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Brandon

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  1. Amazing so far! Keep up the great work.
  2. Brandon

    Skylight 6

    This story is awesome! I love the fact that you can pull off switching points of view many people cant. It actually reads like Goosebumps story by R.L Stine! Keep up the good work.
  3. Chapter 3. Ohh Shit “Aggghhhrrrr…My head hurts!!!” next thing a foot the face “shhhh” Sarah moaned. We were obviously horrendously hung over. What was going on. “Sarahhh my head hurtsss…” I groaned again. “Yeah well I’m still drunk so can you be quiet”, she answered back. I opened my eyes… oh my god. I seemed to be on the couch, Sarah on the floor face down in the carpet. Her condo was amazingly trashed and the light half shining through the curtain shown i
  4. I wanna hit Drake repeatedly in the face! He just royally fucked up!
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    Chapter 5

    I am loving this story !! when is the next chapter coming out!
  6. Brandon

    Chapter 10

    Awesome story!
  7. Brandon

    Chapter 2: Boredom

    Thank u... hopefully I can have the next chapter up in the next week or so but I have a 10 page paper due this week too
  8. Hopefully you will like it!
  9. Thank you
  10. School. Skool. s’Cool. No matter how the fuck you say it, it still means hell! Sitting at the kitchen table next morning eating a bowl of captain crunch while reminding myself that it’s the last year completely helps. Kris left this morning after waking me up to take a shower with him. Sexy you would think, but no alas t’was not. I have a car now so I no longer have to wake up at 6 to catch the 6:45 bus, guess Kris forgot that. Plus my first class isn’t till 8:30........*6 am sh
  11. Brandon

    A New Life

    Amazing story I love the amount of emotional detail you go into in your story...most of the time when i read these stories its like the character does something but you think he's stupid or childish, that it could have gone an another way...but with A New Life i understand why Blake acts the way he does...I even understand Haze even though i love the amount of mystery surrounding him and his family...im rambling. Keep em Coming!!!
  12. Yes very good chapter !!! I like it alot ! nice job keep em coming
  13. I LOVE IT!!!
  14. Oh this story is very surprising!!! Dont worry!!!And i commend u on being my First Review! THANXX!
  15. “Git of e,” I screamed into my pillow which muffled my yells of “get off me”. Concentrating I lifted my head and barked “GET OFF OF ME”. My attacker froze and we both listen for any signs that my parents heard us. No yelling, no coming down the stairs, and laughter from my father at the tv. Family Guy his only vice. Taking a second to breathe I threw myself up off the bed and turned on him. “Sorry” he half mouths, half whispers before leaning in to kiss me “I just love the wa
  16. Justin’s got a problem, he’s in love with Ryan the gay bully and he’s dating Kris his boyfriend of what he thought was the love of his life but that life is about to take a turn for the worse
  17. I love piercing ands tats on a guy but i like the bad boy, grunge, rugged look more! Emo's just look like rly depressed twinks to me...
  18. "A long walk" because its the most chillest, understandable, relaxing and entertaining song in know! Your background it ain't squeaky clean shitSometimes we all got to swim upstream You ain't no saint, we all are sinners But you put your good foot down and make your soul a winner I respect that, man you're so phat And you're all that, plus supreme Then you're humble man I'm numb Yo with feeling, I can feel everything that you bring Let's take, a long walk around the park, after dark Find a spot for us to spark Conversation, verbal elation, stimulation Share our situations, temptations, education, relaxations Elevations, maybe we can talk about Revelation 3:17 Or maybe we can see a movie Or maybe we can see a play on Saturday (Saturday) Or maybe we can roll a tree and feel the breeze and listen to a symphony Or maybe chill and just be, or maybe Maybe we can take a cruise and listen to the Roots or maybe eat some passion fruit Or maybe cry to the blues Or maybe we could just be silent Come on, Come on
  19. My 2 worst: 1. From a girl friend: Hey you wanna be my gay best friend it'll be like hanging out with a chick only you have a dick? and 2. From a guy friend: Hey your gay do you find him hot, or him, or him, or (insert guys name), hey what about me?
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    Chapter 16: Lost

    UUUUGGHHHHH I hate cliff hangers!!! We need the next chapter. IT SO FANTASTIC IM GOING TO DIE!!!
  21. I think there was homosexuality present in the past...many animals have been shown to be homosexual from mammals to birds even some reptiles, and its more than just sex. Many mammals and birds find permanent companionship with males of the same species which includes sex. Male penguins, swans and ducks have been shown to even try to raise chicks from infertile eggs when they are in relationships. I doubt this decided to appear when humans decided to create a "society" we are all animals after all.
  22. HI im B, I actually became a member to this site last april then my computer died and I didnt rediscover this site till a week ago...yeah I no pitiful...but I am looking forward to join the community.
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