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Okay, Mr. KC, I've accepted the fact that Tanner is dead, so now there's a new mission in view, not Tanner and Gabby being together but not proving that, that BITCH Amanda and Ethan killed him. I'm sorry I have no for sympathy for Ethan he was there, he could have swerved and stopped the sea hag from hitting him all together if he had any balls...anyway he is just as guilty as her. I hope the guilt literally eats him alive. enought of my rant. Great chapter, poor, Tanner. I still would not be upset if you did a Dallas moment, that way I wouldn't to do a Mesery moment...LOL Seriously, KC, Loved it!!!!!
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Chapter 14 If I Ever Lose This Heaven...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 14 If I Ever Lose This Heaven...
Girl, you know how we do it...hours on the phone, skype, in person just chatting about our characters like they are family memebers...lol I love that we can do that and help each other along the way. you are awesome, Jammi, so thank you. I actually like the progression of the story and it to me was just time. the right situation presented it's self and... there's a lot of love there, and that's whats sad, Christian can build new memories which he's more than willing to do, but there's something to be said about the lost ones as well. Tag is a very complexed individual so you never know with him. Thanks again, Chica, you rock majorly.. Kim -
Chapter 14 If I Ever Lose This Heaven...
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Awwwwww, Frosty *ducks head and blushes* truly a compliment thank you. I agree with you and KC, I'm gonna miss them too.Danke, Kim -
Chapter 14 If I Ever Lose This Heaven...
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Merci, Dave, I got ya a few more coming your way. thanks for still hanging in there with me, love it!!!! Kim -
Chapter 14 If I Ever Lose This Heaven...
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Thanks soooo much Lisa,Lisa...lol I was a little nevrous putting it out there it is Chris and David, I wanted it to be just right...Not sure about the smooth sailing thought just saying. There is some intersting stuff comimng up for Tag and Jimmy so we'll see... Again thanks sooo much for reading and taking the time to leave me a review, I really appreiciate it...really -
Chapter 14 If I Ever Lose This Heaven...
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It did indeed, Krisz, just what the doctor ordered, then again a love making is a great remedy...just saying hehehethanks for the lovely review... Kim, -
Chapter 14 If I Ever Lose This Heaven...
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2 hot men indeed... lol, even though the chapter was soley them finally connecting or rediscovering themselves again there was a lot of stuff going on. them coming to a good place was one, Tag contemplating a few things and such. Ooooo been looking for it..I will be checking tommorrow for sure ah, yes It's a comming I was thinking about it being after this story if I can't fit it in between for sure after... IZ excited... Thanks, RC -
Chapter 14 If I Ever Lose This Heaven...
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Thank you, Big Daddy...I appreiciate the review. I hate writing scenes where they make love and I enjoy doing it at the same time. You just have to have the right amount, one that fits the story so I'm glad that it seems to have worked out for those two. Kim -
Chapter 14 If I Ever Lose This Heaven...
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intune, thanks so much for all you do in helping me get the chapters ready...I must agree, I love Tag and Jimmy too and Chris, you just never know a lot of the getting his memory back as the doctor said might just be solely up to him... we'll just have to wait and see Kim -
Chapter 14 If I Ever Lose This Heaven...
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Danke, KC. I can't do it like you, so I'm glad you felt like the love scene worked...classy even *blushes* Kim -
Christian glanced up meeting David’s heated stare. His eyes appeared an indigo blue; want and desire filled them. “Chris.” David’s voice was timid and low as if he was afraid to ask, “Are you sure?” Christian’s nod was weak, but he was certain. Not only did he want this, he needed this. It was as if everything shifted and his body took over, screaming to be touched, to be held. He felt like he was dying inside and that exceeded any fears he had. He almost felt guilty for needing David thi
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Scotty, thank you soooo much. Iz blushing over here big time. I'm glad you are still enjoying the story and the quotes...YAY!!!!! Things you shouldn't be doing eh? Thanks for the amazing review and please call me Kim.
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Hey, Krisz *waves* thank you for reading Hello My Name is... I know I sound like a broken record but it's the comments that fuel the writer's soul so thanks for leaving one. There is a old saying "All the good guys are either married or gay...lol in this case it's both Hahahaha Kim
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Awww, thanks for such an amazing review..I really makes me feel GREAT to know my lil story hasn't started to bore ya. Totally love the kids too. I personally think they are what the doctor ordered. As Christian continues to move forward he'll encounter other stuff that he will have to muttle through and yes David will be by his side the whole while. Is there such thing as a "girl husband?" lolMerci, Lisa. Kim
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There's nothing here, dang it, Hoope it was something cool though... LOL
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Hehehe.... I loved that scene too, intune. and the next chapter is almost finished so we shall see where that one starts. Thanks for all your help, love working with you and thanks for leaving a review
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Merci, Dave...I'm hoping Christian started to remember some things too you just never know with these things hopefully he won't forget tonight... Kim
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Danke, KC super excited that you're reading and still enjoying my lil old story. Will Christian start to remember remains to be seen, but hopefully tne next chapter will spark something...just saying Kim
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Hummm, Frosty you're right it could go either way...didn't think about it that way...lol Yeah poor Christian is getting all over the place.Thanks for reading and letting me know you were still hanging in there with me. Hope all is going well for you and yours... Kim
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And you're welcome kind, Sir. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I love Chris and his sons together they are amusing to say the least and poor Christian, Liam wanting a girl husband...lol You think Chris is ready for the "man lovin" lets see if he follows through...hahaha you're thanking me, It's I that should be thanking you, so... Thank you, RC
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Thank you Big Daddy, So glad you're enjoying the story. I'm having fun writing it and with great reviews like this one it's just the icing on the cake. And yes it's about time Kim
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Thanks my dear. You're right a lot of stuff happened. I love Christian with his sons, they give him a run for his money for sure. He's a real trooper thats for sure, getting back in the saddle can be pretty tough, but he keeps giving it the old college try.Yay...He did want David didn't he, it's about dang time and David was there when he needed him. Thanks for all your help with this story, chica I really appreicate it. Kim
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“Here you go.” Christian placed the bowl of honey nut cheerios in front of Liam and smiled as he dug in right away. “Thank you, Daddy,” he said between chews. “You’re welcome, Son.” Christian laughed and tousled Liam’s hair. “Slow down, don’t choke.” He sighed contently before turning his attention to Ethan who was eating his cereal with his fingers. Picking up each cheerio one at a time and popping it into his mouth. “It’s going to take you all morning if you continue to eat with your
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I love this story, and because I love Tanner and gibby it's hard for me to imagine Tanner being a ghost. Spending the day together...the kiss is just sad...people who love each other should be together, that's my stance... KC, you leave me wanting more and as much as I hate Monday's I look forward to them...thanks for such an intreging story and if you decide to do a "Dallas," Moment I won't be mad at ya...just saying
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Totally missed this.... I live in Indy...
