Agaith

MATT The entire palace was buzzing in the lead up to the festival and I couldn’t help but get caught up in the atmosphere of it all. Helping prepare baskets of food to send to the villages, helping the healers deal with the very ill that usually couldn’t get to a healer, but made the trip for the festival; I even tried a game of Asenshi but played miserably. Asenshi was a game played in midair and all the players were in a large cylinder of Energy. However, they all started at the

Hey whisper (I'm on the ball this time and noticed you ) Glad you are enjoying the site so much already be sure to review and let authors know how you found their work

You. Are. Evil. Fact. I demand chapter 17 right now Such an evil thing to do and Haze really has gotten so much worse. Will Haze's disapperance only push Blake further into his own problems? Ooooh such an interesting chapter, story, everything

NOOOOOOO I keep forgetting to view this thread sorry again But hello to all new members hope you have an excellent time here

I'd like to thank immensely Dargon who is my Editor and Frostina, my beta reader. As well as being superb friends they also make my work readable So thanks guys :D :D :D :hug:

well I agree with nephy, arrogance like that is one of my pet hates and in real life turns me off to no end However I am looking forward to how it plays out between Clive and Phil. Clive needs taking down a peg or two hopefully that happens Great start dont keep us in suspenders for too long

Hmm it's funny that I read an article in New Scientist today about free will. From the looks of it, people's opinion of whether free will exists can change quite a bit and people's responses to certain social situations or challenges change between those who think they have free will and those that dont

thanks Andy! I like the comment about the training, you might get to see the consequences of it in the story. And i am very glad im improving, hope to keep on doing so no matter how quickly

Looking guuuuurrrdd Frostyy

I dont use ebooks so I guess I fall into the ink and paper category

HAPPY BIRTHDAY JEFF!! :D (The big 21, I know who to turn to for booze if I visit )

Aww sorry for spoiling your dinner but on the plus side I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter And yes...it is the same Darhan we talked about in Birmingham Thanks for reading

well yes Arensha is evil seeing as though he is the main antagonist and do you really think he is going to be killed off right now? lol not happening heheh thanks for reading Frosty

MATT The first thing I immediately could tell was that I had had no visions that night; a fact for which I was eternally grateful. Today was the first day of the production of Dan’s bow. I had gone over plans with the Master Forge man and the plans he had were beautiful. Dan had more training today and I wondered how he was coping with it all. He had never once voiced a complaint about his training to me. I took it as a good sign; he would let me know if something was tro

wow such an excellent chapter! like the others have said, that really didnt feel like 11K + the chapter went so quick! I feel so sorry for Blake he just can't seem to find any stability and this is going to make him worse I fear. (you can type at the speed of light yes because i cant wait for another chapter)

:o I'm later than Nephy for once! Can't believe I've lost tabs on this thread. Welcome and belated welcome to all who have arrived since my last post lol. Have fun, try and be as crazy as the rest of us enjoy

HAVE A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY SKY! :D

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DOUW!!!!!!!! HAVE A GREAT DAY! :D :D

Wow what a wonderful review nephy! Thank you I'm glad I'm improving and I hope that it will keep on that way Formatting...groan I will try again to look at it thanks for mentioning it

Who's sleeping outside?

If you dare stop this story I will lose you somewhere in England Anyway! I really enjoyed the opening chapter (I like the fighting aspect hehe) And there is plenty to make us want the next chapter, plenty of questions I've asked myself so please continue

More more more more more! I need more! I am so caught up in this story and hoping things will work out. This is a great story

Seriously, either you have major insecurities or you have no sense of humility or morality whatsoever. I agree with the others, being an alpha male doesn't mean 'I've slept with more girls than you' etc etc. An alpha male is respected and in turn respects those around him. Not returning respect just makes you a prick, and you have to earn respect in the first place. Manipulating people for sex? What a pleasant person you must be. And you've met 6 people since this thread started? Good for you...that's six pieces of evidence to show you need to gain more morals. I'm wondering when she finds out if you'll even meet with her in person to apologise. Look long and hard at yourself in the mirror, without telling yourself how good you think you look, and say to yourself why you feel the need to do this and why your girlfriend means so little to you. Because, like everyone else has said, she is going to get hurt and you don't sound like you have considered her once.

This chapter makes you sad? How come? In other news oh dear Coop had better come up with something quick lol Loving the story Jian

Please West, let paya deal with your 'excitement' the rest of us dont need to see that As for programme, I'll probably leech around some people maybe lol and just follow like a sheep And as for meeting places seeing as though I wont be staying in London I'm easy. ( Easy only in terms of meeting places )