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Wow!!! Wtf? Just happened... Aiden is not suppose to kiss Eli... ugh! No, he likes Jayden. I just finished reading the last few chapters. I have to say I love this story but what the hell is wrong with Aidens parent's? Pushing their kids to be something they're not. Especially Aiden. Why make him hurt people? Why make him be brutal when he doesn't have to be... I guess I'll have to read on and see if that changes. One day I hope Aiden kicks his father's ass for being an asshole towards him... that's my wish...

Thanks. I'm glad to have a fan...

Part G Later on that day Trent cornered me in the lunch room, he grabs my arm and yanks me down a nearly deserted hallway. Pushes me up against a locker and looks into my eyes. His eyes have flecks of green in them, so dreamy. “What do you think you’re doing, dude. Someone could see us.” I tell him, his lips are so close. So very close. A mere inch a way, how I could just move a little closer and we’d be touching. “I don’t care. I have been thinking about you all day. I cannot seem to get you

i really do like you story Graeme. It's really sweet and loving how the two young adults have taken in the younger boys. They will learn as they go. Like every parent. Believe me, when i started to watch my nieces and nephews is was hell. However, i did get through it, just like they will. As for the grandparents, i don't see why the grandmother has it out for them. In my opinion why not leave well enough alone. And just be there for your grand kids. Ugh, i do understand though. They were brought up in an era were gay couples were just not allowed nor accepted. Old testament. I feel for the mother, was she is going through. I've had friends that went through what shes going through. It's a tough road and very hard at some points. She will get through it and come out on top. I'll keep reading. Hoping that the grandparents won't get custody. Thanks for the good read.

Thanks i would have to agree some comments/reviews are harsh. But it's constructive criticism, I think. It can either make me or break me. Thank you for the kind words. I have been writing for almost 6 years and I have improved so much in that time that I am shocked at what I can put into words.

[sharedmedia=stories:stories:5475] Hiya Guys/Gals, how is everyone doing. i wanted to start a discussion forum about my story and see what happens. Sometimes reviewing a story can be difficult. Meaning, once you post it, you can't edit or delete it. Especially if the Author comments. There's only so much that could be done. Twist of Fate. Aiden and Jason have a past, one that many like yourself probably dealt with. Because of that relationship Aiden has some problems adjusting to normal teenage life. He doesn't trust other guys, because of Jason. He doesn't have alot of friends because of Jason. He loves football and is good at it. His father wants him to be the best. But he just doesn't know if football is his calling or not. I can't give away everything... So please feel free to contact me here or on the review. There is another way to get in contact with me, email me @ starz0507@gmail.com Main Character - Aiden Sub Main Character - Jason James Best Friend - Courtney Only guy friend - Riley Two other friends - Jada, and Sasha A special apparentence -Xavier Family Mother - Casandra Father - Maxwell Sister - Samantha Brother - Kevin IF you guys/gals ever want pictures of my characters please ask. OR they probably won't ever be posted unless i feel like doing so. Anyway, like any teenage romance story. It's about love, hate, coming of age, sex, friends, school, sports, etc.

When i first started to write this book. i was making Jason the bad person in this story. But as it progresses i see him being more as a lean on me type of person. But then again things don't always seem like they are.. Thank you for the review.

When I hit the showers after practice, my body screamed at me. How could coach run me so ragged? Shaking my head I looked to the side of me, there stood Todd, standing maybe 5’7, every muscle on him screamed that he prided himself on the time spent in the gym. Dark brown hair, no blemishes on his body, nearly hairless except for the few patches of hair on his crotch, arm pits and a treasure trail. The boy was in my mind very handsome. Letting my eyes wondering down towards his privates, his dick

This chapter seemed kind of cheery. Even if Henry was being a total asshole. Doesnt he know when to shut the fuck up? Like seriously dude, take a hint. Jayden didnt need to know all about what Aiden's dad makes him do in the ring, nor about the manicures. Ugh, i would literally have hit him if i were Aiden. Anyway, i think the playist(s) would be alright. I hope you have some idea how to bring them to light. As for the get together that Jayden and Aiden have, i hope it's a blast.

Wow! I don't know how Aiden can do a favor like that. Eli isn't ready to be saved by anyone. In my opinion most times it takes the person to realize they need help. Professionals can only do so much before they hand their patient off to some one that has better experience at handling certain people. I get where Stephanie and Jacob are coming from. They miss the old Eli, before he got dragged kicking and screaming to hell. His soul isn't the same anymore. We all saw that in velocity. I love this story so far and I hope Aiden, can help Eli out. And he gets the boy that he likes.

Later that day, I just sat down to do some much needed homework. Practice did not start for another hour. The house was quiet, my parents and siblings were not home. Thank god. I didn’t need a headache before going. Or a lecture about how my dad wants to see me succeed as a football star. As if I’m any good. I was barely able to get a spot. Sighing I look at the clock and it just ticked past five. Fuck, forty five minutes before I have to leave. Looking down at my math two book, my eyes sort of

i like this chapter. I do have to reflect on how his parents arent in his or sisters life. Other than to say negative things. Parents shouldnt be like that. Look at Eli and his mother? They were all happy, loving, and supported each other. Until death came knocking at the door and everything went to shit. Aiden doesnt trust his emotions, they get in the way alot of the time, and then when he wants to show emotion it's like death. Either too much or too little. Brooke is absolutely right, Aiden doesnt know how to show emotion the correct way because of their parents.

Thanks. I've had a few friends like Jason. Wasn't always a good thing.

It’s been a little over three weeks since we have been back in school. I have found out that my used to be best friend, now douche bag, turned back into something, I haven’t figured out yet. My head is twirling from that day. I still can’t figure out why he did that. He’s not gay. He kicked my ass just to make sure I knew that. Now, I don’t fucking know what to do. I asked Courtney what she thought about it, and she pretty much said that he’s trying to psyche me out. Trying to get inside my hea

i love this story. I has taken me some time to actually re-read all of the chapters. Thankfully i remembers where i left off. Anyway, i absolutely loved this story. The way you worded some of the chapters, the twists and turns. Had me biting my nails. i screamed at the screen when Kye was almost died. Thankfully that didn't happen. and he filled out nicely from what Ash was saying. Indeed a very good read, thank you for sharing with us.

Let me tell you more about myself. I am 5’11, have sparkling green eyes, with medium brown hair, that came just below my ears. I have always styled my hair, everyday. I even dye it sometimes. Anywho, I don’t think I’m anything special. But I have been told by more than a hand full of people that I am really handsome. I have a good body, with suitable pecs and abs that are forming but not defined. As for my endowment… I would like to say it’s average, but it is slightly above the normal. I’m pret

Love it! Except the part where Jacob comes in. If it were not for him getting Eli involved with racing. Then Eli wouldnt be who he is in this story.. Anyway, i hope Aiden picks Jayden. They seem like a cute couple. As for finding out the Jayden is Matt's younger brother is a bummer. The pain he must have felt when Aiden said those things.

Thank you for the review. Sometimes some old, same old is good. But not when trying to write something new. Again thank you

i dont either lol Thank you

How could I not see it coming, the day that I started at this high school? The way the kids acted around this place. How could I not see this coming? I asked this same question every morning before, strolling up to the building which kept us captive for eight hours a day. However, today wasn’t like any other day. Where I would walk into this building with no-one noticing, no-one caring. I say this because nobody really cares that I am in the same school as them. I am invisible to them all. Shak

Aiden, 16 year old. Wandering through school. Over coming obstacles and relationship(s).

Jacob cheated on Zach with a guy at the club. i thought i put that part into the interlude. But apparently not. Anyway, after that everything became more confusing for them both. Having Nathan Nichole decide his fate. But Scott messed big time!

I am sorry. When i wrote this story, i wasnt the greatest. And i apologize. The time line in this story doesnt flow together. The characters in it changed. Along with what happened. The newer chapters are alot better than the previous chapters. i am also missing two chapters. I hope in all i havent discouraged you in reading my other stories. OR finishing this one. Thank you, for taking the time to review my story.

What! Ahh fuck! Shits going to hit the celing this time .Didnt Aiden ask nicely not be paired with Eli? Ugh, dude. Are you trying to start something here? LOL i know i got sucked into the plot of this chapter. Anyway, i liked this chapter .Especially how Aiden showed off his sensitive side towards a kid that couldn't defend himself. i am still apprehensive about him doing both things, but only time will tell with this story.

They say those feelings you experience right before something good or bad happens shapes the way you look at it in the future. As we were leaving that night, my dad snaps one last photo of us. We smile at him and run for the limo. No more pictures, haha except for at Prom. Don’t get me wrong, I am very photogenic but not when its embarrassing for me. Not including Eric. He’s beat red. The color suits him very nicely though, especially with the tux that he has on. I can’t wait to rip it off him