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Nope. It's a rough chapter.
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Thank you. I can't deny "twisted"
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Good instincts
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Somehow I always seem to see the word disturbing associated with this story. But that is okay. One of my favorite books is described the same way and it's better than boring right? I'm glad you find it interesting!
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the characters and the story
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XVI. Complications A short time later, fully bathed and dressed, Brandon and Jordan went down to join Sumna and Jassa at the large round table. Naani set down a platter of fragrant bread and honey, a Charion breakfast staple, along with some fresh fruit and milk. There was a small egg for each of them, a rare treat. Brandon carefully peeled the egg, then stuffed the entire thing in his mouth, relishing the taste. He wasn’t a huge fan of eggs on Earth, but somehow the rarity
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Thanks for reviewing! Everyone is in agreement...Keith needs to go! Glad you are enjoying it!
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Things are definitely looking up!
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Keith is very strange, but very smart. Worth keeping an eye on.
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XV. Prophecy Training with Naani was exhausting. Understanding what Naani was telling him was one thing. Putting it into practice was another case entirely. Editing or censoring the amount of information coming off his brain required a level of concentration that was totally foreign to Brandon. It seemed to come much easier to Jordan. Naani explained that it was because Jordan was a natural introvert—not his exact words, but as close as the language barrier could get—and that made it
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Thank you. Hope you continue to enjoy
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Thank you. This was a hard chapter to write.
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This was wonderful! Thank you for sharing!
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He's thinking alright
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Chapter Five: Sin and Confession
CassieQ commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter Five: Sin and Confession
Keith is a creep, definitely. The relationship between the two of them starts to make more sense later on. -
Chapter Three: Abominations
CassieQ commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter Three: Abominations
It is a little bit. It's a dark path Brandon is looking at. -
Chapter Four: Close Encounters
CassieQ commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter Four: Close Encounters
Disturbing, frightening, creepy...sounds like a winner to me! But seriously, I am glad to hear the word disturbing, because that is often what I aim for. It's a complicated series, no doubt about it, but well worth it (at least I think so). -
Chapter Two: Creators and Enablers
CassieQ commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter Two: Creators and Enablers
I take creepy as a compliment. Thank you! -
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting!
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XIV. Tertiary Brandon’s mind was full of memories; memories of his life, moments caught with family, friends, himself. The screaming panic on the first day of kindergarten, watching his mom leave the room. Dangling upside down from the monkey bars, the sun in his face, blinding him. Curiosity mixed with distaste as his dad lifted him up to see the tiny, smelly bundle in his mom’s arms that was his new baby sister. Nervous knots in his stomach on the first day of high school. His first
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I Don't Understand Why He Didn't Say Something.
CassieQ commented on Nephylim's story chapter in I Don't Understand Why He Didn't Say Something.
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I'm glad you like it and thanks for the review! Only 7 chapters, I'm afraid, no more.
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Glad to see Samuel's revenge met with your approval Thanks for the review!
