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  1. Andi

    Chapter 3

    Hey^^, i can´t understand why there are so few Reviews. I love your Story so far and i hope there are much more chapters coming in the future. The chapters are not too short thats good too. You have my Blessing to continue . Liebe Grüsse Andi
  2. Oh i´m not good at writing Reviews, if i could write in german it would be better, i sooo love this! I can´t wait for the next chapter, please write faster! *g* and give that *beep* Howard a good kick in the nuts. Is there something missing? ->My heartbeat quickened as I (.....?) With my strength giving out and the pain creeping in on me, I tried one more time to free myself. He quickly grabbed my head and slammed it onto the hood once more and shoved all of himself into me. The pain was too much and all With the restrain order you are giving a little hint, want more hehe but i think that will come later. Hope to read a lot more and thx for writing this Liebe Grüße Andi
  3. Andi

    Chapter 7

    Wow i wonder why there aren´t any review´s, i think its ab beautiful story and hope you write more, i could kick tony´s ass^^. i hope i won´t have to wait long for the next chapter lg andi
  4. Andi

    Epilogue

    I also think it was a good story for youre first try but i think it lacked suspense and real action like a kidnapping of dean, or a blackmail that would draw dean out. Nonetheless i want to read more from you - practice makes perfekt^^
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    Chapter 1

    Mhm wow very interesting, i like youre 1. chapter, its something new. Are these vampires or shapeshifters naturally born or can get the humans shifted? I hope to read more in the future, but i won´t wait months for the next chapter^^!
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