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Hamen, I just have to say this one was the mother of all cliffhangers lol So I'll just leave my true comments to next week see ya
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Hey, I really liked it. xD
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I just loved your story! It feels light, yet so interesnting to read! I'l be following it for sure!
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what you wrote here is in consonance with something I've been thinking for some time. Patience may be a key element to craft a good story. "craft a story" is a valid thought, it makes sense. A good story it's not just about pouring feelings and imagination on the paper uh?
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Just loved it. You made me fall in love with all characters, and made teh interaction between John and Jamie seem natural, believable. Beautiful You made me smile. Thank you for this story. Happy Holidays for you
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too much information at the same time for charlie. What a mess! lol I cant wait to see how this is going to unfold xD
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Ch 29: The Forgotten Door (Part Two)
ghanbrews commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 29: The Forgotten Door (Part Two)
So that`s how the derek we first met was born. Guess it makes sense... Lets see how he is gonna deal with those memories uh? -
Ch 28: The Forgotten Door (Part One)
ghanbrews commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 28: The Forgotten Door (Part One)
wow! Pretty intense, and very well written as always! Can't wait to read more (just one question: how many chapters has part 4 ? xD) -
You're not just evil! You're a monster! =P (nice chapter by the way xD.)
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Lots of emotions indeed! (bad and good ones). Now the mystery is about those headaches uh?Answers in the next chapter? xD see you there o/
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I gotta say you didn't surprise me! I was betting Isiah also had a carthera mate. I bet both twins found their mates in the same day =P And about the ending, may I expect lots of emotion in the next chapter?
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Ch 27: My Bloody Valentine
ghanbrews commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 27: My Bloody Valentine
Hello Hamen! I have to say (as I keep saying when I'm reviewing this story) that this chapter was realy really good! Loads of mystery, it felt like "season finale".I was thrilled from beginning to end! Derek's evolution as a character is really well written, and it seems to have reached a new level in this chapter. In my poor attempts to write (lol), I always find so hard to show those changes in characters along the story, as they get more mature and all, and you did it perfectly! I'm looking forward to part 4! Congratulations for the good job! -
Cia, I love how you can take a piece of fantasy and turn it into such real situations! This turnaround in the plot was really good, things got even more interesting!
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Hey! I think that was a good beginning of a story, the characters are interesting. But it kinda sounded incomplete... like there was more to know about this story xD i liked it anyways xD
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Ch 24: Illusions of Grandeur
ghanbrews commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 24: Illusions of Grandeur
Ahhhhh and the story gets better and better! It seems to me you're taking Derek's character to a whole new level, loved it! I really liked the mystery of the blackouts. It was really well explored in this last part, I could almost see it like a scene of a (good) tv series lol. I think it was a very good ending for a chapter! Congrats! xD -
Ch 23: My Date with a Doctor
ghanbrews commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 23: My Date with a Doctor
Okay, I have to say this was one of the BEST dialogues I've ever read! Loved it! This shink woman is a very well constructed character, it's almost like she is some sort of personification of Derek's conscience, dunno. She sounds almost surreal to me. Very interesting! -
I just have to say I loved this sory ( your stories are always great anwway). I also think wolves are really interesting, it's been a long time since I've read such a good story on this subject xD
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I have to say I did not like Jacob very much on the beginning. But the whole plot of the story kept me going. Now I see how his character is evolving, changing his way to see things, and that's pretty cool! I'm starting to like him more xD
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Wow! I loved Travis! I wanted to know how he came to meet charlie xD Can't wait to read more!
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Ch 08: A Birthday Surprise
ghanbrews commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 08: A Birthday Surprise
Really good Chapter. I really want to get to the part where Derek finds out about Charlie. can't wait to read more! -
Really good chapter! I really liked how Charlie surprised Derek with his friendship with Becca! (And I really liked her!) It was fun seeing Hero realizing that he can't know and control everything xD, and it seems he has a lot to find out about Charlie! cant wait to read next chapter!
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Well this chapter good as always! I just have to add to all those reviews that of course I want to read the next part right now, but I know that you're not a machine so I'll be patient and won't ask "UPDATE SOON" anymore as much as I want to xD The wait is worthy, and you allways update so quickly (thanks and congratulations for that, you really rock o/). Keep this amazing work of you!
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I can't wait to read more! o/
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Chapter 3: Straight Boys Are Confusing
ghanbrews commented on nicks_a_writer's story chapter in Chapter 3: Straight Boys Are Confusing
Hey! Jus to say I loved your story! Keep writing
