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Lozza

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  1. OH! Please gods 😰NO!
  2. Kellerman has made his stand. He will not come to aid Marcus. Marcus, believing Merrick has abandoned him; as he will; will shit in his own nest and crucify himself. Will, Jarred, and Andrew will have one hell of a fight on their hands. Will more than most. We know right will prosper, but how the author brings this about will be far more convoluted and devious for me to conjecture.
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    Chapter 21

    I have a sneaking suspicion that you may well be correct. Time, and the author will reveal all. But the wait is killing me!
  4. Yes, granted. However I sense there is room for capitulaion.
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    Chapter 19

    A snakeoil salesman, will "spruik" his wares. tosell, or, entice.
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    Chapter 17

    It took me 2 hours to read that chapter. Roller coaster indeed. But no roller coaster started and stopped as many times I did reading that.
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    Chapter 15

    WOW!
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    Chapter 13

    And that's just the introduction to this awesome foursome! Can't wait to see what further mischief/madness this formidable four create/encounter. Well done! Super chapter!
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    Chapter 13

    Well said! Patience I'm not blessed with, so please @Mark Ponyboy Peters can we get on with it? Please?
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    Chapter 4

    Yet another curveball! I can't wait to see how it all spans...
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    Chapter 10

    I could not have put it better. Exactly what I was thinking.
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    Chapter 8

    That, and the weather is what sets us apart!
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    Chapter 8

    So no contest then; Bugger!
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    Chapter 8

    In Victoria, at primary school, it was reffered to as joined-up writing. That was when you graduated to an ink-well, and a nib pen. Yes, I'm old!
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    Chapter 8

    Granted but when Baldwin comes up against the Silver Boar, as surely he must; what then?
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    Chapter 4

    I have an ominous feeling that it will be a boon! But there's a long ways to go yet!!
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    Chapter 2

    For what it's worth, I'm tipping Erik, is Ishan re-incarnated. That's my tuppeny input!
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    Chapter 16

    Well said @Cane23! Thank you. I found it difficult to keep reading this chapter, so powerful are the words, and imagery.
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    Epilogue

    I was wondering how you were going to finish,: and you did it beautifully.
  20. Dylan is going to do a volte face: and we'll see the romantic Dylan. Mind you, it may take awhile!
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    Chapter 8

    Just goes to show: gays can thwart evil!
  22. I for one don't think Matteo is stringing Cole along. Matteo is too convincing in his role as a fake boyfriend to be faking it!
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    Chapter 26

    What bloody (I'm Australian; and bloody here means super good), tour de force this story has been so far. I awaited each new chapter with more anticipation than a Bridegroom. So looking forward to more. Keep it coming Topher!
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    What Remains

    “I used to think moving on meant leaving you behind,” I said. “Now I think it means carrying you differently.” For me, that one line is so telling.
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    Open Air

    Moving, and beautiful!
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