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Lozza

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  1. Lozza

    Chapter 17

    It took me 2 hours to read that chapter. Roller coaster indeed. But no roller coaster started and stopped as many times I did reading that.
  2. Lozza

    Chapter 15

    WOW!
  3. Lozza

    Chapter 13

    And that's just the introduction to this awesome foursome! Can't wait to see what further mischief/madness this formidable four create/encounter. Well done! Super chapter!
  4. Lozza

    Chapter 13

    Well said! Patience I'm not blessed with, so please @Mark Ponyboy Peters can we get on with it? Please?
  5. Lozza

    Chapter 4

    Yet another curveball! I can't wait to see how it all spans...
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    Chapter 10

    I could not have put it better. Exactly what I was thinking.
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    Chapter 8

    That, and the weather is what sets us apart!
  8. Lozza

    Chapter 8

    So no contest then; Bugger!
  9. Lozza

    Chapter 8

    In Victoria, at primary school, it was reffered to as joined-up writing. That was when you graduated to an ink-well, and a nib pen. Yes, I'm old!
  10. Lozza

    Chapter 8

    Granted but when Baldwin comes up against the Silver Boar, as surely he must; what then?
  11. Lozza

    Chapter 4

    I have an ominous feeling that it will be a boon! But there's a long ways to go yet!!
  12. Lozza

    Chapter 2

    For what it's worth, I'm tipping Erik, is Ishan re-incarnated. That's my tuppeny input!
  13. Lozza

    Chapter 16

    Well said @Cane23! Thank you. I found it difficult to keep reading this chapter, so powerful are the words, and imagery.
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    Epilogue

    I was wondering how you were going to finish,: and you did it beautifully.
  15. Dylan is going to do a volte face: and we'll see the romantic Dylan. Mind you, it may take awhile!
  16. Lozza

    Chapter 8

    Just goes to show: gays can thwart evil!
  17. I for one don't think Matteo is stringing Cole along. Matteo is too convincing in his role as a fake boyfriend to be faking it!
  18. Lozza

    Chapter 26

    What bloody (I'm Australian; and bloody here means super good), tour de force this story has been so far. I awaited each new chapter with more anticipation than a Bridegroom. So looking forward to more. Keep it coming Topher!
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    What Remains

    “I used to think moving on meant leaving you behind,” I said. “Now I think it means carrying you differently.” For me, that one line is so telling.
  20. Lozza

    Open Air

    Moving, and beautiful!
  21. Lozza

    "Rowan's Dawn"

    Beautifully written, and a magnificent ending. Your ability to evoke using words is enviable. Thank you for writing , and sharing it with us.
  22. Lozza

    "The Splinter"

    Exactly as Modified Cub said!
  23. What he said:
  24. I know this story has to end: But that doesn't stop that I don't want it to. Superbly written and wonderful characters so full of humanity, (Liam, Hudson, Mateo and Gabriel). When does your next story appear?
  25. Lozza

    Chapter 1

    You really do have to love these two!
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