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Celethiel

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  1. am i getting darker?i was emulating the Spanish Inquisition through the point of view of the victim...
  2. Thanx for thinking so, and the review.
  3. thanx
  4. thanx
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    And We Are Alone

    Thanx.Well I developped this on the idea of three different types of pain... the first one is physical... The second is Emotional... and the Third is spiritual... he's blaming his god for not saving his family.
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    And We Are Alone

    from deep inside that dusty library that's my head PUT AWAY those surgeon tools
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    And We Are Alone

    Thanx.
  8. your sense is a good approximation of the story i built in my head behind these three poems... since i was picturing a Man during the Spanish Inquisition
  9. And We Are Alone It is over now I ask you why You broke your vow For you did lie She holds their seed She wants it dead Who can I plead? For where you lead My son so small He is now lame Heard not his call You are to blame And these my hands Let them both rot And fall in sands For I could not But you never did And we are alone For what you bid Wish I had known
  10. I Was Once Strong Now a cruel shove Brings me to see All that I love Kneel before me Cutting like a knife My son screams My bloody wife Into my dreams Why does she bow? She is no whore I beg you now Please do no more For all I hear I cannot sleep Broken in fear I can only weep I was once strong No longer so Where did I wrong? To bend so low Nothing is left They took it all I am bereft Not but to crawl There is no light The final blow The end in sight Now I shal
  11. To Feast the Crow To settle a score Command me strip Blood on the floor I taste the whip You hurt me so For what you shun Much to my woe I cannot run You cut my flesh And blood does flow And torn still fresh To feast the crow You call me liar And when I quake For your desire My bones you break And sleep comes slow For still I ache For yet I know Worse when I wake
  12. Any horror leaves scars, physical, emotional, and spiritual. Some run deeper and last longer than others
  13. well we all need some time off...you, me... hollywood.... even god takes a little time off, how do you think the dark ages happened just ask Bruce All-mighty.
  14. we don't never mind you at all
  15. I like Imager Portfolio too i've never read john campbell's stuff though i don't think.
  16. Then i wouldn't have any, because i could never just have five, i'd never be able to make up my mind on which Only five i could have... although The Hobbit would be in the titles.
  17. A robin william's Tribute, someone i watch on Youtube did.
  18. do i even want to know... lol.
  19. oh yeah i saw him in that
  20. Richard Attenborough who a lot of people of my generation remember as the quirky owner of Jurassic Park, who spared no expense even on icecream died on the 24th. He was 90. http://news.yahoo.com/actor-director-richard-attenborough-dies-90-212939590.html on another note Another Famous Person the older generations may have known also died, but was not covered as much. Lauren Bacall on the 12th. Wife of Humphry Bogart, and Jason Robards and mother of 2 children by Bogart, Stephen Bogart a Producer and Leslie Bogart, a yoga instructor...and one with Jason Robards, Sam Robards, an actor.. I remember her mostly for her costaring rolls with John Wayne in Blood Alley, and The Shootist, and with Rock Hudson in Written on the Wind. She was 89. She left a sizable sum to take care of her dog.... which is how i found out about this.
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    Chapter 4

    Thanx
  22. Celethiel

    Chapter 3

    might be
  23. Celethiel

    Chapter 2

    three or four lol.
  24. Celethiel

    Chapter 1

    Thanx
  25. Celethiel

    Chapter 3

    i do beleave posting adult-underage sex goes against posting rules... just so you know... in which case, and in which if Roman is over age (i haven't seen you specify his age yet... however if the eldest is 30, i find it hard imagine Roman isn't over 18...although he doesn't act like it...)
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