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Epilogue: The Lion's Share
Lozza commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Epilogue: The Lion's Share
@Topher Lydon There are times when I cannot bear to read further. The mesmeric capacity of your writing draws me back time and again. I do not want to know what is going to happen, but I read onwards anyway. Well! Onwards to Carter's Line! -
Chapter 25: The Scourging
Lozza commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 25: The Scourging
I am finding that the story is mesmeric, in that I feel for all involved, but not wanting to read about more heartache and anguish. Stuffed if I know!!! -
I am so enjoying the journey with these chaps!
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OH! Please gods 😰NO!
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Kellerman has made his stand. He will not come to aid Marcus. Marcus, believing Merrick has abandoned him; as he will; will shit in his own nest and crucify himself. Will, Jarred, and Andrew will have one hell of a fight on their hands. Will more than most. We know right will prosper, but how the author brings this about will be far more convoluted and devious for me to conjecture.
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I have a sneaking suspicion that you may well be correct. Time, and the author will reveal all. But the wait is killing me!
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Yes, granted. However I sense there is room for capitulaion.
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A snakeoil salesman, will "spruik" his wares. tosell, or, entice.
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It took me 2 hours to read that chapter. Roller coaster indeed. But no roller coaster started and stopped as many times I did reading that.
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And that's just the introduction to this awesome foursome! Can't wait to see what further mischief/madness this formidable four create/encounter. Well done! Super chapter!
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Well said! Patience I'm not blessed with, so please @Mark Ponyboy Peters can we get on with it? Please?
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Yet another curveball! I can't wait to see how it all spans...
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I could not have put it better. Exactly what I was thinking.
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That, and the weather is what sets us apart!
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So no contest then; Bugger!
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In Victoria, at primary school, it was reffered to as joined-up writing. That was when you graduated to an ink-well, and a nib pen. Yes, I'm old!
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Granted but when Baldwin comes up against the Silver Boar, as surely he must; what then?
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I have an ominous feeling that it will be a boon! But there's a long ways to go yet!!
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For what it's worth, I'm tipping Erik, is Ishan re-incarnated. That's my tuppeny input!
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Well said @Cane23! Thank you. I found it difficult to keep reading this chapter, so powerful are the words, and imagery.
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I was wondering how you were going to finish,: and you did it beautifully.
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S2 E14: Who Do I Choose?
Lozza commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E14: Who Do I Choose?
Dylan is going to do a volte face: and we'll see the romantic Dylan. Mind you, it may take awhile! -
Just goes to show: gays can thwart evil!
