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I try to be as descriptive as I can when I'm writing. A friend once told me to use all five of my senses and pretend I'm the character that is experiencing them. :-) Michael's sexuality is just as confusing to him, lol. He's a womanizer because it is expected of him in his lifestyle, but he's battled with an attraction to other boys ever since he was a pre-teen. It will come out more later on as his full background is revealed, but right now only Loren's unworldly abilities is bringing it to the surface right through the cloud of denial Michael has hidden it under.
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The room was lit by the flickering glow of several candles placed around it and the walls were stone darkened by years of water stains where the tapestries left them exposed in spots, but none of it looked familiar to Michael Quinn. Not even the soft looking bed sitting on the raised platform with its silky black sheets and dark walnut corner posts brought back any memories to his addled mind, nor did the ornate rug covering the floor with its dark red, gold, and green hues cause any memories to
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Michael Quinn is your typical seventeen year old throwaway making his own way on the streets of Black Moon Bay until a chance encounter with a stranger changes his life forever and throws him into a chaotic underworld that has only been hinted at in myths and legends whispered among the inhabitants of the city.
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Afterlife “I don’t believe the afterlife is another symbol of death.” The deep voice was calming when placed with the music surrounding them, but the words and timbre were what brought a shiver to Michael Quinn as he listened to the stranger sitting beside him at the long, ebony bar. “It could very well mean a new beginning without any of the flaws the person experienced in their former life.” Michael laughed and shook his head at the stranger’s odd conception. “Are you saying that ‘afterl
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When I told my then girlfriend I was bisexual and she said "Really? That's good because I've been having these thoughts about Abby ..." .
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A poem about what's left after a break up Shackles of Sin
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I am not the one --- that line hit me right in the stomach and I'm still trying to catch my breath. Not only was the poem a river flowing perfectly over the rocks just below the surface, but it was also a visual delight to behold. Very good job.
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Love lost and found again. A very good rendering that sparked a memory in me of my first crush. I got the feeling from this that age and waiting only made the reunion even better. That is what I'm hoping for in the future with my crush and this has given me a feeling that maybe my repressed memories weren't all that bad after all.
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There is definitely good and bad in everything, and it's up to the viewer to decide which way the pendulum swings. I like that this made me think while I was reading it. Usually, I just get a mind visual of poetry when I read it, but this also came with the added bonus of making my brain cells spark. I feel the urge to write --- thank you.
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That was exquisite. I had to read over it a few times before the chills started, but once they did -- beautiful. The linear graphics created by the line by line posting would've been distracting in any other poem, but here they worked with the visual given by the words. A very good job!
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Not all chains are tangible.
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You are the shackles that brings me down to my knees You are the vision that haunts every one of my dream You lie and say that you care You leave me to my despair You are the shackles that brings me down to my knees You are the chains that bind every word I must speak You pretend that you’re not to blame My destruction is part of your game You are the shackles that brings me down to my knees You are the padlock that no longer has a key You say that you’ll be there f
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*leers around* Anybody want some Hershey Kisses I've been carrying around in a box of condoms -----
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I make chocolate milk, turn on the stereo, and chill out with a box of lemon cookies. They go great with the Nestle Quik.
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When it gets approved from Mod Que, the link will work. Please let me know what you think, and possibly take a guess as to what the poem pertains to if you wish. Silently Still
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What once was can never be again. All things wither and die.
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Silently Still She lay there in beauty, silently still Alone in the calm Sunrise came and went, silently still Dark surrounding all Stars viewed her beauty, silently still Jealous of her visage Moonbeams dancing glitter, silently still Across her frosted cheek Days came and nights went, silently still Snowflakes covering all Crickets chirped and birds sang, silently still Hot sun heating flesh One arm crossed she lay, silently still Beauty unco
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Thanks, Star. I was very nervous about it, but I'm glad it was liked so much.
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1- Cinderella "Night Song" 2- Poison "Your Mama Don't Dance" 3- Motley Crue "Dr. Feelgood" 4- Ratt "Round And Round" 5- AC/DC "Who Made Who" 6- Twisted Sister "Be Chroul To Your Scuel" 7- WASP "Ball Crusher" 8- Guns & Roses "Mr Brownstone" 9- Skid Row "18 And Life" 10- KISS "2000 Man"
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Thank you! A brick between the eyes is exactly how I felt when I found out. I'm glad I was able to convey my own feelings into the words for others to feel it, too.
