Remijay
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Wow! I can seriously feel the emotions in the last two chapters. There is definitely Sparks flying when it comes to Teddy and Ryder... They just need to jump! The family being encouraging and helpful, plus his uncle telling him that his band will come to the bar and hear him. Oh thats going to be a fun chapter... This story is becoming very well written. I hope it becomes even better. I've already fell in love with Teddy and Ryder. Let's see where it goes. It can only get better or fall to pieces. Thanks for sharing, hugs!
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Again I loved it!!! Even more now because Ryder is showing us his softer side. And im glad that he actually had the balls to go over to Teddy's house. And also stay to have dinner. this is starting to look alot like something serious is going to happen. I just hope nothing too serious. Love ya Ace! Keep up the great work
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The Boy with Green Hair
Remijay commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Boy with Green Hair
Awesome chapter... I would absolutely love to be in a bar like that... Ryder needs to realize that not all popular guys are out to get him. Like I have said before, there is going to be alot of drama. Especially with Ryder and Teddy. I hope Teddy knows what he is doing. Lol okay of course not. But there with consequences. I need to finish Blinded. God, in so behind on that story lol Keep up the great work. Love it! -
Is there going to be more to this story? I fell in love with the plot twist. And the story itself. Thank you for sharing it
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This was a very cute chapter. I hope Cy doesn't let this define who he is as a person. That would be his downfall. As for Carter I hope he knows what he's getting himself into. I wouldn't want either of them to get hurt. Another Great chapter I loved it. All the emotions and anxiety. Keep up the good work.
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Absolutely loved this chapter comsie!!! Keep'em coming love ya
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That was cruel of Cy to do to Carter. However, I do believe Carter will be savor of Cy. Only time will tell in this case. Great 9 chapters. Sorry I haven't been posting or reading. Work is kicking my ass lately. Not including bring sick lol anyway, I love this book just like the other two.. hugs!
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Oh wow... oh wow... I absolutely loved this book. More than the first one... you did very well, especially at the end. I am proud to say it didn't end in death or horror. I hope book 3 is like this and the first. I hope everything works out great
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WOW! I absolutely loved this chapter... All the emotions and the craziness along the way... I have to say, Aiden can certainly handle himself, and if he ever loses himself, i dont know what I'd do... Aiden is a special person, that deserves to finally be happy. But i dont see this as a happily ever after type story. However, i do hope that i am wrong, and he can still have jayden. In the end, i hope everything works out. They deserve it... Thanks again for the awesome Chapter!
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This was a very cute chapter. a little fast but not in a bad way. I liked it. And I hope Aidens sake he can help Eli when he really needs it. Hugs
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i love this last chapter. I have missed the last 3 updates. It doesnt tell me when you update... Anyway, i love the emotion in this chapter, that followed the others. To see Aiden try to help him. Thats what a good friend is supposed to do. Great chapter... I hope everything will be kosher. Maybe!
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Chapter 7 “But Mom…!” I whined. She wanted me to stay home yet again for family dinner night. And yet again it is only us, my mother and I. How can this be a family night if the ‘family’ isn’t here? “No butts, Aiden. It is not a request, it is a demand. Your friends can have you tomorrow during school.” She said evenly, all calm and collected. I wish that I could muster up that calmness right now. I swear to god. My brother and sister can do whatever the fuck they want but me, no. Aiden has
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So it's been 2 years since the last update. Are you going to update more or are you done with this book. I feel in love with the characters it would be a shame not to write more. Hope to read .ore..
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HOLY FUCK! Damn that... that i don't think i have the right words to describe something like that. I can't believe his father. That SOB, Saying shit like that because he was angry at his son. Well i kind of believe it. He wants his son to do whatever he wants and when he wants. On the bright side though, Aiden is correct, if what his father said is true, then he doesnt have faults. He is essentially perfect candidate for a monster. And boy what is monster supposed to do when he's backed into a corner? Lovely chapter btw. Loved it! Keep'em coming. Remijay <3 hugs
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Twist of Fate Chapter 6 This is story wasn’t supposed to be dramatic or a soap opera. It was meant as a walk along through my years of high school. What I didn’t know and what people didn’t tell me was how hard it was going to get. They didn’t tell me that I had to deal with a past friend, or that I would be dealing with emotions and situations, that I wouldn’t normally be dealing with. This was supposed to be the year that I found myself, became who I am supposed to be, what I am meant to
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Wow powerful chapter. I hope for Aidens sake, his dad doesn't do anything malicious towards him... As for Jayden why didn't he tell anybody about the AP tests results.
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I have really enjoyed reading your two books. They have together brought happiness and sadness. Is this end of book two or is there more to come? I love how almost all the boys have grown to love one another and each other on a deeper level. They also like everyone too most of the time. That says alot about the author and the characters of the book. I wish for more to come. REMIJAY <3 HUGS
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I have i said this enough? I hate his father. Smh, how could a father like that, seriously? Ugh! Anyway, rant over. This was mushy chapter I liked it alot. Especially the emotions coming out to play. Who would have thought.
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I hope for Aidens sake he doesn't turn himself into another Reaper. Eli is surely someone not to mess with down there. This all came about because of Jamie. Hugs Aiden, at least he stopped before he did something that he would regret later.
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I do not like the fact that eli and jaydens dad talked. Especially about the wicked world as the underground. This cannot be good. Only evil can surface as the outcome. Poor jayden. Hugs. Good chapter otherwise.
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Awww so emotional. Jayden and Aiden will be one. I swear. Keep'em coming
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Wow. I loved it. Especially how protective Aiden is towards his sister. Would have never guessed. I've read all recent updates too. Aiden is actually beginning to let people touch him. Until he remembers what's going on lol. Anyway, I can't believe Brooke would do that. It doesn't seem possible. And Eli telling Aiden about afterwards, especially how Jamie reacted. Speechless. Keep'em coming. I've fallen in love with both stories.
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Return to The Underground
Remijay commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Return to The Underground
NO no no... i love your story dude. But i hope for Eli's sake he doesnt do what i think he's going to do. I love him, because of the first book but dont drag Aiden into it. no matter how hard he wants or needs to, don't. I would literally cry. Anyway, Getting in that car tells anyone who read the first book, that Eli isnt scared of the car anymore. Or the evilness that it brings with it. I just hope Aiden knows what he asked for. Because Eli is going to give him a glimpse of his past. Especially where Jamie is concerned. I am also relieved to find out that, Aiden and Eli didnt have a spark. That means Aiden can go after Jayden! Yay!!! ::Happy Dance:: -
A Kiss That Shook the World
Remijay commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in A Kiss That Shook the World
Wow!!! Wtf? Just happened... Aiden is not suppose to kiss Eli... ugh! No, he likes Jayden. I just finished reading the last few chapters. I have to say I love this story but what the hell is wrong with Aidens parent's? Pushing their kids to be something they're not. Especially Aiden. Why make him hurt people? Why make him be brutal when he doesn't have to be... I guess I'll have to read on and see if that changes. One day I hope Aiden kicks his father's ass for being an asshole towards him... that's my wish... -
Part G Later on that day Trent cornered me in the lunch room, he grabs my arm and yanks me down a nearly deserted hallway. Pushes me up against a locker and looks into my eyes. His eyes have flecks of green in them, so dreamy. “What do you think you’re doing, dude. Someone could see us.” I tell him, his lips are so close. So very close. A mere inch a way, how I could just move a little closer and we’d be touching. “I don’t care. I have been thinking about you all day. I cannot seem to get you
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