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Great start. I really enjoyed it.
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Very nice beginning.
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I like the chapter title......made me curious. Carringtonrj is right, you are a star. I really liked the whole chapter, but the description and colors of the bedroom gave me a great visual too. Take care of yourself first.Good health is everything.
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No no no no no no no I dont want to see it end! I am loving this story. Its great. I liked this chapter K.C. Well done.
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I dont care if Ians heart is in the right place, I still want to kick his ass. I am glad however that Ash and Michael talk this stuff out, way better than letting it stew and fester. Great chapter K.C.
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Sigh.................finally!! That was a great chapter K.C. very well done and tasteful and HOT! One question...do we get to see more of Michaels POV and his feelings about his life hows he changing? Loved this chapter and eagerly waitning for more.
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Wow! That was really hot! Wow! Michaels inexperience and insecurity was cute, but I liked that he could voice that to Ash. They seem to get more connected with every chapter. Great job K.C.
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Welcome back K.C. I liked that chapter too. I liked that Ash went after Michael and didnt give up at the elevator and let him go. I've read too many stories where sort of thing happens and it makes me nuts, lol.That they could salvage the evening and enjoy themselves was cool. Thanks for another great chapter. As always, I can't wait for the next one.
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OK...ready now. I read these last two chapters a few days ago and kinda wanted to let them sink in. I loved it all.This entire book captivated me the beginning. Waiting oh so patiently for each chapter was worth it. The epilogue was great. To me it was the perfect ending of this story. "And I understood that--just maybe--the highest love I could give him would involve summoning the courage to trust what he'd been telling me. You are my fuckin' life, Andy. You've always been." That part right there said alot for me. Summoning the courage to trust. So thank you Adam, this is a truly great story and I am so glad you shared it with us.
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OK I'm agreement with everyone else. That last line was great! It so perfectly captured what Michael is feeling. That last line has left me with a feeling of "lordy I cannot wait to see whats next" . Hot chapter KC, I loved it.
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I like Ash's determination not to let the guy who shot win. And channeling his anger into getting better and pushing him forward. He still has a ways to go, but Ash's self awareness is a really good thing and I like seeing that.
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I do love a good love story. This explains a lot more of Michael, so yay! I feel like I understand Michael and his attitude better. It feels like he's set for self destruct, but slowly with Ash's help he will redeem himself. I love a character who is flawed, its so much more real. Thanks for this chapter. K.C.
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Great bath scene! Quite hot! I like that Ash is keeping things at a slow pace right now. I like what he had to say to Michael about their (inevitable?) first time. I too, wouold like to know more about Michael , what he like away from Ash, some hints into his younger years. I like knowing more depth about the characters in a story. Well done K.C. another great chapter.
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I'm glad your feeling better too. Keeping positive thoughts flowing your way. Anyway, I am liking the way this story seems to be going, although I'm sure you've got some twists coming to throw us. I'm a little frustrated with Michael, though, lol the boy needs to pull his head out of his a$$ lol. As always , cant wait for the next chapter.
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Great chapter again K.C. Best wishes for your surgery and recovery....keeping happy, positive thoughts for you.
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Life doesn't fit into neat little boxes
Breeze commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Life doesn't fit into neat little boxes
Great chapter K.C. And to echo everyone elses sentiments, I love that comment about "Life doesn't always fit into neat little boxes. Sometimes we have to hammer out the corners, customizing it until it conforms to us." It is so very true. I hope we get some backstory about the shooting and how the rest of the night before went. It feels like somethings missing. But I do love where it is going. And the kiss..... lol I love a well placed(in the story) kiss -
Oh wow! Just wow! I don't know what I expected but that was great. Every week now, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm glad I wasn't reading this at Timmies, lol. I hate explaining my "holy craps" and ' oh wows" that I say out loud.
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Ooohhh I just got back into the city today, so I havent had a chance to read this chapter til now. Worth the wait. I did not expect this. M's reaction was explosive, but Ash cut him off pretty dang quick too. Now I'm gonna wonder the rest of the week how this will play out. I am conjuring up all sorts of outcomes in my head ya know. Love this chapter too K.C.
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Who could be calling this early on a Saturday morning?
Breeze commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Who could be calling this early on a Saturday morning?
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OOOhhh I like this direction, didnt expect that. I cant wait to see what happens next. This side of Michael is pretty cool. I like how this is building, with background and getting to know each other.Great chapter K.C.
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Great chapter K.C. But hhmmmmm.....I liked the introduction of the other guys and seeing both Michael and Asher in a different , more relaxed atmosphere. Maybe I've been reading too much mystery, but I had the feeling some maybe a little sinister is afoot. The whole drinking thing intrigues me too. I liked how you played that scene out. Looking forward to more.
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I , like Daithi, have my own ideas as to Michaels drinking, but thats ok. I makes me anticipate the rest of the story to see how it all plays out. I like the pacing too, and the more details. I have a prwetty vivid imagination, so its great to have those details to help my imagination along. Great chapter, K.C.!
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OK you got me hooked by the 2nd chapter. I want more more more. Why is Michael drinking, when we do we get to hear this guy be part of a conversation,? I do like a shorter chapter, but a little longer might nice, but because I already want to know more. Me like K.C.
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Great first chapter. I'm taken with both main characters already. Both identifiable guys. These seem like guys we've all known before, and that draws me in. Looking forward to more.
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Loved it!.The capacity for loving is and always should be wide open. Thanks
