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Hamen Cheese

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  1. Hey. I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it. The story itself is complete though about a quarter of it is unreleased. I release a chapter a week, every Monday.
  2. Yeah, that's why I had to edit it because that part would have become unclear. Hehe.
  3. Haha. Thanks! I'm glad to hear I'm contributing to a HEALTHY addiction.
  4. CHAPTER 30: A New Task “You need to start paying me for my services, Mr. Lowry.” “Wha…?” I heard myself croak. I was having the most fascinating dream about grey haired horses and floating orange cloaks. Somewhere in there, I remember seeing a chicken with the head of Madame Rooste which was when I figured out that I must have been dreaming. The world was never that funny. “Drink this,” a female voice said. “It will make you feel better.” I felt soft, practiced hands lift me up from the back
  5. Thanks Andy! A lot of these questions will get answered in the coming chapters, though a few won't... maybe I might write them into the latter chapters before I release them. It's definitely something to think about hehe.
  6. CHAPTER 29: A Deal with Death Jacob was waiting for me when I got back to our room. “How’d it go?” he asked as soon as I entered. He seemed almost strange in asking it. Considering that he was in tears in our last meeting, he seemed unusually… upbeat. He kept smiling in a way that suggested he had gotten over what was troubling him earlier. Yet, I couldn’t shake the feeling that he was feeling something different deep inside. Perhaps I was just overthinking things. “It was okay,” I responded
  7. Thanks! I'm really glad to see people enjoy reading what I write.
  8. I suppose you'll have to wait and see. I have finally gotten around to editing the rest of the story. They're just waiting to be released.
  9. Lol. That's up for you to interpret hehe. And as far as gay squadron, well... lol. I can say Adam, Jacob, and Brian are gay. I'd think that Rick is just flirtatious and perhaps a bit of a clown.
  10. Hehe. I certainly wouldn't mind experiencing something like that though.
  11. Thanks!
  12. Hehe. I never thought of it that way. I just figured that power and greed blinds people from seeing the obvious.
  13. I love that series. Elements of that series actually influenced some characters and scenes in my story.
  14. Thanks hehe. You'll see soon though that the story doesn't dwell so much on the school. This story was released around the same time as another story about a mage academy so I decided to stay away from that topic just so there wouldn't be too many similarities. And mages are hot, plain and simple!
  15. Thanks Douw!
  16. CHAPTER 28: The Crystal Prison “As I told you, Adam, we have to be careful on whom we trust,” Magister Aenhol hastened to say as we were walking. Jacob and I saw him leaving from the Mage Academy and caught up with him to confirm the news we had heard. We were making our way towards the Mage Council chambers where he was expected, immediately it seemed. “It hasn’t even been a day yet and the city’s in an undesirable state of panic. People should not have known about this for at least a few days
  17. I was under the distinct impression that we all had one common ancestor... Myr from whom all good things come. Or was it old bob?
  18. I believe it was Dom Luca's Desert Dropping.
  19. Judging from my itunes library, you've pretty much downed most of my songs hehe. You might want to try Owl City. The lead vocalist's voice is kinda weird but some songs really got to me like "If My Heart was a House" and "Vanilla Twilight". I dunno, you might enjoy it. For slower songs, I have older favorites like Sarah McLachlan's Fallen and Regina Spektor's Samson. I also liked the band The Script. I miss The Corrs (which you mentioned). I really should look for their CDs here. I'm pretty sure there is a cassette tape lying somewhere around here also... hehe.
  20. CHAPTER 27: The Challenge It was a day for new things as I found myself awake, snuggled naked next to a sleeping Jacob. He had his arms wrapped around me. It was a long time before we fell asleep panting and exhausted. Fortunately, we didn’t explode anymore the night before (at least not in a way that permanently damaged the room). I breathed in the morning air and it was… different. Other than the fact that I could still distinctly smell the results of our lovemaking, something about it seeme
  21. CHAPTER 26: Lucas Barstow 

Jacob and I had to use one of the other unoccupied rooms while our own was being repaired. Magister Va’aelua said that the magic inflicted on the walls were “so intense” that there was still residual magic lingering in the room preventing it from being repaired.

 The conversation we had afterwards was just… awkward. I was not sure who was more embarrassed between us. A pink blush permanently marred his cheeks and he quite resolutely diverted his eyes as we spoke. I
  22. CHAPTER 25: I Am Ho-o “You nyuuww that Ryuun guy is konda cool,” Jacob said in between mouthfuls of potato wedges. We had one day off before we needed to get back to training and Jacob and I were spending most of our day going around the city. We decided to have some dinner at a place that was known to have really good potato wedges before heading back to our room. I watched in fascinating as each potato wedge disappeared into his mouth. It almost seemed like he just swallowed, not even bother
  23. CHAPTER 24: Saphiron “I’m glad you guys could make it,” Brian said as soon as we were within earshot. He seemed almost worried that we wouldn’t show up. “It’s not like we had anything better to do really,” Jacob replied. Brian looked over at Jacob as though to check if he meant anything by it. Jacob and I had spoken the night before and I finally managed to convince him to be nice to Brian. I knew deep down he understood that my injury wasn’t Brian’s fault. Besides, my little injury let us ha
  24. CHAPTER 23: Combat Magic 101 “Yeah, that’s it. Harder Adam. Come on! Show me what you’re made of.” That was Brian speaking somewhere to my right. I was facing one of the walls erected in the middle of our training room. I was trying to “blow it apart with my mind” as Brian called it. So far, it’s been stubbornly resisting to blow. “Ok, maybe this isn’t one of your strengths,” Brian suggested. We’ve been training for five days. During that time, he has shown me the different combat techniques
  25. CHAPTER 22: The Struthius Squad “Wow,” Jacob said as we made our way through another set of steps up away from Lady’s Helena’s quarters. “What’s it like having a Mage Lord as a mom?” Brian gave us a wan smile. “It’s a little tough sometimes. I can’t break as many rules as I’d like to and people always expect a little more from me. Even as a squad leader, they expect more from me than other squad leaders.” “Uhm, don’t take this the wrong way,” Jacob said, “but you look a little young to be a s
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