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  1. ghanbrews
    Okay, I have to say this was one of the BEST dialogues I've ever read! Loved it! This shink woman is a very well constructed character, it's almost like she is some sort of personification of Derek's conscience, dunno. She sounds almost surreal to me. Very interesting!
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    I just have to say I loved this sory ( your stories are always great anwway). I also think wolves are really interesting, it's been a long time since I've read such a good story on this subject xD
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    I have to say I did not like Jacob very much on the beginning. But the whole plot of the story kept me going. Now I see how his character is evolving, changing his way to see things, and that's pretty cool! I'm starting to like him more xD
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    Wow! I loved Travis! I wanted to know how he came to meet charlie xD Can't wait to read more!
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    Really good Chapter. I really want to get to the part where Derek finds out about Charlie. can't wait to read more!
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    Charlie

    ghanbrews commented on Hamen Cheese's story in Fiction

    Really good chapter! I really liked how Charlie surprised Derek with his friendship with Becca! (And I really liked her!) It was fun seeing Hero realizing that he can't know and control everything xD, and it seems he has a lot to find out about Charlie! cant wait to read next chapter!
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    Well, I'm not a pro Jared, but I'm not a hater either. I think someone should put some sense in his head, hes seems pretty confused. He is kinda nice though.
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    Chapter 1

    ghanbrews commented on ghostofoldtrafford's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I can't wait to read more! o/
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    Well, I just had to add my opinion that the sotry is really great. The characters are quite interesting, everything so well written!Gabriel
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    Hey! Jus to say I loved your story! Keep writing
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