Remijay
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Lol I could use an editor yes. I am however glad that you’re enjoying this story
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Thank you, Spdw John! It will be updated soon-ish.
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Thanks Story Reader
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Chapter 21 Aiden Gripping the locker door closest to me, I slump my body onto it. My head swam for a second before my vision became clear again. Sighing, I look to my left and right, seeing no one I limp towards the bathroom. Getting in the bathroom and staring at my reflection in the mirror, I see what Jared had done to me. My lip had some blood on it. Sighing I reached for paper towel and wet it. When I went to wipe away the blood, I winced and almost whimpered out in pain. “How
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Chapter 17 - From the Ashes
Remijay commented on Xfighter1984's story chapter in Chapter 17 - From the Ashes
i really do like this book, it is uplifting as it is heartbreaking. I'm glad that with all things considered they are on their way to being friends once again. That being said, i foresee things going drastically wrong soon. They have made names for themselves. I do hope that Jasper and Xavier, have what they always wanted. Thank you, for sharing this chapter. -
What a beautifully written first book to a series that will have me on the edge of my seat.. I loved this book so much. Better than any of the cliche books i've read elsewhere. That being said, i feel really bad for JED lol even though i know in the next book he'll find someone, guessing mostly; just from the title. I wish you the best and the books you write a glorious shine in the spotlight!
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I dont have control over my characters. I'm just the voice for the person. As such, i think it's just typical bullying. Or it could be another person that kidnapped Aiden. LOL i do have to agree with you though everytime Jason leaves him to go do something, Aiden gets some form of beating or punishment. The name of this story makes perfect sense. Aiden's fate has certainly twisted from the way he thought it would be. Thank you for commenting Benji
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Truly thank you commenting Benji 😊
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Chapter 20 Aiden’s Pov A few weeks have passed since I made up with Jason. I still didn’t tell him what I wanted to do and I wouldn’t until time came for him to know. In another few weeks it will be Christmas and one of our friends is throwing a Christmas break/new year’s party. At that time I will make Jason prove to me that he is truly sorry. But until then, I am just going to have to keep him on his toes. Walking out of the schools building, I waited for Jason. He was
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LOL yea sometimes i forget about them. Or i get writers block on that particular subject sorry. I really dont mean to leave my writers confused or wondering if the story will ever continue. My life hasn't been the greatness. And sometimes with being an adult other priorities come up. That's why I'm trying to finish this book in a reasonable amount of time. Thank you for the comment.
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Chapter 19 Jason Pov Shit, what the fuck have I done? Aiden hasn’t wanted to be near me, since the day he found out that I was in hospital. Not even his friends would come near me? What the fuck did I do? I kick someone’s ass for that asshole. And then I get treated like one? How can that even be remotely fair? UGH! I just wanted to rip out my fucking hair; it’s literally fucking irritating to no end. I have to find out what I did so I can fix this, so everything can get
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Chapter 18 Jason POV I can’t believe I fucking did that? How can I be so stupid to punch someone for talking shit about Aiden. I maybe his boyfriend now, but ugh! Stupid. I looked at my hand with disgust. Shaking my head, I look towards the door as it opens. A doctor came in with a smile upon his face. “Well young man, that hand will need to be put into a cast I’m afraid.” I grumbled, “Now don’t fret. It will heal in the next six to eight weeks.” He smiles at me. “Fuck!”
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Chapter 17 I really do need to hang with my friends more. After the doctors appointment, I had this itching feeling like something was going on. So of course I quickly picked up my phone and scanned it for any details. Like always Court texts me constantly throughout her classes telling me exactly what's happening. The one text that stood out above all others was a text that read, Jason got into a fight today with one of his friends during lunch. Jason ended up with a broken
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Chapter 16 How do you tell someone that you want to use drugs after you have already promised that you wouldn’t? Just how… As I sit here with my mind going numb and my body craving for something that is just out of reach. I look around my room and sigh. Everything should be fine, good even. Nothing has really happened. Over the last week. I have gone back to school. The rumors of what I did or didn’t do flew through the school like water. They have nothing better do apparently. Shr
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked the ending I tried to make it happy and leave my readers with a good feeling. There will probably be another book but I'm unsure right now
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Sorry honestly, I mean yes the time jump was intentional. They were in the middle of the school year when Devon started there, I figured might as well go for the throat and end with a bang... if I planned on making this story longer i would have went into depth with the character of Nathan... I'm sorry
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In those months though, my friend was there to help me. She was my rock. And then came Trent. A hot sexy little number that I was shocked to find out he liked me just as I did him. Those days have come and gone. Only to be replaced by happier times, happier moments. Not saying that those days are not special to me because they are. I wouldn’t be here if it weren’t for Tammy and Trent. I lost my virginity to my first boyfriend. However, it was on the last day that I was going to be living in Colo
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Yes they are mix ups. His name is Josh.
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Part Z is going to be the last chapter. i have prolonged the end of this story for so long that it needs to be finished. Im glad you like the chapter
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Chapter 13 X Here it is six thirty in the morning. My alarm clock, just woke me up. I haven’t been up this early in a couple of months, to be honest. As soon as I opened my eyes, my heart rate went up, today is the day that I start at a new school. Today everything changes. ‘Knock… Knock’ That must be my brother. “Come in…” I sigh “Oh good, you’re awake.” He smiles. God, I hate morning people. “Yea, I guess.” I chuckle. I’m up in more than one way, if you k
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Omg omg omg!!! I loved this chapter the most out of all of them, this is my favorite. I love how they have 3 kids now and they act just like Ryder. Hah poor Teddy. OLI 21, that's amazing. I hope Oli and Mark are still together. Awaiting the next book. With love Remijay ❤
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Thanks @Benji I'm trying to to get everything in order for the closing of this book. I'm glad you liked this chapter...
