Remijay
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Very good point. But from what i know though, Teddy has always been the center of attention. He didnt know Ryder existed until their paths crossed. And then he didnt know that Ryder is/was being bullied. Especially by his best friend and others. I'm not saying that Teddy is heartless. He's definitely not. Ryder however is going to become famous, more famous than he realizes as of right now. Teddy will have to make a choice, it's either his popularity or Ryder. And the same with Ryder as he gets famous. Only time will tell with this story.
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Wow... Just wow!!! Very strong chapter here. I love it of course. Teddy has some thinking to do that he wasn't prepared for. Blake asked those questions in all honesty because us, the fans want to know. If he's serious with Ryder or is his popularity going to win out... Again great chapter. Hugs
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I loved this chapter. I'm glad to see that Ryder and Teddy are still trying to make an effort. Even tho it sometimes feels as if Ryder would rather be alone. At least by the end of chapter Ryder actually kissed Teddy like he meant it.
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Thanks i dont really like dad either. I'm sorry you have to adult on Tuesday, good luck As for Trent, there might be something that he could but i can't share that here. You'll have to wait and see. Thanks again for the review.
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Chapter 11 Facing Reality pt 2. When the police and social workers left, after taking the pictures and getting my statement again. I felt totally drained of everything. I just sat there, staring at a piece of grain on the table. Don’t ask me why, I just am. They police said that it might take some time to catch whoever did this to me. Gee thanks, like I don’t have enough to worry about. My parents have this look on their face the entire night, like they were disappo
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Chapter 6 J When I awoke the next time, my head felt heavy. Like being held down by a ton of bricks, I heard voices, but couldn’t make them out. When I tried to lift my head, everything spun. “Devon? Are you awake sweetie.” Who is that? Why she calling me sweetie. That voice. I know that voice. “Devon?” Another voice said, this time I knew who it was. Tammy. “Tam…” I coughed some, my voice came out raspy. My throat felt dry. “Wa,” I cleared
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Wow!!! Very passionate. That's not all though they did touch base on his nodes and Maria. I hope Chris doesn't freak out when they wake up in the late morning or afternoon. I know Chris said that he didn't want to see Ryan anymore, I hope after this, that statement isn't true anymore.
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Wow. Intense story so far. I love it tho. Not to crazy about Chris tho. That guy is a little scary to be honest. As for Ryan not telling his dad. The only thing that i can think of is disappointment. Just look at how he handled Josephine? Do think Ryan would say anything about him being gay after that? Ha, not! Again i love this story. i want to see where it goes.
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Chapter 1: "The School Day Begins"
Remijay commented on Grydan's story chapter in Chapter 1: "The School Day Begins"
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Oh fuck! I felt terrible for the Pete. I couldnt even begin to imagine what that kind of pain is, nor do i ever want to find out. Sure I've had my fair share of break ups but never a death. If this story continued, there is no doubt in my mind that i would have cried. Hugs! I know what writing these kinds of stories do to the author. Thank you for the great read.
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I've read this story once before. I fell in love with it then and I'm still love with it now. There is no one way to discribe what this story meant to me. The emotions, turmoil, happiness, loneliness, friends, family, team mates, etc. With everything coming together at the end, its a wonder that people love and admire this story. Again, thank you for sharing this story. It's one of my favorites. Hugs
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By accident yes. But I do believe Devon and Trent are boyfriend's. While Josh and Jeff are boyfriend's.
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Did I really? Oh my! That's not good lol
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Chapter 5 I The following weeks, after Trent pretty much seduced me in the classroom. Have been, how to put this into words that people would understand. I don’t think there are any honestly. Trent and I have become closer since then, while at home, things haven’t changed. My father doesn’t beat me as severe anymore. I think he has a girlfriend, I think. That’s the only possibly conclusion that I have. Maybe that’s why he has started to clean up his act. Taking showers eve
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I'm sorry it has taken so long to get a chapter done with story. Life has been; how to put this... Complicated at best. However, i am starting to write a chapter per book that i have.
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Someday Out of the Blue
Remijay commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Someday Out of the Blue
I absolutely loved this story... When I first started reading it, I thought oh, okay. Connor has a bad life and is probably going to kill himself. However as the story progressed I became obsessed with reading it until the very end. Connor has alot of issues to deal with, I don't know of any young adults that could go through with what he did. And turn out alright. As for Ryan, I loved his character. Him in himself was amazing. Toby, there's nothing bad that I can think of... He's amazing young man. I loved him the most. Out of all the craziness in this story, I loved how at the end Connor and Ryan got back together. I wasn't expecting the story to end right then... I literally yelled at my phone. -
One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Remijay commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Beautiful... This chapter is emotional. Ryder doesn't believe anything Teddy says or does. In his way of thinking everyone is out to get him. I wonder what made him into the young adult he is today. I also wonder what's to come. How are they going to work together when one doesn't trust the other. -
Thank you. ♥️😗
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This chapter does discuss rape, and kidnap. IF this chapter offends you in anyway, please feel free to not continue reading… I want my readers to feel comfortable while reading. Chapter 10 Facing Reality I hugged Courtney long and hard. My body shook, god it hurt, it hurt so bad. I can’t believe this has happened to me. What’s to come? How do I get over the fact that these monsters beat me, raped me, and drugged me? “Shh,” Courts voice sounded like she w
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If what Teddy said is true. I hope Ryder and him can make this work. The raw emotion in this chapter said it all. It hit home when they were talking on the couch. Just something that they were saying, caught me off guard. Very nice chapter. I hope your summer has been wonderful. Looking for more to come.
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Love love love it!!!!! It's so cute and honest, and sweet. Teddy and Ryder are going to make this work. I can just see it now. But as the earlier discussion comes into play. Rock star verses popularity. One will win while the other falls. I just hope not too far of a fall. Again loved the chapter. Keepem coming
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Thanks everyone... I love the comments.
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Chapter 9 This isn’t supposed to happen. This isn’t supposed to be happening to me. Jason, he… he shouldn’t have kissed me that night. He knew the consequences of it. But he did and it felt right. But why does it feel that my life is over? I have everything now. I have the guy, the friends, and the family that loves me. So why am I sitting in a darkened corner holding my legs to my chest. Hoping they don’t find me. I’m trying my hardest not to make a sound. It hurts. The
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You surely will. I'm working on chapter 9...
