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Breeze

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  1. Breeze

    Chapter 21

    OOOhhhhhh You may not be killing Coop...but your gonna kill me with a cliffhanger like that!!!! Great chapter !! Thanks.
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    Chapter 1

    Admittedly I am not much of a poetry reader, but I am trying to expand my horizons. I just love this...it makes me think, and it makes appreciate. I really like it.
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    Chapter 22: Devon

    Ohoh, Hospital, IV....yikes! And Spence(and by extension Kyle) and Coop? Please tell me this is temporary. Great chapter again. And this whatever between Coop and Devon? Interesting.
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    Chapter 21: Lucky

    Whoa!!!!!!!! Didnt see that coming! Oooohhhh I cant wait to see how Spence and Coop resolve this. Great chapter again.
  5. OOHHH Great finish!! I didnt see that coming either. Well done.I love this story
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    Chapter 20: Avery

    Oh man...Coop,did better this time, but is he headed for a cliff or what? Great chapter again, I love this story.
  7. Holy crap!!!!!!!!!!!! Thats all I got right now. Great chapter.
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    Chapter 19

    Great chapter! so much sadness to go through. But it happens and we have to go through the pain to get to the sunshine. Cant wait for the next chapter.
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    Chapter 14: Dalton

    Great chapter! I like that Spence is a caregiver. But I starting to worry about Coop...that drinking thing. Looking forward to the rest . Benny and the Jets, LOL I like that one.
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    Chapter 20

    I love this story. I was hoping for Ced and Daniel to get together and Im so glad they did. And Lee and Liam getting together was for me, a huge bonus. A continuation of this story , about Joey would be great. Great story Jian, loved it.
  11. I just read the prologue and all 4 chapters tonite. I agree it is a tough read, but I cant wait for more. And I was glad to see Austin show up. Cant wait for the rest.Well done.
  12. Great story!! And holy crap what a twist. I expected it but yet I didnt and wow! Cant wait for more!
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    Turnaround

    Great chapter. Finally, your right, this is what we’ve ( well I have anyway) been waiting for. Thanks so much.
  14. Great story.I like the descriptions, the characters,everything. I've only recently become a fan of short stories and this one is definately going to the top of the list.
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    Hanging Ten

    I've always been pulling for Matt. But now reading this chapter,it feels right. Angie and Andy are headed toward something and Andy is starting to fix things with Matt. It feels right. I really like this one, of course and all the chapters before.
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    It Started With Brian

    I have to agree with the others. It was a beautiful story. What I got the most was Sams strength, to have lived that life and still keep moving forward. Incredible people. I wish for you all the best life has to offer you and your son.
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