I agree that Kevin dropped the L word a little too soon, but he is a teenager, and teenagers do that kind of thing, especially when they are as infatuated as Kevin is. I would like to see some more interaction between these characters, looking forward to checking out the next chapter!!
Medication can be helpful, but it isn't a fix-all, especially with ADHD. Writing, or anything that takes extended amounts of concentration and focus, is going to be a struggle, sometimes even despite medication.
Chad isn't the only one with issues, lol. The attraction between the two is not going away and it's going to be a struggle for both of them, in different ways. It's gonna get exciting! Thanks for the review.
Chad isn't the only one with issues, lol. The attraction between the two is not going away and it's going to be a struggle for both of them, in different ways. It's gonna get exciting! Thanks for the review.
LOL joann! I think that was more Terrasa's doing than Chad's. It's a crazy world and Tibial and Chad are both doing what they were taught was right, even though they have trouble forgetting each other. Glad you are liking it!
LOL joann! I think that was more Terrasa's doing than Chad's. It's a crazy world and Tibial and Chad are both doing what they were taught was right, even though they have trouble forgetting each other. Glad you are liking it!
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the story. Joshua was a fun character to write and it was interesting to see the way he struggled to figure out his feelings. Yeah, the letter was meant for Kaylee, but Joshua wasn't the one who wrote it! Thanks again for reviewing.
That seems to be the other leading theory. It would be really cool if she did, even though I'm not sure how much our boys would appreciate it! Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Here is a link to Editor's forum where it tells you how you can request a beta reader or editor.
https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/topic/32511-to-the-authors/
And JC is right about asking around in chat. It's a little like a playground, so the conversation can get weird, but it is mostly people playing around. Don't be afraid of us. A lot of authors know good editors and beta readers to recommend, so you can always ask one of us.
Good luck.
I don't know Yettie, I think there is a good basis of support for your sneaky suspicion The ritual for men in this world is definitely different and it effects all the men, Tibial and Chad especially. (It'll get really interesting later on). Glad you enjoyed, thanks for reviewing!
Yeah, if I was Tibial I wouldn't want to talk about it either. He does have a very nosy sister and a kind of busybody mother. Chad is trying to be mature about the whole thing, but I think the experience had a strong effect on him too. But yes, things are going to get much more complicated for Tibial soon enough. Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for reviewing
LOL, Stephen, I loved your comment about the local boy. I have never stepped foot on a farm (even though my mom was raised on a chicken farm). I hope the details were accurate. The setting made me feel a little nostalgic, like it's a little part of the world you don't see that much of anymore. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and thank you so much for reviewing, I love seeing what you think.
Hey Mann, thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, even if the time jumps through you off a little. I really liked exploring their love throughout the years, from young teens to older adults. I'm not much for HEAs, but I think Luke and Blake deserved one. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the story.
The second one sounds a lot like the later chapters of Jake's Hand by rec.
https://www.gayauthors.org/story/rec/jakeshand
Biking starts around Ch 6 and the protagonist has a teenage son.
Hey Yettie! Thanks for stopping by! Glad the story interested you. The ritual that young men are forced to endure is pretty twisted too, but it makes for some really interesting scenarios. Thanks for reviewing!