank you again and all the very best for 2025
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On a slightly more serious note, 21 minutes into 2025,I would like to very seriously thank Mark Arbour for allowing us to be part of the world's he has created. He has created endless entertainment, millions of laughs and a vehicle on which I can vent my frustrations! I am impressed by your talent and your toleration of those of us who cast aspersions on your characters. Thank you.
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Some how when the answer to any question is "Jeremy", a red mist descends..... Oh! Well, the Catholics have hell, the ancient Greeks had Hades and the Sumerians had chickens with hot tar.... we have Jeremy....
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I thought JJ had come up with a new name for himself.....
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I love British understatement ... or it's use by others that aren't British.....
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Mr Arbour! You and I are going to have words! I am ALMOST coping with this vague plan that the miserable tosser gets back into sainted Will's favour (sainted may be going too far, but I am sure you get my drift) by capturing the definitely sainted Travis' stalker, but it only works if this involves one of your better twists where the miserable tosser screws up again and continues on his path to purgatory - it is Christmas after all.... I hope we understand each other...... Happy Hollies and all that! 😘👍
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The Ancient Relic of the Massive Cock
Canuk commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in The Ancient Relic of the Massive Cock
Mark Arbour, please send JJ into the army; anyone that can so successfully transmit poison across a continent could be a usefull weapon of war. There's the side benefit that he may die..... Signed Not-a-fan-of-JJ- 51 comments
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Awesome writing. Very scary. Stalkers are sick people. And generally the police while well meaning, are not that helpful.
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It's only taken me almost a decade, but I get the feeling Mark Arbour likes torturing his characters!😘
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Be bloody careful what you wish for; I am not sure its beyond our author to torture us by sending JJ back to Napoleonic England.....
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I agree, but while not wishing to defend Marc, or Stef's reaction, I do think that Mark Arbour has written Stef as a man of his generation and experience; that the sex was enjoyable mitigated the "coercion". While not excusing his attitude, it is in line with many of his (unreconstructed) generation. This doesn't make him any less wrong, it just suggests why he holds the attitude. Good writing, as ever, challenging readers! Thanks👍😘
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It would be a far better world if sentiments like " think about your inheritance" were just plot drivers in good stories. Sadly even in this day and age people using or attempting to use money to control others is far too common. Great read. Thanks.
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Sometimes it's so boring to read a story that just so like my home life.....🤣🤣😘
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That's not "wobble" that's the rotation of the earth around the sun....
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True...but nothing to do with the seasons, which was the point I was inexperty trying to make.
