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Chapter 11 Whip Stroke
Glad to see Mitch is starting to deal with his stubbornness even though it may not look like it. Can't disagree with any of the comments above and hope to blazes the visit to the good doctor's is better news...not a cure but an extension of the "sentence" with good behavior!!!! "Parole" could be delayed for a couple of years!!!😁 We're praying for ya Mitch, stubborn cuss that you are!! Wonder if he ever stopped to think, what he is doing just might be worse for both of them?Glad to see Mitch is starting to deal with his stubbornness even though it may not look like it. Can't disagree with any of the comments above and hope to blazes the visit to the good doctor's is better news...not a cure but an extension of the "sentence" with good behavior!!!!
"Parole" could be delayed for a couple of years!!!😁
We're praying for ya Mitch, stubborn cuss that you are!! Wonder if he ever stopped to think, what he is doing just might be worse for both of them?
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Good on Matt and Trent, here's hoping Hayden finds the home he deserves...possibly with Matt and Trent down the road? Somehow, I think Matt's story may snowball and help to further shine a light, perhaps a book then a movie? Think of the funds that could be raised for New Horizons! I am at a loss for words after listening to the song and reading the Rolling Stone article. I'm fuming to say the least when I think that anyone can countenance "throwaway children" in the name of their faitGood on Matt and Trent, here's hoping Hayden finds the home he deserves...possibly with Matt and Trent down the road?
Somehow, I think Matt's story may snowball and help to further shine a light, perhaps a book then a movie? Think of the funds that could be raised for New Horizons!
I am at a loss for words after listening to the song and reading the Rolling Stone article. I'm fuming to say the least when I think that anyone can countenance "throwaway children" in the name of their faith....or that we spend twenty years and trillions of dollars on a foreign entanglements, with nothing to show for it....
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Thanks Ronyx!
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I'm reminded of an old proverb about a group of brothers who quarreled. The father, holding a single stick easily snaps it in half, then he holds in his hand sticks representing each brother and while they bend, they don't break.I'm reminded of an old proverb about a group of brothers who quarreled.
The father, holding a single stick easily snaps it in half, then he holds in his hand sticks representing each brother and while they bend, they don't break.
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@Yeoldebard how about a bus full of nuns...lawyers....boy scouts...take your pick @astone229214 hours ago, astone2292 said:I love this comment! I was never a fan of running until I went freerunning in the woods during a Boy Scouts campout. That was a blast!
This is, perhaps, the most fitting proposed end to the plot... I like it.
@Yeoldebard how about a bus full of nuns...lawyers....boy scouts...take your pick @astone2292
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Thank you, looking forward to your next, I am curious...won't the book encourage others to look for the tomb and possibly excavate it for the treasures within? If it was found once....Thank you, looking forward to your next, I am curious...won't the book encourage others to look for the tomb and possibly excavate it for the treasures within?
If it was found once....
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What a incredibly sad miasma of self-flagellation...wonder what would happen if the two of them talked to each other instead of at each other.What a incredibly sad miasma of self-flagellation...wonder what would happen if the two of them talked to each other instead of at each other.
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Do I sense Tyler will be caught, was there security video on the house across the street.... Will Tyler's penance be rebuilding Eric's garden and then doing the work on the gardens across the street at Eric's supervision? What to make of this snippet??? He hadn't been careful enough the last time. Tagging along with his mum for once, he'd sat ignoring their conversation, which was mostly muttered insults, complaints, and threats. So he'd looked around him? What the actual fuck? ThDo I sense Tyler will be caught, was there security video on the house across the street....
Will Tyler's penance be rebuilding Eric's garden and then doing the work on the gardens across the street at Eric's supervision?
What to make of this snippet???
He hadn't been careful enough the last time. Tagging along with his mum for once, he'd sat ignoring their conversation, which was mostly muttered insults, complaints, and threats. So he'd looked around him? What the actual fuck? Three months later, when his dad had been released – only temporarily, as it turned out – he'd taken his revenge. The price for such 'filthy perversion' had been one arm bent until it felt as though it would pop out of its socket.
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I had forgotten about Adam's father, he deserves the same treatment those malicious teens deserve, only I'd see his bollocks were removed first!. Quite frankly, that man should be locked up and the key tossed in the bin... I believe Eric just may have landed a gardening consultant's job...humm? There goes the diet.... https://www.bettys.co.uk/cakes/fat-rascalsI had forgotten about Adam's father, he deserves the same treatment those malicious teens deserve, only I'd see his bollocks were removed first!.
Quite frankly, that man should be locked up and the key tossed in the bin...
I believe Eric just may have landed a gardening consultant's job...humm?
There goes the diet....
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I'm a bit worried for Eric, I don't think, (hope I am wrong), we have seen the last of 'those teens'. They should be caught, suspended by their ballocks till they see the error of their ways. What I like best about this story, is that we get a glimpse of the unvarnished reality that exists for so many of those around us. Too often when confronted with this sort of reality, when it becomes newsworthy, the spotlight's glare quickly fades. A&A deserve more than simple credit, they are honoI'm a bit worried for Eric, I don't think, (hope I am wrong), we have seen the last of 'those teens'. They should be caught, suspended by their ballocks till they see the error of their ways.
What I like best about this story, is that we get a glimpse of the unvarnished reality that exists for so many of those around us. Too often when confronted with this sort of reality, when it becomes newsworthy, the spotlight's glare quickly fades. A&A deserve more than simple credit, they are honorable young men who have seen the need and opened their hearts, understanding the struggles that define Eric's life. Much of the same can be said for Brian and Susan, they are a fresh cup of friendship!
As the letters point out, that while somewhere along the line, many souls have lost their humanity and we are comforted by those who haven't. The new neighbors are well meaning, clueless perhaps...but is that all they are?
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Like Eric, I'm a bit late to the party and agree with the others...welcome back and hoping for only the best for Eric, everyone's, loveable cranky uncle!!!
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Well, that answered a whole lotta questions to say the least...I think Jake and Ethan deserve a nice vacation. An amazing adventure and one hell of a ride, to which I say...well done Sir!!
I do believe I found your pic on the net!!!!
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What a sad but necessary chapter. At times like this words can only mean so much and say so little. D'gar needs to remember what he is an why he fights. As we all know the near future will be gruesome, D'gar needs to pull up his bootstraps!What a sad but necessary chapter. At times like this words can only mean so much and say so little. D'gar needs to remember what he is an why he fights. As we all know the near future will be gruesome, D'gar needs to pull up his bootstraps!
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Well done, I thought the construction of the story was spot on. What you have allowed us to see are fragments in a day consisting in a comedy of errors. Disparate vignettes that somehow coalesce and leave us wondering how all, well most all, will turn out!Well done, I thought the construction of the story was spot on. What you have allowed us to see are fragments in a day consisting in a comedy of errors.
Disparate vignettes that somehow coalesce and leave us wondering how all, well most all, will turn out!
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8 minutes ago, weinerdog said:You don't think Alan and a dinosaur....never mind
Could this be Alan??
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The good Dr Morgan needs to be hung by the nads...
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Simply brilliant, a fresh take on the ordinary and well told!!!