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The Interrogation of Michael Anthony Loggerman, Cadet
SteveH commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Interrogation of Michael Anthony Loggerman, Cadet
I knew he'd do something....and Mike, I feel is on the same page purely because he knows Corbin and knows the motives. Now is the time we see the fire & brimstone from Corbin. Yes killer, now you fight. -
The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
SteveH commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Trial Of Corbin M Crowley
Oh sh!tballs...Corbin, you gota be able to salvage this...why was he blindfolded though? Theatrics from the persecutors your honour? -
See now this throws a whole lot of other questions...Pete put all the pieces together, well he would given he had invested so much into Corbin, but he was so hurt over Corbins actions. So he's wanting to "forgive and forget" without hearing the whole story? And vmee Mike, what a turnaround..from that scene in the bathroom when Corbin sneezed to "introduce you to the Captain", has solitary given him time to figure things out? I mean..to me Mike gives Corbin the answers he has been looking for, Pete? Ehhhh... I'll always be team Mike, but Pete? I dunno, Pete should have realised something was up when Corbin threw the "I can't, can I?" at him, knowing how much Corbin was into him. Love the chapter...who doesn't want to stay in "that" sort of bubble forever...
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Corbin, baby, this is the best move. Eventually, it'll show up to be the right move, Mike will be the perfect move as well. Not everything might feel like I right now, but it will. Again, another emotional punch..but what was the alternative? And yes, team Mike all the way!!
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You know something, Corbin has grown up....its taken this monumental point to make things click into place. And maybe, just maybe this might work. Team Mike was always my favourite, there was always this clarity the both of them had, different to Pete. And yes, this chapter packed a massive punch, a strong, emotive punch. Wow.
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GAAAAAHHH ok, so if Corbin explains this the right way, date night will be perfect...I just hope Pete understands
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I think Corbin did the right thing in the way he put Chip in his place, BUT Pete? Pete was a meant to be...finally, Corbin might be actually happy. And yes, explicit details on Corbin & Petes 1st official time together, we've been living that life vicariously through Corbin's eyes (and your writting) from chapter 1... Please?
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Hmmm this might answer a few questions about why Freddy was the way he was initially around Rick, the "doesn't want to get hurt again" feelings
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GAAAAH! Damn, this is going to get good now!
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Damn im loving this series, Beth isn't stupid though, she's figured it out before they both have.
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Oh how I've missed this series and thank Christ it's back with a vengeance! Loved it!!!!!!!!
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The Firework Committee
SteveH commented on Richie Tennyson's story chapter in The Firework Committee
Always leave us wanting more...Love it! Brilliant story, thank you!!! -
Nicholas needs a kick up the ass, for being an ass. Wonder what would happen if Richard found someone that made him happy that wasn't Nicholas (thanks to Harriet).
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Yeah I'll fill you in 1 day 😉 lol
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Poor Nick...Love to think Shane is guna stick around too, he sounds hot!! Mind you, you've nailed the ambulance scene perfectly (workplace injury, same injuries)
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Well that's mum dealt with then lol. Awesome chapter, loving the series so far.
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Awww things are all starting to fall into place for them, although...Kate, wonder wether Kate's pregnant and now Brady & Ember are going to be hot grand dads lol Loving the story so far!!
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Im guna go with 1st time with anything anal (yeah i know, that ones been answered already)
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Ember responded by biting my inner thigh, growling “Be patient, we’ve waited twenty years, I’m not rushing this.” says it all really, doesnt it...
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You know this will never be a simple boy meets boy many years later story....tbh that would be boring lol keep up the excellent writting!!
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I think that was Ember's way of saying thanks (the cockblocking) in a shit stiring kinda way lol
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Fiiinally! Ok so now the emotional roller coaster begins lol
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Chapter 6 Beer, Showers and ...
SteveH commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 6 Beer, Showers and ...
Loving the story so far, keep up the awesome work, the Caprice was a nice touch too lol -
When i picked up this story, I didnt know what to expect, a few of them are a "daddy son" type of thing and yeah thats ok, not my thing but thats ok. Alot of the brother ones ive read are a bit boring and lack that "something", this story? I love it so far, Its one of those stories that if you could close your eyes and be in the moment, its like listening to two brothers hare some sort of special thing away from the outside world. Lets face it, drop the inhibitions and its some dirty secret we could go all wide eyed and whisper about, in secret. I'll admit if had a brother like this and I was like that, I'd go there (I dont have a brother so its kind of a moot point), I love what the author has written so far and think its just brilliant. I love a story where you can "be in the moment" this has it. Thanks huktaunluv!!
