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Full time with benefits is nothing to sneeze at, Pru needs a friend, will it be bug boy? WTF??? The transcript preview read: Good afternoon, Master Hollow. On behalf of Mrs. Hollow, I’d like to arrange a convenient time for— Delete
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I wonder why Buddy is reluctant to wear his name tag….could he be embarrassed or not care for his first name? Chase needs to turn his attention back to his job and start acting professionally…The very best way to make ‘Buddy’ lose the stick up his backside.
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The peddler boy was quite the tease…
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As @weinerdog noted, my sentiments exactly. And a little foreshadowing?? Major? Sweet. My dad’s a Staff Sergeant. He outranks my dad, but you’re new here, you won’t outrank anybody until you prove yourself worthy.” “How do I do that?” “You’ll probably find that out on Monday
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River has some introspection to do…
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A city I've always wanted to visit, and will someday. It will be interesting to see what the future holds for them...I find the following a tad sad... What do you love most about your husband?
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Chapter 9: The Holodeck Episode
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 9: The Holodeck Episode
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In the interest of public safety, and not that I am a size queen, someone, like me, should check that he isn’t smuggling stacks of coffee cups out of the store….possibly a cruller, jelly stick, or worse a cream filled…..ooopppsss, getting carried away here… As for my coworkers, I liked Marla quite a bit and tolerated the only other employee, Mike. He was thick and pale, with limp mousy brown hair and a perpetually bored expression. He had the personality of a moldy dish towel, but Max seemed fond of him for some unknown reason that I'm sure had nothing to do with the large, swinging appendage easily visible in the gray sweatpants he favored m
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Have to agree this is much better than the original…Foster is Foster, his brain cells appear to be rationed out a bit on a daily basis….I remember Slug well and can’t wait to see more of him…and we have met a land shark called Becca….after that crash and burn, she may need dental implants…. I have always had a soft spot for Judy and she does not disappoint….
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I found this chapter a bit rough, awkward and need to put it down and come back to it…it seems to me to be a bit disjointed….I’m not sure it’s my head cold but…..color me unimpressed…..
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So Marcus and Titus make it, and thy aren’t out of the woods just yet. My tears are for Decimus….I do take some comfort in knowing that Arminius will eventually get what is so justly deserved….
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Oh my…could it possibly get any worse for Dremakk? This will be very interesting to read!
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Boy oh boy would this have come in handy so many years ago after going out on Friday and Saturday nights…does it come with a push button or a lever? Home Before Yesterday
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Julian has found the key to acceptance….honestly and without guile… Keahi, one of the older men, stepped beside me and showed me how to angle the cut so the new growth would be strong. “You do it like this,” he said, guiding my hand. “Not too deep. Let the tree breathe.” I listened. I learned. I worked. Six weeks for Sam to make an appearance….if the author has designs for a kraken to suddenly appear beware the ….
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Chapter 8: The Space Battle Episode
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8: The Space Battle Episode
I’m willing to bet Vex downloaded everything they need and got all their porn…just sayin! And they got a cloaking device! -
Thank you for sharing this…normally I would not cross the street for such a story as this, and I am so glad you wrote it and I read it. the following comment sums up my thoughts…
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A considered response?
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in A considered response?
A lovely beginning, can’t wait to see where this goes...and Mum...mind the language please... “I know, Mum. But that’s all they are. No-one running a knocking shop here, either high-class or trashy.” “But guys, well can’t always keep their dicks to themselves.” “Mum! And that doesn’t happen when women are the entertainment? Come on!” -
I for one am glad for the Kick in the pants @weinerdog and @Josh Aterovis, this is a much better version of the original! She smiled, but the effect was rather unsettling. She reminded me of a sinister clown, and I suddenly understood why people suffered from coulrophobia.
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I am partial to redheads....
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Whispers in the Alcove
drsawzall commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Whispers in the Alcove
Herr Becker is a second level functionary lacking a spine…is it possible he may be the killer, having done so to protect the precious “rose bud?”….. Mmmm, I do like me bread and sausages….. -
Damned of you do and dammed if you don’t?
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Definitely needed a tissue warning….autumn hay fever ain’t nuthin to sneeze about… Were you having a “tissues needed” moment here? what why twisted?? 🤭
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Chapter 7: the Missing Crewman Episode
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7: the Missing Crewman Episode
Well…just what is our missing person eating? And for the sake of fresh beans, clear Guy’s buffer, and how is Hollis’ magic button Doc not Doc? With a thanks to @drpaladin! -
Oh Lordy, sounds just like a former employer….
