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That should be " die."
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I hope Ulee doesn't due!
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Thought this was a little too "teachy," until Georeg met ... Uh, oh. Don't want to spoil it!
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It really comes together in the last chapter. I hope there will be more.
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Wow! Lovely. Wonderful imagery. Smoothly told.
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I read this one with a Wikipedia window open ... But it was worth it! Cool, educational, and ... Well, now there are four boys to share with each other.
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" ... that it’s only people and what they do that makes Good and Evil." What GREAT statement. Cuts right through all the crap.
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I don't know which is the greater irony: that which was in the story, or that at the end of the story, "Google ads" offered a course leading to a Divinity Degree. In any case, an excellent story.
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I'm so glad that George and Peter became friends ... it makes this a real story, with serious thought, not just sex. Although that's surely to come!
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I love the science of magic ... and the science of science ... In this chapter. Had to look up a couple of words! But it makes the story so real! It must be true.
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Second sentence and it's "tore the bitch's head off." This is going o be intense!
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So, Draco isn't quite as reformed as it may seem ... he still looks down on Hagrid. Harry's not happy about that ... how will this play out?
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So, George and Gary have bonded ... Is this a good thing, or will it lead to tragedy? Things seem too easy, so far.
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The Constable of Bowling Green
AndyM commented on David McLeod's story chapter in The Constable of Bowling Green
James, and his father, are incredible people .. they accept George without question. A little too easily, in fact. There's more here than it seems. -
"They dream of something that is bigger and better and more exciting than their ordinary lives." Don't we all? Thanks for bringing it to us!
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State Police Post, Christmas Eve
AndyM commented on David McLeod's story chapter in State Police Post, Christmas Eve
This is not our world, but it is so real! And so exciting! -
The Smith of Bowling Green
AndyM commented on David McLeod's story chapter in The Smith of Bowling Green
Awww...so sweet that Gary and George got together...and then David and Gary. Is no one jealous? It seems not. Some more teaching from David...both George and us. -
A remarkable story, and the author's English gives it both a feeling of reality and a certain charm. Please, don't let an editor mangle the next chapter!
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Yeah, what Tipdin said. That's what I wanted to say.
