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hehehe Im such the exception to that rule Apparently I gave my parents a torrid time as a kid but I'm all sweet and innocent now Congrats Andy at least you wont be bringing home twice the bundle of fun

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Hey Dandevdrew nice to meet you. Im really glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for reading

I havent read them know but ive heard things about them but that didnt even cross my mind when I wrote that. Dan needed a mentor and a source of Energy, what better than a sarcastic load of smoke in an amulet! The battle will be in this book, it will all happen here Thanks for reading Anyta

lol err thanks I'll save a better reply for in the forum then Thanks for reading

Congrats Cia! Even with your new found power I will still be cheeky in chat congrats once again

That sounds like a plan to me Nephy

I wasn't charming enough?! Just kidding hehehe Summer is turning out to be a busy period for me but, as I said above, if I can afford it ill be there

Simple answer: Such a turn off lol

Gah patience is something I lack when it comes yo your stories This is already a sweet story and set to get even better I'm sure. I love the interaction between Haze and Ace, like Ara said it brings a smile to my face when they talk Thanks Nephy

It's about time Matt trusted Dan more huh? It may not put them on an equal footing but Dan certainly has a role to play Thanks for reading

Ah the bow...you'll find out later in the story ;)hehe I like to use vivid descriptions of places And I love Sarala as well, she injects some more humour into it Thanks for reading

yeah I wanted something that was quite hard hitting. hehe im glad I shocked some people

Thanks Chevalier good to have you on board

That's so cool Im inspiring you to write fantasy! well I know you know the secret now as ive been awol in my replies but I hope I can surprise you again along the way

Hey again peeps! Chapter 11 is up for everyone to read

MATT The twin suns projected their brilliant light onto the surface of Galwrock as they did every day. I could hear the Falls of Truth thundering in the distance as I surveyed more acolytes frantically training in the build up to the war. I was annoyed at not being able to spend this day, the day after everything came out, with Dan, but I had a duty to Galwrock and all the Galwrons that were here. Dan was still in bed; he was still asleep as I got ready. He must have been so emot

So well deserved! Congrats! (i can say I hugged a hosted author)

If i know I can afford it in the summer then I'm in

you weren't grumpy, or frayed, or fat Nephy. You missed yourself out with the compliments so here we go I'll have a stab at it When I got to my hotel late Friday night I was tired after a hectic afternoon and Nephy very kindly text me to make sure I had reached the hotel ok. She then proceeded to ask me if I wanted to come on a walk with the group, and, even with me being shy, nervous and tired I agreed to go along... Nephy was the first person to greet me and I instantly fell in love with her. Regardless of what she says on here, she made me feel like a part of the group instantaneously as did the others. Nephy's kindness and generosity to me was touching and I'm sure you touched the hearts of everyone at the meet with your personality, even through your pain. So thank you as well Nephy for making it special...and don't leave yourself out of the compliments after saying such nice things about us! (you know what those hugs feel like in real life now hehe)

Arggh I just get hooked straight back in after only one chapter with how you write Owl. :)I'm so rubbish with reviews im just gonna say I love how the story is developing and I love all the characters (except old man templeton and Candace )

Nephy will now make it her weekend's mission to say things that will make us all blush scarlet

hehe I can forgive you the ending it's left more on a tease than anything Already it's sad to read how troubled Silver still is and how troubled River is too by his whether he thinks he can truly make Silver better. You've said this will be a roller coaster so I'm not even hoping that its going to get better soon lol Wonderful writing as always Nephy thanks

this was a very interesting chapter lots of things to pick up, like questions about Haze's anger, why Rowan and Ash push Haze like they do, and what Haze's parents are going to do. Thought provoking chapter thanks Nephy

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