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Omg, Omg, Omg, EVERYONE KNOWS but Derek! How can he be that obtuse?! Oh yeah, as I said before; he's too self-absorbed. lol Ok, I know now; Becca's gonna bring a DUDE!!!!!! Hahahah, that would be THE BEST!!!!! Let's really confuse Derek now! lol

Holy crap! I was just thinking about this story and Max and Josh yesterday! I am so thrilled you updated; this is one of my favorite stories on ANY site! Ok, so Annie has a big, thick manila envelope and she's going into town. Hmmmmm, and William the prick has not been around in awhile. Me thinks she's wanting a divorce. Which of course would mean David wouldn't get any opposition from William about hanging around after the summer's over. Well of course there's the minor problem of HIS father. Idk, I just want David to stay so they can both be together. Now that Billy knows David feels the same way. And bad, bad author; leaving us with such a cliffie!!!! Hopefully we won't have to wait for such a long time to read about their adventures! lol Great chapter, hate all that angst; glad it's over for now.....

Oh. My. f**king. God. Kyle, as in Spencer's BEST FRIEND Kyle?????? Holy shit. Wait, Kyle being Coop's ex, isn't that like breaking the "guy code", you know, where you don't hook up with your friends' ex's? Holy crap. Now, on to Coop: you know, I'm in love with Chase. He drove a friggen' THREE HOURS to watch Coop play volleyball! Coop's right; guys just don't do that for the hell of it. Plus Chase is so sweet, telling Coop all the right things. I hope he's sincere, b/c Coop is really falling for him. As far as Cooper and Spencer; I can easily see that they're gonna hate each other. And that's a shame. They were great roommates and better friends (well, of course before Coop ever met Kyle, lol). It'd be a shame for their friendship to end, but how are they BOTH gonna get over the betrayals? After all, Coop did betray Spencer with Chase, even though he's been trying to be good about it, and Spencer betrayed Cooper by sleeping with his ex. I can't wait to see how this turns out! Excellent, excellent chapter; can't believe you left us with such a cliffie!!!!!

Wow, that Camaro is the shitz! lol I want one too..... So of course Derek has it bad for Rebecca; she's the only girl in the whole entire STATE that isn't after him! And I wonder why that is. And plus she's good friends w/Charlie; does she know Charlie's secret? And I could totally see other people figuring things out about Charlie, but not Derek. Never Derek. He's way too self-absorbed to notice anything at all about his best friend. Now I'm wondering when and how Derek did finally find out and why did it ruin his life..... You definitely know how to keep the suspense going Hamen! Can't wait for the next chapter. Shit, I'm gonna have to wait another week. Damn.......

No, no, no Jonothan!!!!! Is that it???????? It's not over, is it????????????? Omg, Travisssssssssssssssss; what's gonna happen to him? Davis'll get him off, right (no, not that way, you perv! lol). I mean it was self-defense, although the second shot may not have been....hahah Oh man, I'm gonna miss Travis, ok, maybe Tyler too, just a wee bit. I think I'll definitely miss Davis; I really liked him and he treated Travis so nicely. They would have been great together. Now Travis is just gonna become someone's bitch in jail. What an awesome ride this has been; sort of like a roller coaster ride, like I've been on Magic Mountain for all these weeks and just got off. (no, not that way again you perv! haha) Hey, maybe you'll do a sequel: Nowhere Boy Doin' Jail Time..... Well, at least I have Coop and Chase and Spencer to keep me busy now.....(sniff, sniff)

Well, glad to see Coop's trying to do the right thing w/Spencer and Chase. And it's good he can feel guilt w/Spencer. Loved the gay-ing it forward! Hahah, like "Pay it Forward"! And hey, I take offense: I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE Avril Lavigne!!!!! (although her latest CD isn't as good as her others.....) Anyway, as usual, loved the chapter! I was also proud of Cooper not to have jumped all over Virgin Avery. I guess he's saving that for the next "workout", lol!

Omg! I know EXACTLY where Tyler went! Shit, and I hope he left Travis' box in the house! So I'm thinking now that when Tyler said to Travis, "Stay the hell away from Wade", or however he worded it, first I thought he was trying to protect Travis from Wade. Now I'm thinking it was b/c what, he's still in love with Wade? Obviously Wade was still obsessed with Tyler. I'm surprised Tyler let Wade go w/o adding him to his list of cadavers! lol Although now Travis took that option away from Tyler. Hmmmm, will they find Tyler? This story gets more and more excting with every chapter!

Omg, what a tearjerker! I'm still crying! And a cliffie! Now the story has such an ominous feeling to it. (did that make sense? lol) Why did Derek regret keeping to the idea of calling Charlie by his real name? What happened in the future that made Charlie call Derek Hero again? Why was it too late? Omg, all these questions!!!!!! I hope you'll post/write/hurry up with part two quickly! I'm really anxious for these boys right now. lol

Cooper! I just want to smack you upside your horny head!!!!!! Ok, in his defense, the first time w/Chase, he didn't know it was Chase until after. The second time, he shouldn't have done it and of the course this last time.....he needs to learn how to control his libido and his emotions. I hope Spence never finds out! lol I did notice a typo though: site should be sight. I think you wrote it as "site" twice, but it should have been "sight", as in too see, not a website, lol. Ok, looking forward to the next chapter. Hey, I'm hoping Coop doesn't get attached to these bathroom glory hole hook-ups either! lol I'm afraid one day he'll find the sexy Coach Tye on the other end! hahaha

Holy shit! Trav is gonna confess? AND turn Tyler in? Omg, I wouldn't want to be him right now!!!! lol

Interesting chapter. I'm sad to see the ever-confident Derek succumb to his classmate's (well, Luke's) insecurities. I was actually surprised. Didn't think Derek would actually ACT insecure or think along those lines when using the pet name he has for Charlie. The chapter was also interestiing because all along I'm thinking Charlie's the one who's gay and crushing on another guy in school (at the art table, lol). But when Derek's mom whispered to him that she and his dad will love him no matter what, it made me think about Derek. I know he got all jealous of Charlie chatting it up w/Becca, and Charlie actually knowing or having other friends besides HIM, the great Derek. He doesn't even realise that the feeling he had WAS jealousy. So now I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter! Could it be that with Derek's continued protesting that he doesn't want to be perceived as gay by ANYONE, he is really in denial? After all, you know what they say about the ones who are constantly protesting about things like this......

Holy crap! Yeah, Spence may have "forgiven" him for his breaking his bff's heart, but he's not gonna forgive Coop for bagging Chase! Omg, may Spencer NEVER find out! lol Yeah, and too bad Coop for the whole Sebastian thing; not all guys can be hot for you! hahah

Omfg, I'm in shock! I NEVER thought Travis would have it in him to actually KILL someone! Shit, now HE has a body count also! This isn't good. So Wade was just what, using Travis? To get to Tyler? God this is so f**ked up! Shit, I think Tyler's gonna be ecstatic that his little protege is following in his footsteps! Man, can't wait for the next chappie!

Woah! How the f**k did Tyler know Travis was with Wade? And I must re-read that chapter where Tyler was telling Travis about the rodeo clown. I thought I read that Tyler KILLED the clown. I guess I was wrong. (there's gotta be more than one rodeo clown, right?) But Trav better watch out - or else HE'LL be adding to Tyler's body count! lol And yeah, so Tyler scares the crap out of me too! What a psycho! hahah Awesome job, as usual! I can't wait for the next update!

Haha, I can't believe you actually had something in her on Arnold and his Terminator! lol Omg, is that even PC? lol I'm actually surprised at Derek and how he thinks. I know he's been acting all innocent and naive as far as Charlie goes, but his views on gay people are inane; asinine! I can't believe he went on this rant in front of Andrew on how gay people aren't important and that there aren't any important celebrity gay people, etc. What an ass! lol He's so concerned with how people perceive him and what they think about him, he's missing the big picture. It doesn't matter that he and Charlie call each other by their childhood nicknames; it's kind of cute. That doesn't make someone gay and they shouldn't stop doing that just b/c some stupid people might think this. And so what if they do? I thought Derek was so confident with himself; he shouldn't care what others think about him. And so now what will he do when he finally figures out (or Charlie finally tells him) that he's gay? I'm assuming it's Charlie who's gay; that's my assumption from reading the story so far. Will Derek stop being his friend b/c then those stupid people will assume he's also gay? Gay by association - lol. Do people really think like this? Omg.... Anyway, great chapter, as usual. I'm ranting, so I'm gonna stop here. Can't wait for the next chapter! Hero and Big C at the mall!

Ah, Mrs.C. sounds so cool; wish I could be like her! Derek always knows what to say or do to cheer Charlie up. Derek's gotta be so curious now as to what's bothering Charlie. I mean for Charlie not to go to Derek with this "problem", Derek must know it's serious. Great chapter, as usual! Can't wait for more!

Awesome update! I feel so bad for Mark; no kid deserves to be treated that way by his "parents". Now that they're gone, I wonder where he'll live. No doubt, they would have never left Mark with Max and his mom. I'm also curious about Frank's dad's new friend. Maybe b/c I'm reading all these stories, but I'm feeling that the friend is a little closer than a "friend". lol Anyway, great chapter, as usual! Can't wait for more! Oh, I noticed on error: dieing isn't a word. It's dying. Your writing is really good; I think that's the only spelling error I saw. I do notice though, in all your stories, you capitalize letters that don't need it. Such as Grandmother, Grandfather, I think there were a few random words you capitalized the first letter. I always think of nouns, person, places or things. A person's name of course, the first letter is capitalized, and places of course like America. If it's Grandmother Rose, then yes, the "G" would be capitalized, otherwise it wouldn't. Anyway, enough of my long forgotten high school English lesson! Great chapter and keep up the awesome work Night!

Awww, poor Charlie can't confess he was looking at Travis or Jared! His maybe homophobic friend wouldn't understand. So, seems like Hero may have a flaw after all! lol Great chapter; can't wait for more!

Oh man, Travis is in for it now! Jesus, I don't even wanna think what Tyler's gonna do to him now that he tried to make a run for it! And what about Tyler's dog? He's just gonna leave him in Easton Park, all by himself? And what the hell does Trav have under his bed that he was willing to risk his life for? Why didn't he just tell Tyler and have Tyler get it for him? Awesomely thrillilng chapter! I can't wait for the next!

I'm glad I know when you'll be posting! Now I can look forward to Tuesdays! lol I remember over the summer, I was taking the train to NYC to see American Idiot w/my son, and I didn't have internet access on my phone. I printed out your story so I could read it on the train. I've been hooked on your story from the first line! I'm so glad you're not abandoning it!

Hey Hamen! God, I LOVE your name!!!!!! Too funny! Anyway, I've been checking this site daily since the summer, looking for an update on "Charlie". This was one of my top five favorite stories on this site. I was so thrilled to see an update now, but when I clicked on the story I noticed you deleted all your previous chapters. Will you be re-writing the whole story? This story is so amazing, funny, poignant and just so much fun to read! I cannot wait to read more!

Omg what a great story J! I saw this and decided to read it only because it's YOU who wrote it and I so love your other story! I love the dynamic between Trav and Tyler; they are both complex characters who are pretty much reaching out to one another. Ioved the ending of the last chapter where they both admit that they have feelings for the other. I'm really curious to find out why Tyler killed his wife. Was she sick; did she ask him to kill her so she wouldn't suffer? I can't really see him shooting his wife in cold blood. Unless....did she cheat on him? Idk, I still don't see it. It seems he's trying to fight his feelings for Travis, but he can't. I wonder what happened to his gay friend; he never did tell Travis. Anyway, I think this story is great and I can't wait for the next update J!

Hey hey, omg, I read this on another site! This is one of my favorite stories on that site! I gotta tell you; every time I see you updated the story, I want to smack Coop upside his horny head!!!! Jesus, he should stick w/Kyle. I'm not gonna go into any more detail, b/c I see you haven't uploaded all the chapters here, and I don't want to give anything away. I just wanted to let you know that I'm captivated by your story! I've been hooked from the first line! It's so original, well-written and the dialogue just flows. I absolutely love it! Keep up the great work!

Omg, half the time I want to throttle Max, ok, more than half the time. And the other half I want to throttle Sam. Sam finally realized something about himself that he's kept hidden all these years. He finally realized that he loves Max as more than a friend. Sam realizes that HE would rather be the one with Max, not Zander, not anyone else. But I guess he thinks that could never happen; he's afraid it will ruin the relationship. How can he not see that Max is in love with him? And all those years ago, beating up all of Max's boyfriends - totally out of jealousy; he felt no one was good enough for his Max . And Xander, he's so sweet, so good and really good for Max. Too bad Max is so self-depreciating and feels like he needs to live in a world w/o love. He's so in love w/Sam that he can't see past that. He's blind to everyone else. I hate that he feels he should be living his life alone since he can't have Sam. But he just seems to push everyone away, even Sam. And the way he pushes Zander away, it's heartbreaking. Zander fell in love with the wrong guy. Max will never be happy with him; he can't be happy with anyone. First he needs to feel happiness w/in himself. He has to learn to love himself. I'm sure he did at one time, long ago when he was still young and innocent. Although it seems he was always in love w/Sam. As for this chapter, it was eye-opening. I like Cam even tho he's a bit weird! lol I kinda thought it strange that Sam was the one who started the whole kiss thing and then took it up a notch. I really felt bad for Max then. Why didn't Sam kiss Max? Was he afraid that he might get carried away? Convey his feelings thru the kiss? I really loved this chapter. I hope Max can let Sam in on his feelings. But I know he won't. He won't let anyone into his heart. It's too bad b/c he's going to keep on getting hurt. Anyway, I can't wait for the next update and hopefully it won't be too long. Hopefully? Pretty please????