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Omg omg omg!!! I loved this chapter the most out of all of them, this is my favorite. I love how they have 3 kids now and they act just like Ryder. Hah poor Teddy. OLI 21, that's amazing. I hope Oli and Mark are still together. Awaiting the next book. With love Remijay ❤
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Thanks @Benji I'm trying to to get everything in order for the closing of this book. I'm glad you liked this chapter...
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You'll have to wait and see about the Nathan thing 😏 All stories have an ending. Whether it be good or bad 🙃
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Chapter 12 V Over the past few weeks I have been watching my brother and mother. I want to see what they do. And how they react to certain situations. Not that I’m trying to get away with anything, I’m still not comfortable enough to ask my mother for anything. Things just seem to magically appear when they are low. She hasn’t once asked me about Trent. Thankfully.. Speaking of him, I wonder why he hasn’t called me? Or at least even texted. Tammy and I do all th
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Chapter 15 In other news Blinking my eyes open I look around… I can’t see anything. Everything is blurred and distorted. Like looking through a screen. I try to move my arms and legs, but their restrained. I try to scream out but my mouth is taped shut. At least I hope. Why does my body hurt? Did I drink that much?? Shaking my head, I try to remember what I did. But it’s fuzzy. I try to think. But the headache is too much. The more I fought against what’s restraining m
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OMG! Tears!!! I loved this chapter more than all the others. You sir are not cool. Hmmph! Anyway, i love how the emotion pay off each other, and how even after all the embarrassment Oliver and Ryder are cool. Oliver and Teddy spoke to each other like brothers. Even though now Ryder might be killed... LOL i found hilarious. Amazing chapter... Keep'em coming <3 HUgs
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Chapter 11 T After my mother told me about what happened with my father. I kind of get it, you know. My father wasn’t the nicest dad by any means of the imagination. Even back then. When my mother wanted to take us, he wouldn’t allow it. I’m glad that my brother got taken out of the situation. I wouldn’t know how to handle it if it were any other way. Now, I’m not saying that I totally forgive her. That will take some time. And maybe some therapy, like my broth
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Thats amazing... I'm dating a guy right now that is a CNA. He wants to go back to school for Pre-Med. Thats the million dollar question, what do i want to be? You have to think about what you want to see everyday going to work. Either you'll love it or hate it. You got this <3
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omg for a second i almost beleive it myself. My heart stopped for a second, i think i read the rest of the chapter in a minute! You know how to capture an Audience thats for sure Ace Anyway, this chapter, how to put it into words?! hah, just kidding. I liked it alot. The emotion, the pure looks on the parents faces. When you go to visit new parents, you almost want one yourself, but then you leave and you're like nah not for me. Oliver screaming at Ryder for another scandal. That kid one day will give someone a heart attack i believe that LOL Teddy is right, Ryder's heart cant take that abuse right now. If he could they would have had sex already. And Teddy would be even more in love with Ryder. The next few chapters will be Ryder trying to make his fans and friends believe him, i hope he is successful. Keep'em coming, I look forward to reading every chapter as they come <3 Hugs
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I honestly don't know how to describe this chapter. Exciting, entertaining, maybe?! LOL It seems that Blake and Liz are parents now. Now we just need to know what gender, and name. As for Teddy caving to go on vacation. I thought for sure he was going to say yes. But like always it takes his best friend Blake to convince him that he's letting life pass him by. And thats exactly what he's doing. Time to start living your life Theodore! Sheesh! Ryder and Liz finally have a conversation, and they have finally got a common place. Maybe they will be friends like they used to. But only time and understanding can heal that wound. Now for the asshat on the TV! The nerve of people. Do you not understand that when an emergency happens. You don't plan for it, it just happens? Ugh, and then to say stupid shit. Some people i swear! That is why i hate people. I can't stand them... Anyway, awesome chapter. Still waiting for more. How's school and life? <3 Hugs
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Such a cute chapter. I remember those songs that Ryder wrote and made out to Teddy. They were filled with love and devotion. Oliver just doesn't understand yet how two people can fall helplessly in love. He will though, I can see it with Mark. That one song by Pink Floyd. Man that song gets me everytime. I used to listen to it all time. Keep'em coming hugs ❤
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I totally forgot about that lol face Palm. Anyway, it will be included in chapter 12
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She could have. But i dont think Cindy wanted the Cops involved. Especially with how mean Jerald has become. There is 2 chapters left. I'm writing Chapter 12 as i type this. Thank you for the comment.
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Cindy Why does it feel like I can’t anything right? Why does it have to come down to this? Just why? Why, why, why!!! I ask myself everyday for the past two years why does my husband hate me and the kids? This is not how it was supposed to go. We were a loving family at one point in time. And then Jerald lost his job, he tried getting another one, but word got around that he’s mean, can’t follow directions easily, comes to work drunk sometimes, or doesn’t even come in at all.
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Wow. Liz is so cold, but she has a right. Ryder is slowly fixing and mending the broken relationships. I knew Oliver looked up to his brother. If anything Teddy has grown so much that he doesn't realize he's been the same since Ryder. Ryder just brings the happy giddy out of him.. Loved it chapter. Keep'em coming. Hugs ❤
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Absolutetly loved this chapter. So much emotion and the entertainment. I loved it. Truly! I can see that they all need therapy, they all have buggage that they need to get out into the open. At least to the professional if nothing else. Ryder's starting therapy, that should help, maybe?! As for Oliver, i do support what he did still. The kid has balls, and he's fierce just like his mom said earlier. LOL Dad needs to take a chill pill or something. There is clearly something wrong, he wasn't like this in the last book. Is it all because of Ryder or does he have something else to be upset and angry about?! Anyway, again awesome chapter <3
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When i first started to write this story. It originally was only supposed to be a poem. But it turned into something more. Six years ago, i was very depressed and sad. Almost suicidal, if you will. But through friends and family. i turned that pain into something creative. And i love the feedback that I'm getting for all the effort i have put in. The next chapter will be about Cindy. The choice she had to make. Thanks for again for the comment.
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The story is coming to a close sooner rather than later. I would like to think that maybe I have inspired some others to write what they feel and not compress them. It has taken me almost 6 years to write this story. Either my life got in the way or I just didn’t feel like writing a sad dark piece. I hope my readers can understand that. But as this book comes to a close. Another will pop up in it’s place. Probably another book pertaining to this one. But I can’t really say, it’s totally un
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Fantastic chapter.... Oliver is just like his brother let me tell you. How do you think Teddy got so popular? By doing whats best for him and others. Maybe Tommy should think before he speaks?! However, there is other ways to resolve a issue. And fists only get you so far, Oliver will learn that. I also think that Oliver has some kind of disorder; dyslexia, maybe? Anyway, his parents should get him tested to see where he falls on the spectrum. But, even then pills will not fix what is wrong with Oliver. My mother's side of the family, they have all been on one pill or another to fix their mental disorders, or to help with cope with life. I'm not saying all medications are bad, but before you give a kid a pill make sure it will help them, not harm them. Oliver is confused about Teddy and Ryder. He just doesnt understand how they got together, and why they are together again after all this time. If he were alive back then, and saw them together. He would understand better, but he wasnt. And no body really gave him the information, until recently.. Lovely chapter, keep'em coming <3
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I literally have no words for this chapter. In the beginning things were continuing to get better. And Mrs. Haner even said hi to Ryder this time. By the end of this chapter however, I have mixed emotions. At one end of the spectrum I loath Nate. I hope they do a drug test or something. I hope he does lose his license, and never gets a chance to work with patients again. On the other hand, I get where he's coming from. Jealous is a nasty thing. Overall great chapter. To make this many fans crazy is a great accomplishment. So congrats. Hugs ❤
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Finally Teddy did something with Nate... About damn time! That kid needed a good chewing... Now that I think of it, Ryder does have a dependency on people. Probably from when he was younger, and lost his parents. And then his grandmother. I totally got it back then why he did what he did to Teddy. But it makes much better sense now. Thank you Dr. Pierre. Ahem anyway, Ryder is amazing still. That kiss at the end. I'm glad that you can put into words what that feeling is. Not alot of people can. Hugs ❤
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Finally getting somewhere. I hope Ryder holds up his end of the bargain. Teddy and Oliver are getting along. Mike is slowing getting back into Teddys good gracious. This Nate person violated the hospitals policy, letting confidential information be spread around the hospital. This isn't the first time we have heard that Nate did something like this. Both doctors should be held accountable. They are intelligent people after all. Anyway, I hope in the two weeks everything is how it should be. I'm looking forward to it. Another great chapter. ❤ hugs
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This chapter, caught me with the feels... ugh. I can't blame mom for what she did, but I can blame her for how she tried to handle it. Bad mom award! Teddy stepping up and protecting Oliver says something. Ever since Ryder came back. He's been acting like his old self. The caring one. The guardian, the protector. Ryder and Oliver will be friends. This story has a long way before the end. Ryder will play a huge part in this story.
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This is a cute chapter. Oliver finally gets to meet and talk with his favorite person ever. He gets to finally see Ryder as a person than a celebrity. And they actually talk about Teddy. Lol of all the things! Mom and dad will not be happy about this I know that for sure. But they will have to get over it eventually, right? When Oliver gets older he will understand why his older brother was practically not at home. Or why Teddy is so successful. Sacrifices had to be made. Hugs ❤
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Chapter 91 Feeling the Heat
Remijay commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 91 Feeling the Heat
Such a sweet chapter. There are homophobes everywhere. Mitch is just being a dick. When he realized that his friends weren't supporting him he crumbled. Like all bullies. Hugs ❤ I'm glad they finally slept together 😊
