sojourn

When I copy and paste... font comes in sometimes in two different font sizes even "select all" and choosing a single font size doesn't fix it.You didn't say.... are you liking it?

Actually that was a trap... to see if anyone ever read my story..... gotchaFuxed and Thanks

Me thinks someone is clowning aruond.. I suspect Wade will prove himself to be buggier than a cheap motel mattress. Bet, the connection goes back to Tyler's wife's "death". Still, Wade is not the type to have left an innocent sexually unscathed..... more please Are we gonna havta wait this side of forever for another chapter?

Linda had arranged everything. Including a two week honeymoon cruise to Alaska. They seldom left their room. The exceptions were two helicopter tours; one to visit a glacier and another to view wildlife. John missed Texas and well… others. As John had told his father, they made their home at the ranch, for almost a month. Until Linda announced she had found the perfect place. John and Linda bought a house on the lake. The house sat on seven wooded acres with a deck that reached the width o

Linda had arranged everything. Including a two week honeymoon cruise to Alaska. They seldom left their room. The exceptions were two helicopter tours; one to visit a glacier and another to view wildlife. John missed Texas and well… others. As John had told his father, they made their home at the ranch, for almost a month. Until Linda announced she had found the perfect place. John and Linda bought a house on the lake. The house sat on seven wooded acres with a deck that reached the width o

ah, the vageries of hte humn sy key..... Great story is this one of those morality tales? It's not that i object it's just that I am too old practice amoral ity. Great story... Cooper seems to vacilate between serving others and self serving... ah youth.... I am sure everyone is cheering for him to somehow move on from this slut wanna be syndrom..... more please

I like Coops torment. It is refreshingly naive. more please

I know a paralell story..... different university.... different .... fraternity..... very similar situation. My guy looked very much like our hero. Compact with... Oh, did I mention it was a much different decade.

I am waiting..... for the jounal to be discovered.... perhaps a few more entries first..... more please

Wow! Tremendous. story.... the relationship, the characters were so real it made me want to pull up "A star is Born". Never seen it. Original only.... age I suppose. excellent writting There were a couple of HMMMMMMMs first the sheep slaughter very graphic. I have slaughtered animals so I know. I felt a dischord... not in the ranchers reaction, any lose is significant, rather the impact on production is something I didn't understand. on 30000 acreas a half dozen ship would seem to have little ecnomic impact. Just a thought.... did I tell you it was a great story

Ok, I got worried when I saw a footnote indicating "character study"..... figured one chapter... I was pleased... In the middle of chapter three I stopped reading and scanned down anxious to verify there was another chapter..... Great Story more please

I don't consider myself a fan of zombie, anything horror...... this was simply a great story... granted I would prefer"a miracle cure" seeing couple was a great touch.... even if they killed them. I ususally sign by saying more please..... I won't but still great story... glad I read it.

Good story. I look at man's eyes first. I meet the best people that way. Good story. Michael will be good for Eli. Eli will learn to live again. Perhaps even love aain. more please

I liked the story. I thought the supporting characters were important on a number of levels. I have known men like Gab, they had rather cut off their right hand than show emotion.... to them emotion equals weakness. I also thought S was the stronger man. He had the courage to love and the strength to leave it behind. Had Gab not showed up S would have carried on with conviction albeit with a broken heart. Great story more please

　 As he closed the door behind him. John tried hard to clear his head. He couldn‘t think. So many thoughts teased his brain. They were all bringing overwhelming pain, rage, heartbreak or sadness. Each was devastating. If considered together they would bring madness. Together they could take his mind. Each relentlessly assailed his brain demanding to be considered. John leaned back against the door, ignoring the flare of pain his asshole telegraphed to his already overloaded brain. “Mary

Ok, I get wrapped up in a good story. I look for the nuances that define individuals. Blake has had a chathartic moment. That's good. Not a cure, still it's good. Ah, the cliff hanger...... This is not just a do or die. This is almost too complex to consider all the variables..... Why was Haze in danger? What is to happen to Blake physically? Already we again see the powerful shift, we have come to expect...... no cathardic episode for him.... Will there be a change in how they regard each other...... confused, denied attraction? Blake is the one I root for. His valiant inner struggle, already makes him a hero, in my eyes. Haze; not so much. You can bring back the girl friends friend. Let he and Blake ride of, er, sail off into the sunset and I would cheer if Blake is good with that. WHERE EVER THE STORY GOES, WRITEFASTERPOSTSOONE!!!!! NOW!!!!!!! HURRY WHEN YOU CAN!!!! more please

I am not convinved that the feelings for tyler have deepened to the point that or hero would ride off, whitout a fight, to his own death. Had he been desperate; maybe. He had occasional release like the rodeo clown. The lack of emphasis leads me to dismiss the connotation that our hero made. As to body count..... seeing is believing. I am sure you intentionally left room for my (and all readers) to have doubts. Obviously; i'm hooked. Can't wait for more to be posted. more please The wait is too long.

Your kind words let me know that my efforts to communicate this story have not been wasted. Thanks

thanks. Your reaction to this chapter is spot on, what I hoped to hear. I will revisit the "flash o pain".Someone who's opinion I respect suggested this chapter was out of keeping with Wylie's character. Thanks to him, I reworked the build to more clearly show Wylie's state of mind. I hope that came across; thanks to DaddyDavek.

LOL! No animals were hurt during the telling of this tale. I am beginning to think, you might be kinky.

John will get back to the present. The cathardic experience has allowed him to view his past in a more detached way. It was all to painful before. Now he can begin to heal.

I encouraged by your kind words. Thanks.

Thanks. Nice to know the implications were picked up.

We both know that love, especialy "gay" love has it's challenges. Wouldst that I met a man and just "lived happily everafter".

One of the things that tell me someone likes a story is when they sarte speculating on future events. Thanks: but you didn't expect to say about the future; even to you. Did you?