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You take so long to update, but its really worth the wait ( probably I've said this before lol). You really got the hang of making such captivating characters and making the plot mesmerizing yet light and simple. I love the way you write. It is really cute how Lucca is slowly falling in love with Sam, and how it makes him better. And oh the complications on the way... I hope I see you again soon over here
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I've read until this point and i got to say that you really nailed the teenage spirit! I mean, teenagers are really confused and messy and you portrayed it really well very nice
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Now things start to get ugly, as always felt it would =/ Cant it end well?
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If a Tree Falls in the Forest
ghanbrews commented on Sara Alva's story chapter in If a Tree Falls in the Forest
Ow this story was really sweet! I loved it! -
I think this is the third time I've read this story, and finaly I felt like I should leave a review. As I've seen in other of your stories, the characters, oh how I love the way you make them so true. The details are magic, everything clicks. And that hint that maybe his father don't care just about apearences after all (or maybe is just an optimistic me seeing it) is nice. congrats for this good work
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Chapter 12: Second Song, Jumping Ship
ghanbrews commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 12: Second Song, Jumping Ship
You take long to post updates of this story. But when a new chapter comes, It makes the wait REALLY worth! I can't help to falling in love with your characters, they're all very well constructed and I look forward to see wat comes next! nice work! -
I just love all this teenage mess! xD Can't wait to see how Gibby is going to get mixed up on it. It may be just a stupid guess, but the more I read, more Tanner and Gibby appear to have complementar personalities, dunno. They seem opposites in some aspects, but it feels like one's weaknesses are the other strenghts xD. Maybe they can make a good team. See ya next chapter
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I can't get enough of this story! Very well built characters and an interesting plot seems to be comming up.... see ya next chapter!
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Hamen, I just have to say this one was the mother of all cliffhangers lol So I'll just leave my true comments to next week see ya
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Hey, I really liked it. xD
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I just loved your story! It feels light, yet so interesnting to read! I'l be following it for sure!
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what you wrote here is in consonance with something I've been thinking for some time. Patience may be a key element to craft a good story. "craft a story" is a valid thought, it makes sense. A good story it's not just about pouring feelings and imagination on the paper uh?
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Just loved it. You made me fall in love with all characters, and made teh interaction between John and Jamie seem natural, believable. Beautiful You made me smile. Thank you for this story. Happy Holidays for you
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too much information at the same time for charlie. What a mess! lol I cant wait to see how this is going to unfold xD
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Ch 29: The Forgotten Door (Part Two)
ghanbrews commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 29: The Forgotten Door (Part Two)
So that`s how the derek we first met was born. Guess it makes sense... Lets see how he is gonna deal with those memories uh? -
Ch 28: The Forgotten Door (Part One)
ghanbrews commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 28: The Forgotten Door (Part One)
wow! Pretty intense, and very well written as always! Can't wait to read more (just one question: how many chapters has part 4 ? xD) -
You're not just evil! You're a monster! =P (nice chapter by the way xD.)
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Lots of emotions indeed! (bad and good ones). Now the mystery is about those headaches uh?Answers in the next chapter? xD see you there o/
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I gotta say you didn't surprise me! I was betting Isiah also had a carthera mate. I bet both twins found their mates in the same day =P And about the ending, may I expect lots of emotion in the next chapter?
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Ch 27: My Bloody Valentine
ghanbrews commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 27: My Bloody Valentine
Hello Hamen! I have to say (as I keep saying when I'm reviewing this story) that this chapter was realy really good! Loads of mystery, it felt like "season finale".I was thrilled from beginning to end! Derek's evolution as a character is really well written, and it seems to have reached a new level in this chapter. In my poor attempts to write (lol), I always find so hard to show those changes in characters along the story, as they get more mature and all, and you did it perfectly! I'm looking forward to part 4! Congratulations for the good job! -
Cia, I love how you can take a piece of fantasy and turn it into such real situations! This turnaround in the plot was really good, things got even more interesting!
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Hey! I think that was a good beginning of a story, the characters are interesting. But it kinda sounded incomplete... like there was more to know about this story xD i liked it anyways xD
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Ch 24: Illusions of Grandeur
ghanbrews commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 24: Illusions of Grandeur
Ahhhhh and the story gets better and better! It seems to me you're taking Derek's character to a whole new level, loved it! I really liked the mystery of the blackouts. It was really well explored in this last part, I could almost see it like a scene of a (good) tv series lol. I think it was a very good ending for a chapter! Congrats! xD
