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I have no constructive criticism or ideas to throw your way, just wanted to say that I am enjoying the story. I hope you continue and finish it

Loved your story. :-)

Loving this story! So glad I decided to read it. Can't wait read more!

I love your story! Besides the fact that it is quite predictable (not a bad thing by the way!) I am having a great time reading your story. It's well written, as a great flow and quite cute. I'm excited to see what happens when Dave finds out he's Tyler's Mr. Perfect. I can't be wrong about that one! But I hope our journey with you through this story doesn't end soon!

Great chapter. I like the constant evolution of Blake and Haze's relationship. They seem to help each other through their struggles and demons. I'm starting to get the feeling that Uncle Eric is more like Stepdad Eric but that's just me. I'm sure his true identity will be uncovered soon. I also have a feeling Penelope will put our boys through hell before we get our happy ending- can't wait to read more! That was a chapter worth waiting for.

Great story.

Ummmmmmm.......... Was that awesome? Hell yeah! Do I want to read more? Yes! Will I wait patiently for the next chapter the be posted? Maybe.... Of course I will. I am a sucker for happy endings and new beginnings so I am a happy camper right now cause it seems to be going in that direction- unless you decide to throw a curve ball and 'f*** it up' and risk being verbally assaulted by angry readers (me not included of course) I would however like for Haze to start accepting his feelings for Blake/men in general. But you can't expect much more from a 'straight' guy who it seems has just started to explore his new/recently recognized/recently accepted sexuality. A chapter that has me smiling through out a vast majority of it is a great chapter; and 19 was one of them. It wasn't so much the physical/sexual aspect of the chapter, but more so the shared experiences between Blake and Haze; I love scenes when it's just the two of them talking and interacting. Awesome job mon ami.

Man, that goodbye was sad

I'm really enjoying this story. Wonderful and entertaining. I just don't think that Dirk is a killer. I'm getting annoyed with that instigator Bridgette. I thnk she's pushing for somethin and is completely wrong (but I can be too). Well I've got 50+ chapters to go so guess I'll eventually find out what's going on. I have so many conflicting theories but I'm trying not to draw any conclusions yet since I have a ways to go. Thanks for sharing your knowledge and creativity. Great story

Awesome Two thumbs up for a great story. Even if they didn't end up together (Im so happy they did by the way- can't stop smiling about the last little bit of the story) you've written a wonderful, exciting, emotional, all around excellent story and I'm glad I was able to read it. Thanks Andy.

I hated this chapter I really don't like what's going on with Pete. It's upsetting but understandable I guess. But he's being such a DICK! Other than that, you of course did a wonderful job on this chapter. Even the minor 'sex' scene that you included was well written. I don't care much for sex in good stories like this but there was a good amount and not too graphic. I really hope things get better eventually, but I must admit that I have a feeling that things will get even worse for a chap or two then get better for an awesome (happy) ending! Thanks Andy!

I like this story a lot. I just wish that there was more dialogue between the characters. There is a ton of inner Blake dialogue and what he's thinking and feeling and a narative of what's happening but not much with him verbally interacting with the other characters of the story. But overall this is a great story that I'm so glad I came across. Keep up the great work and can't wait for an additional chapter to be added!

I really hate this Aaron kid. Everything with Luke set aside, he's such a manipulator and I really think he may be up to something and this thing with Rory is going to end very badly. I can barely get through the story the kid is so annoying.

Two thumbs way up!

Great chapter; great story. Thanks for keeping it entertaining and emotional and just so realistic and awesome. My prediction is that in the next chapter Jason will get a "Second Shot" at a life with Peter and another chance at being the man he wants to be and needs to be for himself and his love. And 7 or more additional chapters without Pete would suck major ass dude, so I hope I'm right!