Always jumping in to review first Frosty :hug:How is that cruel showing you snippets? It gives you something to think about..not cruel at all And dont complain about Monopoly thanks Frosty
I am so in love with this story this is the second time I've read it and I was still gripped throughout it. I love your style of writing Jian and you always make me feel emotions towards the characters.
All the way through the story I had butterflies.
Good job!
i immediately like this story and I agree with Bleu that you seem to be able to hold the reader's attention right from the first sentence
Lots of things to be considering right now that leave us guessing as per usual
Great start, looking forward to seeing where this goes
MATT
I could see a battlefield, I was high above it. Below me I could see Hquaio tearing in the ranks of the Dark Path’s followers.
The stench of blood was almost overpowering even at this height.
The landscape had changed dramatically: Energy burns ravaged the land; the once beautiful meadows were now barren, both sides’ Energy warping it.
I saw a Dark Practitioner take out a score of warriors with a well aimed blast, the soldiers dying instantly under the assault.
Can't believe I didnt review this sooner!
I loved the chapter, things are still really disjointed between Blake and Haze, and I think Blake isnt going to get himself under control any time soon and also poor Haze, what did he do to piss is mum off that much? from the sounds of it its like he's having to dispose of a dead body! or something almost as bad.
Looking forward to the next chapter
LOL I bet you'll be a hoot Conner
I dont think details will be sorted for a while though.
And yay someone from outside Europe is coming
Oh and btw you american members, we have a Canadian coming why aren't you? hehe
This was such a thought provoking piece and I can only echo the thoughts of the others here in the sense that is was a deeply saddening piece but captures the realism of relationships so well.
So glad I read this it was excellent.
Ok, I will post these pics and then stop for a while lol
So a lot of people know I do martial arts but Ive never really shown pics of me in my gi (suit). so here are some pics of me in my jiu jitsu gi (hence the white belt ive only just started jitsu ) however im performing karate techniques lol as I didnt have my karate gi with me.
Oh and I don't take any responsibility for mental scarring or my chest that is shown (stupid jitsu gi is so baggy it doesnt stay still )
There is a possibility I might just take the pictures down after a while lol but meh
Yes my room's a mess...it will be tidied....soon
I really enjoyed this story and it was touching between Danny and Joey at the end
It makes me angry everytime I hear of abuse but reading and knowing about it is vital.
Thanks Cia, really good story
I actually laughed out loud at the ending of this one
Frosty if you're reading this get your hubby to write more (and you for that matter )
Actually, at first it sounded serious until he got more and more delusional
Great comic piece
This was a fun, light hearted story and I really enjoyed it. Thankfully I'm not so clumsy as that, but having people like Chris who don't care and just gently tease is excellent
Good job
You did very well in that respect and more to Tim's side eh? I look forward to hearing about that.
New chapter soon yes?
Oh and this is my 500th post :D :D :D
I will never throw the first punch, slap etc etc, but if someone decides to fight me they should expect me to react regardless of whoever it might be. I would scale the level of force depending on the size of the individual and since doing Jitsu I have learnt throws so I could subdue people with less strikes than before.
But yeah if people punch me I'm sure as hell not going to just take the beating.
I would be hesitate to hit a woman though and would probably just block her attacks until I was cornered or in a position where it got dangerous, thankfully Ive learnt how to avoid any sort of confrontation.