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Very satisfying. Thank you.

Thank you. You're kind. I appreciate it. All the best.

Sorry, I loved it when it was mostly revolving around Jake and DM, but the single-sentenced paragraphs since the network got so big and the banter got so dagged has trivialized it and turned me off. The narrator waves his magic wand too much, none of the characters has enough substance, I've stopped caring. Sorry. that's how I'm feeling. Thanks for the ride, but I'll walk from here.

Nice balance of sympathy, concern, effort, effort, shape, intention.... I like your narrator.

I found a story I wanted to read, but could not find the first chapter. Very frustrating. Not quite traumatizing, but triggering... I've had this problem before, and it's one reason I rarely come back to the site unless by accident I've found a story Ithat absorbs me, and then I get emails with hte next installment. But getting started on a new story has pitfalls that you may not know are there if you are a frequent visitor and remember the way back..... I can't remember the trick of it. This must be a problem for other potential readers... COuld you fix it? Imagine you've never visited the site before and are looking for a story that will make you feel less alone. Very discouraging. Happy new year to you, too. Paul

Navigating the site... Stupid question, but now that I'm curious, how do I get to the first chapter? I can't find a link.

Leave them begging for more much?

Thanks for this chapter. I've been anxious all day. Reading thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis snapped me out of it; you got the magic touch.

The chemistry in this story iswas reminding me at the beginning, the "not an easy lay" part, of Kontrol and Kaos-- which is high praise for our author here, since I haven't seen anything in 20 years as cool and fun and high=fantastical as that love match between the hot guy who just wants this semester to be easy and the boy who's going to play the hard-to-get game according to the rules. Very hot chemistry between these guys, and I'm loving following them around every bend that wants to be stroked. Also, I like Rusty.

More! more! more!

Does Chapter 9 exist yet? Today being 7/5/21